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作者: 毛毛carina 时间: 2011-9-5 09:28
标题: Season 1——manhattan 4(Underground Railroad)(已结贴)
4. Before the Civil War, Harriet Tubman, along with other former slaves and white abolitionists, helped create what had become known as the Underground Railroad, and were responsible for leading hundreds, if not thousands, of slaves to freedom.
A. had become known as the Underground Railroad, and were
B. would become known as the Underground Railroad, and were
C. had become known as the Underground Railroad, and was
D. has been becoming known as the Underground Railroad, and was
E. would become known as the Underground Railroad, and was

选项解析：
The original sentence contains two flaws. First, "what hadbecome known as the Underground Railroad" is incorrectly in the pastperfect tense ("had become"). The past perfect is used to describe apast event that occurred before another past event. In this case, however, the"Underground Railroad" did not become known as such (or known asanything at all) until after it was created, and there is no past action thatoccurs afterward that would justify the use of the past perfect tense. Second,the subject of the sentence is "Harriet Tubman" only; phrases such as"along with," "accompanied by," and "aswell as" do not create plural subjects (only "and" allows forthe formation of a plural subject). Yet, the verb used in the original sentenceis "were," which suggests a plural subject. Instead, the correct verbform "was" is necessary in order to agree with the singular subject"Harriet Tubman."
(A) This choice is incorrect as it repeats the original sentence.
(B) This choice corrects the verb tense by replacing the pastperfect with the conditional "would become known" (used to expressthe future from the point of view of the past: "I said yesterday that Iwould go to the store today.") However, it does not correct thesubject-verb agreement problem (retaining "were").
(C) This choice does not correct the verb tense issue, retainingthe incorrect past perfect tense. It does correct the subject-verb agreement byreplacing "were" with "was."
(D) This choice uses the incorrect and awkward verb phrase"has been becoming," which incorrectly suggests that the labeling ofthe Underground Railroad continues to the present day. However, it does correctthe subject-verb agreement by replacing "were" with "was."
(E) CORRECT.This choice corrects the verb tense by replacing "hadbecome" with "would become." Moreover, it corrects thesubject-verb agreement issue by replacing "were" with"was."

题目点评：
本题涉及考点：主谓一致，时态
通过对比选项可以迅速发现两个考点，“主谓一致”明显比“时态”来得简单和明确，所以先从这个入手。HarrietTubman是一个人名，along with并不构成复数主语，类似的还有as well as，accompanied by（这个细节很少人关注到，大家想要详细了解，请参考manhattanSC 关于主谓一致的章节），所以谓语动词用单数，迅速排除了A,B。
剩下C,D,E三个选项，一个过去完成时，一个现在完成进行时，一个过去将来时。未划线部分helped是过去式，如果known as 用过去完成时，意思是这个组织先以UR著称，才成立，逻辑意思不对，排除C选项。
D选项中使用现在完成进行时也不对。OG 中对此时态的描述是“Present perfect progressive: Used withhave been or has been, this verb tense describes something that began in the past, continues into thepresent, and may continue into the future.”
最后剩下E选项。known as theUnderground Railroad 是用来说明“what”的修饰成分，使用过去将来时恰到好处的表达了“主人公HT建立了一个组织，正是在当下的将来以UundergroundRailroad知名的一个组织。” Use"would" to express future from the point of view of the past.

补充知识点：
Be known as 以……知名，作为……而闻名
Be known for 因为……而闻名

思维点评：
1. “我也犹豫E了..但是觉得是在create之前就知道这个的名字了吧?!”——rainzyx23
其实不用纠结于哪个在前，确实一样东西也有可能没有create就广为人知了，但是had become known用了过去完成时的含义是：create出来以后，突然大家都不知道那个东东叫Underground Railroad了。。另外一般的逻辑顺序应该是“先create，然后大家口耳相传以后，某个称呼就广为人知了起来…”（中间可能换过很多种称呼）。
2. “D has beenbecoming 时态混乱，首先不能用has，这个发生在过去，应该用过去时。Been becoming是被动。但是known as这个词组就是主动表被动,再用被动时态就是awkward.”——纳丁Cat
这个理解不正确噢，首先并不是所有发生在过去的动作都不能用完成时。
“Present perfect: Used with has or have, the present perfecttense describes an action that occurredat an indefinite time in the past or that began in the past and continues intothe present.”
Been becoming也并不是被动语态，而是“has been becoming”构成了一个现在完成进行时。
3. “一般时态在没有明显提示或错误的时候，遵循原句的时态，选C。而且句子前面提示了Before the Civil War，所以用过去完成时较好。”——RingXiao
问题在于这道题中原句的时态表达的逻辑意思是不合理的。Before the Civil War是针对主干中HT helped create这个动作所限定的时间，而不是针对known as。整个句子的主干意思是：在南北内战之前，HT 帮助成立了一个组织并且带领了许多奴隶进行解放斗争。

