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标题: GWD-6-Q31我有新看法,大家进来看看 [打印本页]

作者: 黄宋菠菜    时间: 2011-11-28 16:36
标题: GWD-6-Q31我有新看法,大家进来看看
(1)   GWD-6-Q31:The fact of some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly andothers looking quite dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlookedfeature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably on a spectrumof genetic relatedness.

  1. The fact of     [CH1] some     fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite     dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of     fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably
  • That some fraternal twins resemble each other greatly while others     look quite dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlooked     feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely that they vary considerably
  • With some     fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite     dissimilar, it [CH2] highlights     an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs,     namely considerable variation
  • With some     fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite     dissimilar, it is a fact that highlights an interesting and often     overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely a considerable     variation[CH3]
  • Because     some fraternal twins resemble each other greatly and others look quite     dissimilar, this fact highlights an interesting and often overlooked     feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably[CH4]
    [CH1]应该用that不用of,强调整体,作fact的同位语


    [CH2]指代不清,没有后置的主语从句


    [CH3]改变了句意,with里的词是修饰fact的,it作形式主语,指代后面的that从句


    [CH4]没有连接词,run-on句子




    上面说d项it指代有问题,我觉得不对啊,这是强调句好像,it不指代任何东西啊,大家觉得呢?
    作者: 黄宋菠菜    时间: 2011-11-28 19:24
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    作者: 黄宋菠菜    时间: 2011-11-29 10:27
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    作者: 黄宋菠菜    时间: 2011-11-29 15:00
    太弱智了吗
    作者: demorgan    时间: 2011-12-19 10:23
    一点不弱,同问




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