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作者: jjd82223193    时间: 2011-10-15 14:53
标题: ISSUE 26 球拍
万分感谢
The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life
prevent people from developing into truly strong
and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to
which you agree or disagree with the statement and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In
developing and supporting your position, you should
consider ways in which the statement might or
might not hold true and explain how these
considerations shape your response.


In this era of rapid social and technological change, the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life can have both positive and negative effects on the people's development.
To begin with,I concede that modern life easily lead people to a lazy and passive life.In china there are a number of people ,whose parents are millionair,enjoying luxurious life,thus they do not need to worry about the future.On this respect luxurity and convenience of contemporary life is harmful and prevent people become strong.
A tough life always inspires the people to think of ways to make it better by working hard, from which they become strong and independent. Take coummunists in the war time in china as an example,they have such solid blief of the vicotry in the realism of socialism despite of the mightness of the enemy.It is the spirit of fearless of death that thousands of member chose self-sacrifies in order to keep the secret of the party,this in turn inspires more of the next generation.Though they led the toughest life in the conditon of  vast poverty in old China,their thought is profound enough to lead them to be strong to create the history and be indepent never to surrender to the enemy.
However,there are still many people who grow up with the luxuries and conveniences but pursuit their goal and make meaningful things to become stronger and more independent.For instance,a large number of sicentists sitting in the convinent laboratories works day after day can also produce the significant research result that facilitate the devlopment of  the whole society. The reason for their success,as far as I'm concerned, is the strong averness of responsibility and curiousity that lead them to prusue the truth in sicence tirelessly.
On the other hand,a poor lacking enough  opportunities for education,he or she would likely to be flatter and to obey the destiny.
       Take both into conisderation,the luxuries and conveniences of life is a doubt-edge sword.In the real state,it is the spirit or thought that make people distinguish with the vast common people and make contribution to the whole society.
作者: ppguo    时间: 2011-10-16 11:27
这篇看到版上有人写过,点击链接可以参考。
http://forum.chasedream.com/GRE_Prep/thread-597916-1-1.html

有几点哦,
1. 这里说的现代人奢侈的生活方式,是比较古代人而言,大部分现代人的生活模式,不是很少一部分富人的生活模式。这个可能对中国人不好理解,在美国,大多数人属于中产阶层,生活比较富裕。
2. 政治是很敏感的话题,用party 的例子有很大的风险性。而且,这个例子也不具有普适性,很多发达国家的统治者并没有都很腐败堕落。
3. 总共字数有多少啊?
作者: 冷月钟笛    时间: 2011-10-17 21:38
字数300+,建议增加~
有些观点太过主观,缺乏论证,“不论正的观点即偏见”,建议完善~ 如条件优渥的生活与艰苦的生活条件如何导致你说的结果~




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