做题小tips：
遇到考察时态的题目，理清句子中出现的所有动作的先后顺序是最为保险的做法，而且应该通过逻辑意思去判断，而不是默认原句的顺序。

本次精华楼层：
4楼——若雪
11楼——helio5
12楼——DoGMATRight
14楼——MichaelxLee

作者: rainzyx23 时间: 2011-9-5 09:40
果断选C啊~

作者: sandychen168 时间: 2011-9-5 09:47
赞成E，也犹豫了C，但是C中 had become known 前面有helped了，如果用过去完成时，不就是become know在helped之前了

所以个人认为选E

作者: rainzyx23 时间: 2011-9-5 09:51

赞成E，也犹豫了C，但是C中 had become known 前面有helped了，如果用过去完成时，不就是become know在helped之前了

-- by 会员 sandychen168 (2011/9/5 9:47:04)

我也犹豫E了..但是觉得是在create之前就知道这个的名字了吧?!

作者: 若雪 时间: 2011-9-5 09:57
E吧..

HT和其他奴隶等帮助成立了一个组织？这个组织以Underground Railroad的名字广为人所知，并负责lead slaves to freedom

主语HT, along with是浮云~果断排除AB
剩下CDE 只有时态的问题。
如果是C had become的话就说明be known as UR发生在create之前，逻辑不通
如果是D的话，现在完成进行时，边创造边闻名？感觉有点奇怪
最后剩下E, 比较通顺。先创造了这个组织后来广为人知。觉得这边就是will的过去时而已。

作者: 若雪 时间: 2011-9-5 10:00

赞成E，也犹豫了C，但是C中 had become known 前面有helped了，如果用过去完成时，不就是become know在helped之前了

-- by 会员 sandychen168 (2011/9/5 9:47:04)

我也犹豫E了..但是觉得是在create之前就知道这个的名字了吧?!

-- by 会员 rainzyx23 (2011/9/5 9:51:40)

Emma Watson!

名字应该是create以后再有的吧..更何况还有be known这个...不create怎么以这个名字知名嘞？

作者: nhelpn 时间: 2011-9-5 10:11
E
由were，排除AB
按句意，“known”应该发生在helped之后，有 “后来被称为。。。” 的意思，故用过去将来时，would。

作者: 纳丁Cat 时间: 2011-9-5 10:36
4. Before the Civil War, Harriet Tubman,along with other former slaves and white abolitionists, helped create what had become known as the Underground Railroad, and were responsible for leadinghundreds, if not thousands, of slaves to freedom.
A had become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and were
B would become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and were
C had become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and was
D has been becoming known as the UndergroundRailroad, and was
E would become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and was
南北战争之前，HT,(和一些其他人)，帮助建立了后来被称为Underground Railroad,的东西，而且负责领导成百上千的奴隶获得自由。主要考点，时态。Along with 不能用为连词。

A 过去完成时用于过去某一时代之前，这里had become 没有依据；本句主语HT，后面were无用，应该用单数was。Along with, as well as, together with, beside 等等只是修饰作用，不是连词，不能并列主语。
B were误用，同上。
C had become 错误同A
D has been becoming 时态混乱，首先不能用has，这个发生在过去，应该用过去时。Been becoming是被动。但是known as这个词组就是主动表被动,再用被动时态就是akward.
E 正确。Would become，表明了发生在过去，将来被知道为UndergroundRailroad的意思。

作者: ffen 时间: 2011-9-5 10:50
选E吧。
主语为HT，alone with后结构可以不看，因此谓语是was，排除AB
helped表明了过去时态，不能用has been...现在时态范畴的时态，排除D
从意思上理解，HT创造了一个组织，之后变成了underground railroad，这个不是发生在create之前，的因此不能用“过去的过去”，排除C。
选E

作者: superbat28 时间: 2011-9-5 11:09
果断E啊~ 主谓一致，决定划线尾部为was，只剩下C,D,E...
然后考虑时间轴~

----------the railroad was created------------------ the railroad was under construction--------the railroad was named

被known肯定发生在build和lead slave之后发生啊~果断E~

作者: 麦芒的和煦 时间: 2011-9-5 11:39
选E.
主谓，排除were选项。
时态上，would become好像比had become 语意顺当多了。

作者: helio5 时间: 2011-9-5 14:53

4. Before the Civil War, Harriet Tubman,along with other former slaves and white abolitionists, helped create what had become known as the Underground Railroad, and were responsible for leadinghundreds, if not thousands, of slaves to freedom.
A had become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and were
B would become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and were
C had become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and was
D has been becoming known as the UndergroundRailroad, and was
E would become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and was

-- by 会员毛毛carina (2011/9/5 9:28:19)

我选E
感觉划线部分时态用过去完成时没有时间标志。这里应该用现在完成时或者过去将来时都可以。
但D里面的has been doing感觉有点awkward。
and 后面无疑应该用was，主语为Tubman这个人。along with 短语附属成分不决定主语单复数。
what从句整个结构完整，可以看出一个名词成分。
句子主干: Before ..., H. Tubman ... helped create ......, and was responsible for leading many slaves to freedom.

