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标题: SC悬赏令第三季Leader火热招募中!!! [打印本页]

作者: 毛毛carina    时间: 2011-10-19 17:35
标题: SC悬赏令第三季Leader火热招募中!!!

To be a leader!To achieve more!

2011年9月,我们第一次在语法区举办大家做题、版主点评的每日活动,起名为“SC悬赏令”。
2011年10月,在度过一个十一黄金周后,第二季悬赏令再度归来,依然由版主领头,大家共同参与。
2011年11月,第三季活动必将如期而至,可不同的是,领头羊的位置将交由你们!

在参与了两季活动之后,面对主楼的点评,你心中有没有一丝丝跃跃欲试?
有没有想过除了仅仅参加活动、每天跟踪做题以外,其实自己还可以做得更多、更好?
一个强大的SC杀手,不仅仅是能够做对题目,还应该拥有一种定力,在各种角度解题思路的轰炸中,依然能滤清思路,坚定自己的选择。
肩上多一份责任,便会多一份动力去寻找真相,而不仅仅满足于表面功夫。

现下,我们的SC悬赏令将招募两位志愿者,作为第三季活动的leader。

作为leader的任务:
1,晚上9点至次日早上11点之间,按照规定格式发布新题。
2,在题目发布36小时之后,或者回复超过10帖之后(以较晚的时间为准),发布题目点评、思维点评、精华帖1-3个并给出理由。

作为leader的奖励:
当季活动结束后,leader奖励积分6704分(录取offer!O(∩_∩)O)

招募对象:
ChaseDream论坛会员,要求每天有一定的上网时间完成工作。只要你有信心有热情,无论是否考过GMAT都可以。

选拔流程:
1,有兴趣的同学可以跟帖报名,格式如下:
论坛ID:
是否参加过悬赏令:
是否考过GMAT(如果愿意,请写上分数):

2,针对以下这一题,在回帖中写一份题目点评,可参照之前的悬赏令帖。
Municipal governments are beginning to confront the growing pension liabilities; this leads local politicians throughout the country to become increasingly vocal about restraining costs and limiting services.

A the growing pension liabilities; this leads
B their growing pension liabilities; leading
C the growth in their pension liabilities, which leads
D their growing pension liabilities, leading
E their growing pension liabilities, that leads

3,报名回帖截止时间为10月28日24点。Aeo、superbat和我三位版主将投票选出两位leader。

4,10月30日发新帖公布名单,并由我与新上任leader联系。

谁将成为新的领头羊?谁将从我们手中接过交接棒?欢迎你们的参与!
敬请期待!!


作者: glhelr    时间: 2011-10-20 14:36
沙发~好多分呀
作者: 毛毛carina    时间: 2011-10-20 14:47
沙发~好多分呀
-- by 会员 glhelr (2011/10/20 14:36:29)



板凳……还木有人报名,好桑呜呜呜
作者: superbat28    时间: 2011-10-20 15:06
有个人弱弱感觉还没开始展开工作呢。。。
毛毛姐就开始招新了
这里也有个桑心的~5555,哈哈哈
作者: 毛毛carina    时间: 2011-10-20 15:10
有个人弱弱感觉还没开始展开工作呢。。。
毛毛姐就开始招新了
这里也有个桑心的~5555,哈哈哈
-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/10/20 15:06:10)



那招不到人就交给你了额~~~~(>_<)~~~~
作者: daisyの小夢想    时间: 2011-10-20 23:05
我来顶起!! 毛毛姐之前做得太好了~~ 这可是重量级难度挑战。。爱挑战的战士快来报名吧^^
作者: glhelr    时间: 2011-10-21 00:01
我来顶起!! 毛毛姐之前做得太好了~~ 这可是重量级难度挑战。。爱挑战的战士快来报名吧^^
-- by 会员 daisyの小夢想 (2011/10/20 23:05:11)

我觉得daisy说的对额....是你前两季做的太好了....别人不敢做了哈哈~
作者: glhelr    时间: 2011-10-21 00:01
刚由于网络问题发重了....当我人工顶顶吧....这次就不收费了
作者: maxiv    时间: 2011-10-21 02:19
这是肿么了
作者: Sophia001    时间: 2011-10-21 06:53
我想报名,但是我实在对自己的实力木有信心啊。
作者: Sophia001    时间: 2011-10-21 08:39
Municipal governments are beginning to confront the growing pension liabilities; this leads local politicians throughout the country to become increasingly vocal about restraining costs and limiting services.

