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标题: 关于PERP中有关run-on 的解释，不是很明白，请帮忙解答呀~~~ [打印本页]

作者: 狂威雪 时间: 2011-7-15 14:48
标题: 关于PERP中有关run-on 的解释，不是很明白，请帮忙解答呀~~~
例题是189. (OG12-123)She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to
her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.
A.She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York
compared to
B.Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York
as compared to
C.Less successful after she emigrated to New York
than she had been in
D.Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York
when compared to(C)
E.She had been less successful after emigrating to New York
than in

题目释义：she…..,photographer LJ….,and ……

考点：句子结构，比较对象对等

1.Less要与than搭配，不能与(as) compared to搭配。

2.Run-on sentence.

aeoluseros关于run-on sentence知识点的补充说明：

找过很多解释，包括一些语法书(也包括老外的)、百度，始终觉得措辞上不合适，不过在一本手册上终于看到了满意的解释：

run-on sentence 连写句：

连写句指错误将两个独立分句合写在一个句子里面没有正确地用标点分离。

连写句有两种类型：

溶合句(fused sentence)：根本不使用标点把两个独立分句合写在一个句子里

逗号错误(comma splice):使用逗号但没有并列连词将两个独立分句写在一个句子里。

BTW: 所谓的独立分句即"主句"，其对应的是"从句"，都属于"分句"。

而run-on sentence的重点在于其改正方法：

1）分为两个句子

2）用一个逗号加上and, but, or或者其他并列连词

3）两个句子中间使用分号

This sentence compares the success J experienced after moving to New York to the success she had previously experienced in Germany
. The phrase less successful anticipates the conclusion of the comparison with the phrase than… . The main subject of the sentence is photographer LJ , and the main verb is earned . The opening clause She was less successful…. Therefore creates a comma splice if the comma is not followed by a conjunction. The most efficient way to incorporate the information about J’s comparative successes in Germany and in New York is to turn the clause into an adjectival phase describing J. (FROM OG12)
选项分析：A．Less successful… anticipates than rather than compared to… ; a comma is insufficient to join two independent clauses into a single sentence.

B．As compare to is an incorrect way to complete the comparison introduced by less; being… is unnecessarily wordy and awkward.

C．Correct.

D．When compared to is an incorrect phrase to complete the comparison introduced by less.

E．A comma is insufficient to join two independent clauses into a single sentence; past-perfect tense is misleading, since it refers to J’s experience in New York, which in fact followed her experience in Germany
.

其一，黄色的部分是什么意思，不是很明白？？翻译成中文是，如果逗号后面有连词的话，那么首句less successful就没有逗号错误了。什么意思？？
其二，此例题为什么不能看成是A,B and C 的结构呢？？
其三，在run-on sentence 连写句的解释，如何在本句中体现的？？我需要详细的解释，拜托了，灰常看不懂。

作者: 意韵甜心 时间: 2011-7-15 16:01
1.黄色部分说如果逗号后面没有连词的话，两句话就没有逻辑词的联系了， comma splice是指用逗号叠加两个独立句子的错误，两个独立句子应该用句号断开的嘛
2.没太懂你想问什么……
3.连写句指两个独立的句子不用逻辑连词硬放在一个句子里，比如，I like apple,and she likes pear.如果说I like apple she likes pear就不对（溶合句），或者I like apple, she likes pear（这就是上面说的逗号错误），改正方法就是那三种:
1.I like apple. she likes pear.
2.I like apple,and she likes pear.
3.I like apple;she likes pear.

作者: 狂威雪 时间: 2011-7-16 12:05

1.黄色部分说如果逗号后面没有连词的话，两句话就没有逻辑词的联系了， comma splice是指用逗号叠加两个独立句子的错误，两个独立句子应该用句号断开的嘛
2.没太懂你想问什么……
3.连写句指两个独立的句子不用逻辑连词硬放在一个句子里，比如，I like apple,and she likes pear.如果说I like apple she likes pear就不对（溶合句），或者I like apple, she likes pear（这就是上面说的逗号错误），改正方法就是那三种:
1.I like apple. she likes pear.
2.I like apple,and she likes pear.
3.I like apple;she likes pear.

-- by 会员意韵甜心 (2011/7/15 16:01:13)

谢谢啦，彻底明白了，哈哈~

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