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标题: GWD有两道题不懂！很急！求教各位NN~ [打印本页]

作者: 傻熊有傻福 时间: 2011-8-9 11:41
标题: GWD有两道题不懂！很急！求教各位NN~
1.T-4-Q22

Unlike mainstream American businesses, more than half of which fail, the failure rate for businesses in the Amish community hovers around 5 percent.

A.Unlike mainstream American businesses, more than half of which fail

B.Unlike mainstream American businesses, in which the failure rate is more than half

C.Unlike mainstream American businesses, where more than half of them fail

D.While the rate of mainstream American businesses failing is more than half

E.While more than half of mainstream American businesses fail

答案选E，我选的B。。。

2.

Galileo did not invent the telescope, but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he quickly built his own device from an organ pipe and spectacle lenses.

A.Galileo did not invent the telescope, but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he

B.Galileo had not invented the telescope, but when he heard, in 1609, of such an optical instrument having been made,

C.Galileo, even though he had not invented the telescope, on hearing, in1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he

D.Even though Galileo did not invent the telescope, on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made,

E.Even though Galileo did not invent the telescope, but when he heard, 1609, of such an optical instrument being made, he

答案是A，D怎么不对？D是让步啊，为什么答案是转折呢？
非常感谢！

作者: 傻熊有傻福 时间: 2011-8-9 15:59
求教大家了！

作者: balapupu 时间: 2011-8-9 16:11
1）unlike 要求比较对象对等，B mainstream American businesses 和 failure rate 比较不对等了～～

作者: balapupu 时间: 2011-8-9 16:37
2）题我也做错了，这里我有一点不理解～Galileo......,but....,he....这里不是有两个独立的句子了？是不是因为有BUT的关系？？？
我查了查外国的manhattan论坛～他们这样讲的～Galileo did not invent X, but on hearing that (someone did invent X), he built his own device.

I did not invent the GMAT, but on hearing that such a test had been made, I quickly developed my own practice GMAT software.

B uses wrong tense (had not invented), wrong idiom (heard... of), and wrong tense again (having been made)
C is not a complete sentence (it basically says: Galileo, on hearing, he quickly built...).
D changes the meaning - he didn't build a telescope "even though" he didn't invent it. "Even though" indicates some kind of cause-effect connection. The original sentence is just telling us - he wasn't the inventor but he did build one soon after its invention.
E repeats multiple errors already discussed above

求讨论指教～

作者: 傻熊有傻福 时间: 2011-8-9 18:30
谢LS~NN们，第二题肿么分析？求指教~

作者: balapupu 时间: 2011-8-9 20:44
顶啊顶~~~大家来看看吧~

作者: 傻熊有傻福 时间: 2011-8-10 10:38
顶啊~牛牛们~解答一下！

作者: sanlingjie 时间: 2011-8-10 13:15
B, “made，”后面的句子片段即“quickly built his own device from an organ pipe and spectacle lenses”缺少主语。C.Galileo和最后一个he重复，产生句子片段。D.错误同B，“quickly built his own device from an organ pipe and spectacle lenses”缺主语。E.Being made 太wordy了。

作者: egretlee 时间: 2011-8-10 13:33
同意楼上，第二题的D没主语啊，这题考得是认真读题

作者: 傻熊有傻福 时间: 2011-8-10 14:10

B, “made，”后面的句子片段即“quickly built his own device from an organ pipe and spectacle lenses”缺少主语。C.Galileo和最后一个he重复，产生句子片段。D.错误同B，“quickly built his own device from an organ pipe and spectacle lenses”缺主语。E.Being made 太wordy了。

-- by 会员 sanlingjie (2011/8/10 13:15:27)

哦！非常感谢！

作者: balapupu 时间: 2011-8-10 14:21
但是谁能给我讲讲A为什么对呢？C重复主语我知道，去掉中间的but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made,不就是逗号连接两句话了？？不就是run on 了?

作者: anguslu24 时间: 2011-8-10 15:05

但是谁能给我讲讲A为什么对呢？C重复主语我知道，去掉中间的but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made,不就是逗号连接两句话了？？不就是run on 了?

-- by 会员 balapupu (2011/8/10 14:21:10)

C不可以，因为缺少谓语。
Galileo, even though he had not invented the telescope, on hearing, in1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he
首先不同意去掉中间的，宁可移项看结构：
even though he had not invented the telescope, in1609, Galileo on hearing that such an optical instrument had been made,he
可见由三个短句组成，需要两个连词，但这里只有even though一个。再者Galileo on hearing that ... 这个没有谓语，所以杀掉

作者: ximenheng 时间: 2012-6-19 18:09
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