标题: og12 sc 68中的wordy 的问题 [打印本页] 作者: bob9603 时间: 2011-7-13 23:27 标题: og12 sc 68中的wordy 的问题 如题~ 68-The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq. (A) that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but (B) that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously with but also (C) having been cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously but (D) cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence of centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arising simultaneously but also (E) cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arose simultaneously with but
og对于A，C都有wordy的解释， 对A：that were cut 对C: having been cut
这怎么wordy了呢？ 求NN指点~！！！先谢谢啦~作者: hytro 时间: 2011-7-19 19:47
that were 是错误标志 having been 太长了吧 有一个词的cut在 还敢出来作者: bob9603 时间: 2011-7-20 20:07
that were 是错误标志 having been 太长了吧 有一个词的cut在 还敢出来
-- by 会员 hytro (2011/7/19 19:47:36)
我觉得A的前半句话有点陈述事实的意思，所以应该用一般现在时，所以应该用cut，所以that were应该排除~ having 的那个我还是不理解，求解答的详细些，谢谢啦~作者: balapupu 时间: 2011-7-20 20:14
having been done 这种形式是典型的错误结构作者: bob9603 时间: 2011-7-21 09:57
having been done 这种形式是典型的错误结构
-- by 会员 balapupu (2011/7/20 20:14:24)
那请问，以后是看到having been done就是错吗？作者: 清绿地 时间: 2011-7-29 21:39
C 原文没有强调时态，所以没必要用HAVING BEEN CUT吧。另外完成进行时也考到正确的概率不大。另外，AROSE SIMULTANEOUSLY WITH 必须有一个WITH。好和后面的more celebrated city-states 连上作者: sapphirezhang 时间: 2011-9-28 09:58
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