By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market form 6 percent to 10 percent,a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbooks.
B. from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C. to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D. in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
E. to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges
记得当时大家讨论的结果E。 可我记得OG中说to....from...是错的,应该是from...to.... 。 A中which语法上模糊会造成歧义,可逻辑上很清楚是指market的。 两个都有问题,哪个更好呢?
空口无凭,请出示OG证据!!!!
in my idea, normally "from ... to ..." is definitely better than "to ... from ..."
But here, a little different, it is "increase to" or "from 6% increase to 10%" then probably you can use the form of "increase to 10% from 6%"
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