   A the growing pension liabilities; this leads
   B their growing pension liabilities; leading
   C the growth in their pension liabilities, which leads
   D their growing pension liabilities, leading
   E their growing pension liabilities, that leads
选项解析:
A )This choice contains a confusing pron: "this"  refers to "liabilities" or the former sentence? Usually it refers the the closest noun. But if "this" refers to "liabilities" , the verb "leads" is incorrect. And in GMAT, no pron can represent
a sentence.
B)This choice contains an incorrect division: the sentences before and after semicolon should be whole sentences separately. This can be used for quick choice.
C)"Which" refers to "growth". But there is a logical flaw that "growth" is the subject of the last sentence. It is the action,"Governments confront ...liabilities", that "leads" the "politicians....". It is a common incorrect choice for test takers. Be careful! What's more, the "growth in ...."is wordy.
D)Correct. “leading" is an accompanying adverbial clause, which indicates something that happens together with the main sentence. But I have a puzzle that the logical subject of "leading" should be the subject of the main sentence, which is "government". Is that reasonable?
E) This choice is also incorrect in the pron "that" as choice A. And the comma means there is only one whole sentence, but choice E does not.
题目点评:
本题涉及主句,分句的区分,以及代词指代和修饰句子的问题。
     首先看到分号要反应到应该有两个完整的句子在分号前后,查看是否如此,然后排除B,E。
    其次看到有which 和伴随状语,一定要仔细分析句子逻辑结构。如果后一句的关系和前一句只是部分关联(比如先行词,或者某个名词)可以考虑非限制性定语从句;如果后一句和前一句的动词有关联(换句话说和前一句的动作发生有关联),则考虑伴随状语从句,排除C。
    最后,用代词指代排除A。
作者: CrackingGMAC    时间: 2011-10-21 09:06
答案明显是D
作者: crack25    时间: 2011-10-24 23:39
我错了,毛毛,之前搞错了,我还以为是别的,发贴的时候没弄好,抱歉,这个我也来插一脚,之前的帖子我错了。TT

Municipal governments are beginning to confront the growing pension liabilities; this leads local politicians throughout the country to become increasingly vocal about restraining costs and limiting services.
A the growing pension liabilities; this leads
B their growing pension liabilities; leading
C the growth in their pension liabilities, which leads
D their growing pension liabilities, leading
E their growing pension liabilities, that leads
MEANING: governments begin to confront their growing pension liabilities. ---> leading to a result(=local politicians throughout the country to become increasingly vocal about restraining costs and limiting services.)
so, directly choose D
from GRAMMAR:
in A: firstly, this is wrong, without modifers, this can not exist independently. What 's more, I think liabilities is plural so this is single can not represent growing pension liabilities. Anyway, A is wrong technically.
in B: fisrtly, when ; appear,  you should know ;--> whole sentences separately must exist after ;
in C : leads can not follow liabilities. and which can not refer the whole sentence before.
inE :that is odd, and if this is a essential sentence, well ",that" is wrong. comma should not appear here. what is more, from meaning, that make similar mistake like this in A
SO, STILL CHOOSE D
作者: superbat28    时间: 2011-10-25 09:45
来人吧~来人吧~~~~

作者: 毛毛carina    时间: 2011-10-25 10:18
我错了,毛毛,之前搞错了,我还以为是别的,发贴的时候没弄好,抱歉,这个我也来插一脚,之前的帖子我错了。TT

