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作者: winnie    时间: 2004-7-5 16:41
标题: gwd 13-15

有两个疑问，请大牛看看。


15. Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston.



  1. Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve

  2. Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve

  3. Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving

  4. There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving（A）

  5. There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving

1、除了between 1876 and 1904要用过去时，a、b比较，b还有哪儿的错误？

2、时间副词“between 1876 and 1904”放在of、to之前，有何区别？即：led to the construction∨of three separate sewer systems和led to the construction of three separate sewer systems∨to serve.
作者: iceboy    时间: 2004-7-5 23:35

1. 没有任何完成时态的标志, B平白多出来完成时态, 不选B.

2. 你体会下意思的区别. 修饰语和被修饰对象分别是什么.

作者: winnie    时间: 2004-7-6 11:44
谢谢iceboy，但是没有时间标志的情况下，现在完成式是可以用的，不可以用的是过去完成式。同意第2点。
作者: mickyma    时间: 2004-8-24 04:41

可是construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems 这样的结构OG上不是说不好吗？


construction of three separate sewer systems　between 1876 and 1904我觉得不会产生修饰的错误呀，因为construction是主题词呀？


请指教

作者: 魚子醬秋天    时间: 2004-8-25 07:12
以下是引用mickyma在2004-8-24 4:41:00的发言：

可是construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems 这样的结构OG上不是说不好吗？


construction of three separate sewer systems　between 1876 and 1904我觉得不会产生修饰的错误呀，因为construction是主题词呀？


请指教


i am the same Q ..........

作者: swiffer    时间: 2004-9-16 03:18
以下是引用mickyma在2004-8-24 4:41:00的发言：

可是construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems 这样的结构OG上不是说不好吗？


construction of three separate sewer systems　between 1876 and 1904我觉得不会产生修饰的错误呀，因为construction是主题词呀？


请指教


between 1876 to 1904不紧跟它所修饰的construction，产生了介词短语作状语，修饰句子的谓语led to的歧异。鱼子酱mm你觉得呢？

作者: ivyshen    时间: 2004-10-6 05:25

我也有疑问呢。。谢谢


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作者: forjoke    时间: 2005-6-20 14:37
我觉得应该选B



A:between

1876 and 1904 的插入，割裂了the construction of 和它要修饰的three separate sewer systems，不好。



B：现在完成时没有问题。



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我改注意了，还是选A

A：根据修饰的准确性，意思优先。

B：时态还是要过去时。


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作者: yukon    时间: 2005-6-20 16:25

B.Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve


我觉得A有点像长定语后置,B的意思像说那些systems置存在于1876 and 1904 间

作者: Avantasia    时间: 2005-6-20 22:11

Noun of Noun这个结构是绝对可以被插入语割裂开的. OG里面说过一个cost of的问题, 但是在大全里面又有一题把cost of分开, 说明这个结构是可以拆开的, GWD还有类似的东西, 大家做的时候可以留心, 这题选A.

作者: PKGMAT    时间: 2005-10-2 14:28

B错只能是错在改变了原句要表达的意思？


在这用完成时也不能说是绝对错吧

作者: 无尾小恶魔    时间: 2005-10-2 15:23
有between这样的过去时间标志，还可以用现在完成时么？
作者: wu_keming    时间: 2006-8-18 18:24
可不可以这样理解呢？ between这个时间状语只是修饰construction而言，而lead to的时间并没有确定的限制，所以完成时时可行的。
作者: allenwml    时间: 2006-10-9 20:43
以下是引用wu_keming在2006-8-18 18:24:00的发言：
可不可以这样理解呢？ between这个时间状语只是修饰construction而言，而lead to的时间并没有确定的限制，所以完成时时可行的。

同感

作者: guozao    时间: 2007-7-9 14:01

弱弱的问一句．．

Ｄ选项，里面的一个错误：

there were concerns....错在什么呢？是赘述吗

谢谢啊～～～

作者: lulu_odin    时间: 2008-3-4 09:55
A修饰更准确
作者: woaiqiuqiu    时间: 2008-4-30 18:16
我不觉得把between这个时间状语放在中间或者结尾有什么不同，而且觉得construction of后面直接跟宾语更清晰明确，希望给咱点个明灯
作者: 李傻傻    时间: 2008-7-1 21:22

there were concerns可以直接写成CONCERNS,呵呵

也算定律吧,花线句子有THERE BE一般都错

作者: clarke1127    时间: 2008-12-7 15:26

Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston.

