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标题: 求教!!一个关于有连词的run-on句子的问题——prep08 186 [打印本页]

作者: MyrticeTAN    时间: 2011-10-28 09:56
标题: 求教!!一个关于有连词的run-on句子的问题——prep08 186
SVO,but + 介宾结构,SVO.这样的句子是run-on句子么????

prep08语法笔记里186题
Laos has a land area about the same as Great Britain but only 4 million in population, where many are members of hill tribes ensconced in the virtually inaccessible mountain valleys of the north.
A. about the same as Great Britain but only 4 million in population, where many
B. of about the same size as Great Britain is, but in Laos there is a population of only 4 million, and many
C. that is about the same size as Great Britain's land area, but in Laos with a population of only 4 million people, many of them
D. comparable to the size of Great Britain, but only 4 million in population, and many
E. comparable to that of Great Britain but a population of only 4 million people, many of whom

对C的解释是
C. 定语从句wordy,用形容词短语就可以,更加简洁,而且意思没减少;land area的重复使用也累赘;population为抽象名词,them指代不明;but后面不成句子,无法与前面平行; with a population of only 4 million限定性修饰Laos错误,显得有很多个Laos。

但是BUT后面不是有many of them are……的完整句子么?不能是后面两句是一个整体吗?

等待NN解答~谢谢




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