Municipal governments are beginning to confront the growing pension liabilities; this leads local politicians throughout the country to become increasingly vocal about restraining costs and limiting services.
A the growing pension liabilities; this leads
B their growing pension liabilities; leading
C the growth in their pension liabilities, which leads
D their growing pension liabilities, leading
E their growing pension liabilities, that leads
MEANING: governments begin to confront their growing pension liabilities. ---> leading to a result(=local politicians throughout the country to become increasingly vocal about restraining costs and limiting services.)
so, directly choose D
from GRAMMAR:
in A: firstly, this is wrong, without modifers, this can not exist independently. What 's more, I think liabilities is plural so this is single can not represent growing pension liabilities. Anyway, A is wrong technically.
in B: fisrtly, when ; appear,  you should know ;--> whole sentences separately must exist after ;
in C : leads can not follow liabilities. and which can not refer the whole sentence before.
inE :that is odd, and if this is a essential sentence, well ",that" is wrong. comma should not appear here. what is more, from meaning, that make similar mistake like this in A
SO, STILL CHOOSE D
-- by 会员 crack25 (2011/10/24 23:39:45)



啥?啊哈哈欢迎参加!!!
作者: Sophia001    时间: 2011-10-25 11:54
来人吧~来人吧~~~~
-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/10/25 9:45:33)


bat,我这几天在看你的心经,觉得对逻辑很有帮助。谢谢
作者: 毛毛carina    时间: 2011-10-25 12:00
来人吧~来人吧~~~~
-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/10/25 9:45:33)



bat,我这几天在看你的心经,觉得对逻辑很有帮助。谢谢
-- by 会员 Sophia001 (2011/10/25 11:54:25)



batbat很牛奔的,有木有~~~
作者: maxiv    时间: 2011-10-25 12:34
想参加

但水平不足怎么办哪
作者: 毛毛carina    时间: 2011-10-25 12:40
想参加

但水平不足怎么办哪
-- by 会员 maxiv (2011/10/25 12:34:51)



先试试!~~要有信心
作者: sanlingjie    时间: 2011-10-25 16:46
我来!
作者: sanlingjie    时间: 2011-10-25 16:47
毛毛姐,我来弄!我一定能弄好的!
作者: sanlingjie    时间: 2011-10-25 16:47
看到这招募,顿时激动地语无伦次!
作者: 毛毛carina    时间: 2011-10-25 17:01
看到这招募,顿时激动地语无伦次!
-- by 会员 sanlingjie (2011/10/25 16:47:42)



孩纸,表激动,按照格式报名撒
作者: sanlingjie    时间: 2011-10-25 17:07
1. 论坛ID:sanlingjie

参加过几的悬赏令,题我都做对了。。。但是毛毛姐没给我颁奖~~~(因为我没详细写分析)



前几天刚考完G,过7了,具体就不说了。。。面对高手如林。。不好意思。。。


2. Municipal governments are beginning to confront the growing pension liabilities; this leads local politicians throughout the country to become increasingly vocal about restraining costs and limiting services.

A the growing pension liabilities; this leads
B their growing pension liabilities; leading
C the growth in their pension liabilities, which leads
D their growing pension liabilities, leading
E their growing pension liabilities, that leads


此题正确答案应该为D

A选项最严重的错误为this,因为this,that,these,those这类的指示代词是不能单独使用的,这个语法点在manhattan里有专门讲到;另外这里的the用的也不好,the表示特指后者指前面提到过的人或事,但是这里的growing pension liabilities前面并未曾出现

B选项分号后面的用了leading,形成了run-on sentence或者sentence segment,缺少主语和谓语。

C选项首先的错误是which指代不清,有指代liabilities的嫌疑,而且the growth in their pension liabilities不如 their growing pension liabilities简洁。

D选项正确,leading跟在逗号后面,作伴随结构

E选项最严重的错误为that是不能引导非限制性定语从句的,在GMAT中,目前的语法是规定which只能引导非限制性定语从句,而that只能引导限制性定语从句。其实OG的原文是说which引导限制性定语从句有争议。但是既然有争议,那么GMAC出题的时候就不会把which引导限制性定语从句当正确选项。而that不能引导非限制性定语从句这个是毫无疑问的。

