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标题: 求助GWD-7-20 [打印本页]

作者: 荞麦皮    时间: 2011-11-8 19:50
标题: 求助GWD-7-20
The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at TellHamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administeredcomplex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arisingsimultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states ofsouthern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.A. that were [CH1] cut into a     500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for     centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle     East that were arising simultaneously with but
B. that were [CH2] cut into a     500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria,     yields strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in     northern regions of the Middle East
were     arising simultaneously with but also

C. having been     cut [CH3] into a     500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that     centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle     East were arising simultaneously but
D. cut into a     500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria,     yields
[CH4] strong     evidence of centrally administered complex societies in northern regions     of the Middle East arising simultaneously     but also
E. cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded     strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern     regions of the Middle East arose simultaneously with but
[CH1]罗嗦

[CH2]罗嗦


[CH3]白勇语法说完成时态不能作定语


[CH4]单复数错误,evidence后面需要接that的同位语,of表示从属,错

此处的thatwere 为什么可以省略?这个算不算非限定性从句呢?
最纠结的就是神马wordy and awkward。。
具体什么时候名词后边的that可以省略呢?
作者: ainiAnnie    时间: 2012-2-8 00:56
awkward笨拙的,就是拗口,读起来不顺,也可以理解为不符合语言习惯
wordy唠叨的,不简洁;应该是重复使用相同意思的单词




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