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标题: Issue 114 Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shift in popular op [打印本页]

作者: hom0913 时间: 2011-11-2 10:18
标题: Issue 114 Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shift in popular op

A great leader plays an important role in a company,in a government, and always in every level of society. Which characters shouldhave a leader to being a great leader? According the statement, I could implythat a great leader who has their own principle which uneasily impact by othersmight to success. I concede that in some field leader should rely on their ownopinion to make decision. Meanwhile, we also should consider other factors indifferent circumstance to measure the greatness of leader.

In some field, a leader`s idea would influence the developmentof whole company even the entire field. This idea should change people`s liferather be changed by popular opinion. There is a supporting example toillustrate that. Steve Jobs, who is the founder of the most influent company—Apple,is a person who has a great charisma and leadership. And he is the person whohas great principle which uneasily impacted by others. Because of his ownprinciple, under his leading, Apple provided us a series of new things fromI-pod to I-phone. So we can see that the leader who has own view might made agreat achievement.

Otherwise, is there only a leader who has ownprinciple will accomplish more than other leaders? I don`t think so. In somefield, the success of company or enterprise relies on the popular opinion suchas managing a restaurant. The greatest manager of restaurant is the one whosatisfies most people`s taste and changes their taste quickly according theresponse of popular custom`s opinion. As some proverb said: “Customer is theGod.” This proverb fully illustrates theimportant of popular opinion. The leader who could follow this proverb goodmight also made great accomplishment in many field.

Meanwhile, it is improper that a leader only considershis idea or shifted and influenced easily by others opinion. Suppose that aproduce of a company only satisfies the leader`s demands or just follows theircustoms` demands, it is hard to image that the produce would be success. At thesame reason, a government leader, especially, should care about the popularopinion and should have a principle that forcing the leader makes a decision tobenefit most people rather only benefit few one.

All in all, from theevidence provided above, I concede that a leader should have his own idea whichcould make the company he leaded developing rapidly. In some field, such as ina restaurant, leader should more consider the popular opinion in other to maketheir taste more fit to most people. And in some case, considering the popularopinion and having own principle is same important to leader. Thus, indifferent situation whether a leader could make accomplishment is unrelated towhether he could be easily and quickly impact by popular opinion.

作者: ppguo 时间: 2011-11-2 10:54
http://forum.chasedream.com/GRE_Prep/thread-600429-1-1.html
http://forum.chasedream.com/GRE_Prep/thread-600745-1-1.html

这是冷月写的两篇，很多人都拍了。

作者: ppguo 时间: 2011-11-2 10:57
错了，发错地方了。不好意思。

作者: ppguo 时间: 2011-11-2 11:06
http://forum.chasedream.com/GRE_Prep/thread-602215-1-1.html?extparms=ThreadCatalogID%3d70%26page%3d1

这个是以前别人写的。

作者: ppguo 时间: 2011-11-2 11:14
这个立场到挺新颖的。如果你以后把中文提纲写在开头，会有更多人来拍的。
你的立场是：
1. 在公司里面，领导人的决定很重要
2. 在餐馆里面，顾客的需求更重要
3. 在其他一些场合，这两者都很重要。

要重重拍了啊。这个写法有点跑题。你写的文章主旨是：领导人是应该更多坚持自己的意见呢，还是应该多听听别人的意见。跟题目是不一样的，题目的关键词是”quickly and easily influenced by shift“。领导人的想法应不应该受大众左右。

作者: hom0913 时间: 2011-11-2 12:20
谢谢指点~
我也感觉有点跑题~
有时候写Issue，不知道如何抓住关键词。
我个人认为，在写这篇文章的时候，我重点写了不是Any leader would accomplish a little, 得分领域，还有是否顺应大众的情况下也能取得成就。
1、有些领域，领导坚持自己的想法，会取得成功，如IT；
2、有些领域，领导时刻关注大众的动态，并根据大众的理念，迅速地改变策略，也会取得成功，如服务业；
3、而在政治领域，领导既要关注大众的想法，更要有自己的理念，才能在满足大众利益的情况下，也能取得成功。

以上就是我写本片Issue的主题思路，不知道这样解释是不是还有点跑题？

个人感觉在写ISSUE ，跑题不跑题不知道如何区分？

作者: hom0913 时间: 2011-11-2 12:22
还有就是语言感觉不够好，有大侠多多指点下~~

作者: ppguo 时间: 2011-11-3 23:33
如果你这么解释，就没有那么跑题了。但是单单看你写的，觉得跟你的解释不是完全一致。
语言的话，一定要多看看别人的范文。

作者: 冷月钟笛 时间: 2011-11-4 14:01
感觉很不错啊~ 餐厅顾客是上帝的角度不错~
归纳细致点的话：
1. 领袖需要决断力才能成功
2. 有时大众的思路是对的，听听对leadership有好处

第三点感觉有点不妥，似乎求折衷，但又没说透：领袖不能独断是因为他们可能是错的，一意孤行没有好下场；而只听大众想法没主见也不行。所以真正的好领袖是能够坚持原则，同时又能虚心听取别人意见做出最明智选择的领袖~

语言上有些小奇怪，整体还算通顺~ 可圈可点第一篇

作者: hom0913 时间: 2011-11-5 18:08
谢谢各位大侠指点！！

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