回答完毕!
作者: superbat28    时间: 2011-10-26 08:20
来人吧~来人吧~~~~
-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/10/25 9:45:33)




bat,我这几天在看你的心经,觉得对逻辑很有帮助。谢谢
-- by 会员 Sophia001 (2011/10/25 11:54:25)




batbat很牛奔的,有木有~~~
-- by 会员 毛毛carina (2011/10/25 12:00:36)



To 毛毛姐~您饶了我吧~我就是一个小毛孩~跟随毛毛姐的小毛孩~hiahia

To sophia001~好吧,大家都说逻辑有帮助。。呃。。但我貌似还是觉得当初我逻辑最弱的弱弱的说。。所以这个故事告诉我们,要勇于面对自己的弱项~加油撒~~~
作者: superbat28    时间: 2011-10-26 08:21
看到这招募,顿时激动地语无伦次!
-- by 会员 sanlingjie (2011/10/25 16:47:42)



先恭喜sanlingjie上七~哇咔~悬赏令的事,我看好你哟~
作者: sanlingjie    时间: 2011-10-26 09:31
看到这招募,顿时激动地语无伦次!
-- by 会员 sanlingjie (2011/10/25 16:47:42)




先恭喜sanlingjie上七~哇咔~悬赏令的事,我看好你哟~
-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/10/26 8:21:30)



哇哈哈,太感谢版主同志了。。。。。。。
作者: cq505836696    时间: 2011-10-28 17:10
chasedream ID:cq505836696
之前没有参加过悬赏令只帮忙整理过寂静
另外GMAt参加过一次,但是以非常低得分数惨败
第二季有跟过毛毛姐的帖子,觉得毛毛姐的分析好精辟啊,所以想自己尝试一下去做,不过还是很怕被毛毛姐敲死的。。。。
作者: 毛毛carina    时间: 2011-10-28 17:17
chasedream ID:cq505836696
之前没有参加过悬赏令只帮忙整理过寂静
另外GMAt参加过一次,但是以非常低得分数惨败
第二季有跟过毛毛姐的帖子,觉得毛毛姐的分析好精辟啊,所以想自己尝试一下去做,不过还是很怕被毛毛姐敲死的。。。。
-- by 会员 cq505836696 (2011/10/28 17:10:43)



赶脚我是母老虎~~~~(>_<)~~~~
作者: CHRISTINE2010    时间: 2011-11-7 23:03
这个实力挑战。。。。。。完完全全大鸭梨级任务啊~~~万一搞得不好。。。自己丢面子是小事,误了大家的正业是大事~~~本人小虾米。。。。
作者: CHRISTINE2010    时间: 2011-11-7 23:05
完全对实力木有信心,但是小的想举手。。。
作者: 毛毛carina    时间: 2011-11-8 11:56
完全对实力木有信心,但是小的想举手。。。
-- by 会员 CHRISTINE2010 (2011/11/7 23:05:21)



今天开始第三季的了哇~~新leader上任,可以跟进每天做题,然后看看自己有木有信心做好leader,如果有,再来找我报名也是ok滴
作者: sophielion    时间: 2011-12-6 14:13
Municipal governments are beginning to confront the growing pension liabilities; this leads local politicians throughout the country to become increasingly vocal about restraining costs and limiting services.
A the growing pension liabilities; this leads
B their growing pension liabilities; leading
C the growth in their pension liabilities, which leads
D their growing pension liabilities, leading
E their growing pension liabilities, that leads
选D吖,
句意为: 市政府开始面临正在增长的养老金义务,(这个现象)导致了... ...

A,首先this不可裸奔,this后面加n是可以的. 但是lead的主语应该是前面那句话,即这个现象,而不是liabilities,所以即便改成those也是错的。
B.,分号的用法,前后必须是句子。
C,首先,重心是the growth ,而不是liabilities,改变了逻辑重心。 然后which,不可指代整个句子,lead的单复数错误。
D,符合句意,简洁正确
E,that如果是限定修饰则前面不应该有逗号。 同时leads犯了单复数错误。 好,即便逗号改成their growing pension liabilities that lead也不对, 因为that lead 变成了修饰liabilities,改变了句子本来想表达的逻辑意思。同A
作者: sophielion    时间: 2011-12-6 14:14
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