A.      Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve

A.      Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve

B.      Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve

Between 1876 and 1904 是过去的一段时间，应该用过去时;

C.      Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving

Between 1876 and 1904 是过去的一段时间，应该用过去时;

D.     There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving

There be 句型，错误的标志

E.      There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving

There be 句型，错误的标志


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作者: tracy2009    时间: 2009-5-14 17:33
以下是引用Avantasia在2005-6-20 22:11:00的发言：

Noun of Noun这个结构是绝对可以被插入语割裂开的. OG里面说过一个cost of的问题, 但是在大全里面又有一题把cost of分开, 说明这个结构是可以拆开的, GWD还有类似的东西, 大家做的时候可以留心, 这题选A.
  

虽然我也曾选了A, 可是经过仔细比较我还是选B, 原因如下:

1)该题的考点是考查"intrude "这个语法点, 请看我用红色表出来的部分均为intrude成分.

Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve
       metropolitan
       Boston.

A.      Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904
       of three separate sewer systems to serve

B.       Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve

C.      Concerns about public health have
       led
       between 1876 and 1904
       to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving

D.      There were concerns about public health leading to the construction
       between 1876 and 1904
       of three separate sewer systems serving

E.       There were concerns leading
       between 1876 and 1904
       to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving

以下为OG 考查插入这一知识点的举例.

OG10-110:

110. It has been estimated that the annual cost to the United States of illiteracy in lost industrial output and tax revenues is at least $20 billion a year.

(A)  the annual cost to the United States of illiteracy in lost industrial output and tax revenues is at least $20 billion a year

(D)  $20 billion a year in lost industrial output and tax revenues is the annual cost to the United States of illiteracy

(E)   lost industrial output and tax revenues cost the United States at least $20 billion a year because of illiteracy

以下是OG解释

 Choices A, D, and E are awkward and confused because other constructions intrude within the phrase cost... of illiteracy: for greatest clarity, cost should be followed immediately by a phrase (e.g., of illiteracy ) that identifies the nature of the cost.

2) B 的结构为concerns ..have led to the construction....to serve....,这个construction 是1876-1904年冒出来的, 但自冒出来后就一直serve, 而不是只在1876-1904这段其间server,所以用现在完成时也是可以接受的

虽然B的时态与原文不一致, 但该题的主要考查点是"intrude", 因此相对来说B更合适. 请NN指点


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作者: lcy19812000    时间: 2009-5-14 23:09

本题为prep1－237，OA为A。

过去的事，没有延续到现在，没有理由用完成时。

B中between 1876介宾短语有修饰led to之嫌，从这个角度来说更不能用完成时。

作者: lcy19812000    时间: 2009-5-14 23:10
当然，B中between 1876介宾短语有修饰led to之嫌，这本身就是死罪一条。
作者: xhbtbu    时间: 2009-12-29 15:54
there be句型表示某处自然存在某物,不能说concern是自然存在的.
作者: buffonjuventus    时间: 2010-10-9 09:36
当然，B中between 1876介宾短语有修饰led to之嫌，这本身就是死罪一条。
-- by 会员 lcy19812000 (2009/5/14 23:10:00)


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作者: jbc88    时间: 2010-12-1 15:57
谁来说说看这里为什么要to do 而不是for doing。

这里construction是物怎么能用to do去表目的呢？
作者: wtylys    时间: 2011-7-9 18:54
to do是表行为目的的。。。
作者: 在学习边缘试探    时间: 2018-10-5 21:40
winnie 发表于 2004-7-6 11:44
谢谢iceboy，但是没有时间标志的情况下，现在完成式是可以用的，不可以用的是过去完成式。同意第2点。 ...

同意！               



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