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作者: 雪梦儿    时间: 2011-7-18 10:37
标题: prep07- 73,天啊。。这个怎么平行啊???
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Evolutionary psychology holds that the human mind is not a "blank slate," but instead that it
comprises specialized mental mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving specific
problems human ancestors faced millions of years ago.

(A) the human mind is not a "blank slate," but instead that it comprises specialized mental
mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving
(B) the human mind is not a "blank slate" but instead comprises specialized mental mechanisms
that were developed to solve
(C) the human mind, instead of a "blank slate," it comprises specialized mental mechanisms that
have been developed to solve
(D) rather than it being a "blank slate," the human mind comprises specialized mental mechanisms
that have been developed as a way of solving
(E) rather than the human mind's being a "blank slate," that it comprises specialized mental
mechanisms that were developed as a way of solving

考点:简洁有效(Rhetorical Construction)    平行对称(Parallelism)
1)    连词前面的结构包括谓语动词,则连词后面平列结构也应该含有谓语动词
1)not …but…连接平行结构。
2)不定式表目的简洁有效。

(A) the human mind is not a "blank slate," but instead that结构不平行; developed as a way of
solving表达复杂,直接改为developed to solve表达目的
(B)    正确, the human mind is not a "blank slate" but instead comprises…结构平行;   用developed to
solve表达目的,简洁




(C)    代词it指代the human mind,用在此处多余,存在两个主语,句子结构错误; instead of a "blank
slate”意思表达不清; developed as a way of solving表达啰嗦。
(D) rather than it being a "blank slate,"结构表达复杂,且it多余应该删掉; developed as a way of
solving表达复杂
(E)    整个句子结构表达笨拙,复杂,两个that从句之间缺少连词; developed as a way of solving表达复


句子结构: …holds that the human mind is not a….but instead comprises…
高亮处,求解如何平行法,not a n., but comprises?
作者: deifica    时间: 2011-7-18 10:46
谓语be动词(is)和谓语动词(comprises)的平行
作者: lhnstefsun    时间: 2011-7-18 11:39
谓语be动词(is)和谓语动词(comprises)的平行
-- by 会员 deifica (2011/7/18 10:46:05)


同意~
楼主说的是 be not A ,but B   A、B是两个名词意思是:不是A而是 B
但是这个句子不是名词平行,这里要注意的是be(is)放到了not的前面(这是习惯用法,否定词放在了助动词之后),可以再脑子里把它放在not后面这样就形成了not is A ,but comprises B 的平行结构
作者: 雪梦儿    时间: 2011-7-18 11:50
这样子。。。好吧。。。真郁闷呢。。。
谢谢~~~~




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