When facing the problem that who should make the important decision, either parents or children themselves, people have to come to the question of who can make the right and beneficial decision. Personally, I agree with the statement that an important decision should be made by the parents. I think parents are the only right people to make a big decision for their children.
First, children are not mature enough in thought to make an important decision. Some teenagers may lack enough social experience to make a correct decision; some teenagers may be too young to distinguish goodness from evil; and some teenagers may be easily confused by the facial appearance. On the other hand, however, their parents have already gained enough experience to deal with different problems in different situations. Then, they can easily tell the nature of a problem and come to a right decision. Consequently, it seems to be much safer to let the parents make important decisions for their children.
Second, parents can help to make the decision that is beneficial to their children in a long run. Because of the limitation of their age and experience, children can probably just see the present but not the future. As a result, the decision they make may turn out to be lacking of consideration, probably, 10 years later. Parents, however, usually make the decision that will do good to their children in a long run. Sometimes, for instance, the children will complain about sitting in front of the piano for hours and keeping playing the boring exercise tune over and over again. What they want to do is only playing outside with friends. But when they grow up, ironically, they will find that playing piano is a useful skill and interesting hobby which can bring fun and happiness to people.
呵呵，和逵逵写的是同一篇【逵逵写作文2.0】哦～不知道是巧合还是比较，一个正方，一个反方～
写的不错，就是格式要顶格～
互相交流哦～
谢谢。
文章总体结构和立意都不错，语法上错误很少，是一篇比较好的文章。我发现作者很喜欢将副词插在长句中间运用，本来也没什么不妥，但是出现的次数好像过多，使得句式显得单一。红字的这句话和后面句子在语法上看来有点不妥。
希望楼主不断进步，更上一层楼！
呵呵，和逵逵写的是同一篇【逵逵写作文2.0】哦～不知道是巧合还是比较，一个正方，一个反方～
写的不错，就是格式要顶格～
互相交流哦～
谢谢。
是吗？那么巧，那我赶快去学习下【逵逵写作文2.0】，学点经验…… 我之前没看过那篇文章，纯属巧合。
请问格式一定要顶格吗？
随便说几句
1 distinguish goodness from evil 可考虑改为 tell goodness from evil
2 be easily confused by the facial appearance 可考虑改为be easily confused by the exteriority
格式还是用顶格的比较好。
加油！
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