作者: DoGMATRight 时间: 2011-9-5 15:22
看前三词和后三词的区别,本题的考点主要是动词时态和主谓一致。
由于主语为HT，所以and后面的谓语动词为单数形式，所以排除AB。
BCE的区别仅为become known的时态之间的区别。
首先我们可以把D排除，这里用现在完成进行时是不好的。
对比CE选项，我们发现从逻辑意思上来看用过去将来时比过去完成时要好。
因为我们不能create一个已经著称的事物。

所以E为正确选项。

作者: RingXiao 时间: 2011-9-5 15:41
4. Before the Civil War, Harriet Tubman,along with other former slaves and white abolitionists, helped create what had become known as the Underground Railroad, and were responsible for leadinghundreds, if not thousands, of slaves to freedom.
A had become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and were
B would become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and were
C had become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and was
D has been becoming known as the UndergroundRailroad, and was
E would become known as the UndergroundRailroad, and was
句子的主语是 Harriet Tubman, 单数,后面动作responsible for 是由他发出的，排除A。B
一般时态在没有明显提示或错误的时候，遵循原句的时态，选C。而且句子前面提示了Before the Civil War，所以用过去完成时较好。

作者: MichaelxLee 时间: 2011-9-6 09:06
我认为应该选E
首先根据主谓一致，排除A和B
D选项的时态混乱，且become一般不用进行时态，排除。
C选项的时态选择的是过去完成时，表示动作发生在“过去的过去”，对“过去”有影响，然而划线句的前半句是一个宾语从句的从句部分，主句时态选择的是一般过去时。从逻辑上而言，是先有HT这个人先帮助建造了某个东西，后有这个东西被称为UR，且两者之间不存在谁对谁有影响，故而不应该使用过去完成时，排除。

正确答案选E，would become 使用的是一般过去时，从句和主句的时态不矛盾。

作者: 毛毛carina 时间: 2011-9-6 12:29
更新，顶起

作者: UlysessHope 时间: 2011-9-6 13:58
顶一个~~~~~解释很有帮助！

作者: daisyの小夢想 时间: 2011-10-2 21:39
选的D 错了。答案E。
主谓一致时态
一时眼快看漏了 D has been becoming known as 以为是has been known as
be known as不可能用进行时。不过就算是has been known 也不对，解释说道 incorrectly suggests that the labeling of the Underground Railroad continues to the present day
E 语意就是建立了一个组织，这个组织后来以...闻名，Use"would" to express future from the point of view of the past

作者: balapupu 时间: 2011-11-24 11:41
1.通过平行对称主谓一致，排除AB
2.D用现在完成时不对.
3.C 句子的意思是建造了以后有名的地下铁路，应该known是发生在之后的。所以had 不对
4.E：would 老感觉有种虚拟的语气在里面，有点不太确定。

作者: maxiv 时间: 2011-12-13 16:47
4. Before the Civil War, Harriet Tubman, along with other former slaves and white abolitionists, helped create what
  had become known as the Underground Railroad, and were
responsible for leading hundreds, if not thousands, of slaves to freedom.
A. had become known as the Underground Railroad, and were
  过去式时态早于had，错。

B. would become known as the Underground Railroad, and were
  复数错

C. had become known as the Underground Railroad, and was
  过去式时态早于had，错。

D. has been becoming known as the Underground Railroad, and was
  has ... and was 的时态不平行

E. would become known as the Underground Railroad, and was
  对

作者: 南瓜0729 时间: 2011-12-20 19:35
4. Before the Civil War, Harriet Tubman, along with other former slaves and white abolitionists, helped create what had become known as the Underground Railroad, and were responsible for leading hundreds, if not thousands, of slaves to freedom.
A. had become known as the Underground Railroad, and were
B. would become known as the Underground Railroad, and were
C. had become known as the Underground Railroad, and was
D. has been becoming known as the Underground Railroad, and was
E. would become known as the Underground Railroad, and was
选E

作者: ygbabe 时间: 2019-10-28 16:45

若雪发表于 2011-9-5 09:57
E吧..HT和其他奴隶等帮助成立了一个组织？这个组织以Underground Railroad的名字广为人所知，并负责lead sl ...

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