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标题: 自娱自乐，发现CD上发Yale的online chat 里的Disclaimer有语法错误 [打印本页]

作者: CrackingGMAC 时间: 2011-9-25 17:49
标题: 自娱自乐，发现CD上发Yale的online chat 里的Disclaimer有语法错误
Disclaimer:

The speaker is not officially associated with the Yale SOM MBA Admissions Committee or any member in the committee. The views expressed during the online chat are solely those of the speakers and do not reflect the views of the Committee. The speakers assume no responsibility regarding the accuracy of the information that is provided during this event and accepts no responsibility for any consequences of their use.

（1）the "speaker"， as a subject ，is not always consistent .
(2) subject-verb arrgement is violated ; "speakers assume..." is parallel with "...and accepts", since the subject , "speakers", is plural ,and thus requires a plural verb form.
(3) the usage of "their" is ambiguous since it does not have a clear antecedence.

娱乐一下大家，没有恶意。希望整理CDNEWS的仁兄和版主不要见怪。哈哈

作者: steven 时间: 2011-9-25 18:29
感谢指正，已经将您提出的问题修改更新。预祝国庆快乐，备考顺利！

作者: CrackingGMAC 时间: 2011-9-26 14:39
Nice move !
其实一开始也没刻意要指正或怎样，不过现在看来CD确实是个很不错的地方！继续发扬哦！国庆同乐.
WE ARE CDER.

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