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标题: 求教where的修饰问题（prep1-115，125) [打印本页]

作者: yunshishow 时间: 2011-8-26 22:22
标题: 求教where的修饰问题（prep1-115，125)
115 Many population studies have linked a high-salt diet to high rates of hypertension and shown that in societies where they consume little salt, their blood pressure typically does not rise with age.
(A) shown that in societies where they consume little salt, their
(B) shown that in societies that have consumed little salt, their
(C) shown that in societies where little salt is consumed,
(D) they showed that in societies where little salt is consumed,
(E) they showed that in societies where they consume little salt, their
答案选C，但是本人觉得这里的where用的不对。
manhattan中讲到：The pronoun where can be used to modify a noun place, such as area, site, country or Nevada. Where cannot modify a "metaphorical" place, such as condition, situation, case, circumstances, or arrangement. In these cases, use in which rather than where.
而这里的where修饰societies，societies又不表示真正的地点，为啥可以用where修饰？

另外：
125

The computer company registered a $16 million net loss for the year, largely because it was profitable only overseas, where much of their profits were used for paying higher taxes, while continuing to lose money in North America.

(A) where much of their profits were used for paying higher taxes, while continuing

(B) where much of their profits went to pay higher taxes, as they continued

(D) with much of their profits going to pay higher taxes, while continuing

(E) with much of the profit used for paying higher taxes, as it continued
这里的overseas词性为形容词和副词，为什么这里where可以修饰它？

作者: yunshishow 时间: 2011-8-27 12:03
自己顶一下。

作者: yunshishow 时间: 2011-8-28 20:59
自己再顶一下，问题问的太弱了都没人解答。

作者: bull113 时间: 2011-8-29 11:12
GMAT题目里没有绝对正确的选项，是要求你从上述选项中“相对好”的选项。
你比较一下5个选项。
SHOWN的表达方式中ABC比DE更加简洁。。many population studies ....and shown, 这种表达肯定是对的。
但是B的后半段表述有问题。没主语，没说明盐被谁消费了
C的后半段用了被动语态，表示“盐被消费得越少，人们的血压就不会随年龄增长而增加”

作者: yunshishow 时间: 2011-8-29 13:33
呵呵，明白了，谢谢哈～～

作者: wxymaggie 时间: 2013-3-1 13:48
不明白啊~ 同问

作者: li3360065 时间: 2013-3-1 15:09
where 既然能修饰country为什么不能修饰community 呢？如果国家无限小，接近个community的话，这就MAKE SENSE 了。

where 修饰过 tribes~

community 也是一个place 啊亲~

第二个例子这个where 有点问题。。不过第二题很好判断~错误很明显。

3L 的答案很好，不过我觉得还是their 这个pronoun用错了。and they showed 这个时态上有冲突~所以答案很清晰咯

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