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标题: prep - 18 纠结于which的用法 [打印本页]

作者: huanglel 时间: 2011-12-3 18:16
标题: prep - 18 纠结于which的用法
Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whoserepertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocalstyle were influential on generations ofbluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presleyand Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

(A) were influential on generations ofbluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presleyand Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(B) influenced generations of bluegrassartists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose musicdiffered significantly from

(C) was influential to generations ofbluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and JerryGarcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to

(D) was influential to generations ofbluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia,the music of whom differed significantly when compared to

(E) were an influence on generations ofbluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley andJerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of

解释是这样子的：

(A) were influential不如influenced简洁,also an inspiration不如inspired简洁;that included应该用

which或者who代替,改为非限定从句; whose repertory和were influential主谓不一致

(B) 正确, 使用动词influenced和inspired表达更加有效

different in comparison to不符合习惯用法,应该改为bedifferent from

(D) 形容词influential和inspirational不如动词简洁,D选项中的the music of whom不如whose

music简洁.

(E) were and influence不如influenced简洁, was also an inspiration不如inspired简洁; from that of

和his own意思重复

但是我觉得E才是正确答案，因为选项B有歧义，A and B, which...举行中必须保证which指代清晰，选项E因为用了whose music was...明确了指代，但是答案B没有明确，请大牛帮忙分析

作者: HarrisZheng 时间: 2011-12-5 20:18
BE的whose指代是一样的啊
E选项that of是不能加的后面已经是his了

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