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标题: 我想表达的苦于水平不够无法表达的一句话，求NN指导~~ [打印本页]

作者: 半阙 时间: 2011-10-30 19:38
标题: 我想表达的苦于水平不够无法表达的一句话，求NN指导~~
The following appeared in the editorial section of a local newspaper.

“In the first four years that Montoya has served as mayor of the city of San Perdito, the population has decreased and the unemployment rate has increased. Two businesses have closed for each new business that has opened. Under Varro, who served as mayor for four years before Montoya, the unemployment rate decreased and the population increased. Clearly, the residents of San Perdito would be best served if they voted Montoya out of office and reelected Varro.”

这个是本月寂静里的第二题，我想说“population increased不能成为评估S地居民是不是被severd很好的一个有效指标“，英文怎么表达呢？想了半天没想出一个合理的表达方式，求NN指点呀~~

还有一句话”我们只能说。。。“除了表达成”we can only say that 。。。“还有别的变体么？换换表达方式看北美老头们上去养眼一点~~~

话说今天人生中的第一篇Argument写了一个小时十五分钟啊，还有半个月考的孩纸伤不起。。。

作者: 半阙 时间: 2011-10-31 11:48
NN们帮帮忙呀~~快考试了~~

作者: 半阙 时间: 2011-11-1 17:07
继续呼唤NN~~~

作者: 小困蛇 时间: 2011-11-2 22:30
来不及看，先马克下

作者: 半阙 时间: 2011-11-3 14:46

来不及看，先马克下

-- by 会员小困蛇 (2011/11/2 22:30:44)

作者: noemiezz 时间: 2011-11-8 05:32
没有时间看你的题目，就纯粹给你翻译一下你想要的那句中文句子:The increase of population could not be a effective index showing if the residents in S city are well served.

作者: noemiezz 时间: 2011-11-8 05:40
改下我自己写的，an effective index to show

作者: 半阙 时间: 2011-11-8 09:59

没有时间看你的题目，就纯粹给你翻译一下你想要的那句中文句子:The increase of population could not be a effective index showing if the residents in S city are well served.

-- by 会员 noemiezz (2011/11/8 5:32:57)

恩~谢谢啦~不过这里的if the residents...if 是不是应该改为whether the residents..... GMAT中if 只表示如果的含义的~~

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