标题: 请问这题B为什么不对? [打印本页] 作者: lllmmm 时间: 2011-5-13 10:46 标题: 请问这题B为什么不对? Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing.
A. Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing. B. Nearly 99 percent of five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth have vanished. C. Vanished are nearly 99percent of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth. D. Of five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them have vanished. E. Of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent have vanished.
请问B为什么不对作者: Kb24 时间: 2011-5-13 14:51
几点想法供参考: 1. five hundred million 前面有个the更符合逻辑意思 2. 改变了原来的句子重心 3. 主语99% 和谓语have vanished离的太远