Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
OG A: use of the present progressive form of the verb confuses the sentence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb.
Q1:根据上述解释，是不是如果 coordinating变成having coordinated，那么在“现在分词时态”知识点上就没错误了？（暂时不提分词短语的修饰问题）
[不是哦，首先我说不出来having coordinated这种改法对不对，即使是对的，Ａ也是好啰嗦，特别是OG指出的主语和谓语离太远]
同理，
OG12-101
Heavy commitment by an executive to a course of action, especially if it has worked well in the past, makes it likely to miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
(E) Being heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, is likely to make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
Q2：如果有这么个选项也是对的？
：Having been heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, was likely to make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear. 好好的一般时态你为何要把它变成这样？！
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0G12-129
Cajuns speak a dialect brought to southern Louisiana by the 4,000 Acadians who migrated there in 1755; their language is basically seventeenth-century French to which has been added English, Spanish, and Italian words.
(A) to which has been added English, Spanish, and Italian words
(B) added to which is English, Spanish, and Italian words
(C) to which English, Spanish, and Italian words have been added
(D) with English, Spanish, and Italian words having been added to it
(E) and, in addition, English, Spanish, and Italian words are added
OG D:having been added to it is wordy expression
Q3:问什么wordy呢？
偶的理解是，现在分词完成式的被动语态“having been done ”在做时间状语时候与过去分词“ done ”相同，但是此时having been done应该是定语吧，所以having been done相对done就不wordy啦！
［这部分我真的不了解了，added比having been added好？但不知这样意思上是不是意思上不对？］
PS:偶没看having been done 的相关讨论，自私的说
想拍我的，拍之前给个having been done的链接，自私的再曰
-- by 会员 kingarthur00 (2011/4/14 9:58:44)