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作者: 听sophie 时间: 2011-2-12 01:27
标题: OG 12—36题，求助~thx a lot!
36. Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, the fi rst woman to draw a soldier’s pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to serve.

(B) 22, was injured three times, while being discharged in 1783 because she had become
(C) 22 and was injured three times, and discharged in 1783, being
(D) 22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was
(E) 22, having been injured three times and discharged in 1783, being

答案是A，我选了D。
没觉得D哪里不对？
大家帮我分析下吧~D哪里错了？

作者: 希望 时间: 2011-2-12 01:33
(D) 22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was

and was discharged，这里不对。

作者: kazemi 时间: 2011-2-12 01:38
and前后不对称

作者: cutenancymyn 时间: 2011-2-12 09:13
injure要用被动语态，她不可能自己伤害自己，而是“受伤”。joined, was injured, and was discharged三句并列。

作者: 听sophie 时间: 2011-2-12 11:19

injure要用被动语态，她不可能自己伤害自己，而是“受伤”。joined, was injured, and was discharged三句并列。

-- by 会员 cutenancymyn (2011/2/12 9:13:32)

我是这样看的，（Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff,）（the first woman to draw a soldier’s pension, ）不看了~
我的理解是：Deborah Sampson, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, injured three times（这个也是一个插入成分，修饰DS的，可忽略不看了), and was discharged in 1783 because she was too ill to serve.

整句话就是：DS joined the Army and was discharged in 1783.(这个好像没什么错误……)

作者: 听sophie 时间: 2011-2-12 11:21

and前后不对称

-- by 会员 kazemi (2011/2/12 1:38:22)

（Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff,）（the first woman to draw a soldier’s pension, ）这都是修饰成分，跳过不看了~
我的理解是：Deborah Sampson, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, injured three times（这个也是一个插入成分，修饰DS的，可忽略不看了), and was discharged in 1783 because she was too ill to serve.

整句话就是：DS joined the Army and was discharged in 1783.(这个好像没什么错误……)
这句话的and前后应该没什么矛盾

作者: 听sophie 时间: 2011-2-12 11:22

(D) 22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was

and was discharged，这里不对。

-- by 会员希望 (2011/2/12 1:33:45)

（Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff,）（the first woman to draw a soldier’s pension, ）不看了~
我的理解是：Deborah Sampson, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, injured three times（这个也是一个插入成分，修饰DS的，可忽略不看了), and was discharged in 1783 because she was too ill to serve.

整句话就是：DS joined the Army and was discharged in 1783.(这个好像没什么错误……)

作者: evelyn205205 时间: 2011-2-12 15:18
become，go，remain，come是GMAT语法中不能变掉的词，俗称四大天王。XDF笔记。记住哦！

作者: 翁羽凌虚 时间: 2011-2-12 16:29
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（Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff,）（the first woman to draw a soldier’s pension, ）这都是修饰成分，跳过不看了~
我的理解是：Deborah Sampson, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, injured three times（这个也是一个插入成分，修饰DS的，可忽略不看了), and was discharged in 1783 because she was too ill to serve.

整句话就是：DS joined the Army and was discharged in 1783.(这个好像没什么错误……)
这句话的and前后应该没什么矛盾

-- by 会员听sophie (2011/2/12 11:21:31)

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我之前好像也选的是这个选项，不过现在我想的是：injured three times如果要修饰DS最好紧靠DS,在这个选项里离DS太远了，白勇语法笔记里面说，修饰语要尽可能靠近修饰对象，D选项中injured three times的这个位置导致它可能就近修饰吧。如果要是把它理解成状语的话，那么后面的and was discharged里面没有主语。
我也不是很确定是不是正确，看你能接受这个看法不？

作者: 听sophie 时间: 2011-2-12 16:29

become，go，remain，come是GMAT语法中不能变掉的词，俗称四大天王。XDF笔记。记住哦！

-- by 会员 evelyn205205 (2011/2/12 15:18:20)

记下了！XDF笔记也是很多精华滴！
谢谢evelyn~
become，go,remain , come~

作者: 翁羽凌虚 时间: 2011-2-12 16:29

and前后不对称

-- by 会员 kazemi (2011/2/12 1:38:22)

-- by 会员听sophie (2011/2/12 11:21:31)

我之前好像也选的是这个选项，不过现在我想的是：injured three times如果要修饰DS最好紧靠DS,在这个选项里离DS太远了，白勇语法笔记里面说，修饰语要尽可能靠近修饰对象，D选项中injured three times的这个位置导致它可能就近修饰吧。如果要是把它理解成状语的话，那么后面的and was discharged里面没有主语。
我也不是很确定是不是正确，看你能接受这个看法不？（之前没引用上）

作者: 翁羽凌虚 时间: 2011-2-12 16:49
嗯 GWD语法笔记里面还说了一句：分词尽量只出现一个逗号，不要在中间出现

作者: hyyyyyy 时间: 2011-2-12 19:57
逗号逗号 and结构基本就是考平行貌似还没有遇到你说的那种情况我也挺赞同凌虚mm的说法靠近修饰语
最后谢谢evelyn又长见识了话说我也上过新东方我们班笔记没这么全 rp不够哦

作者: 听sophie 时间: 2011-2-13 00:40

嗯 GWD语法笔记里面还说了一句：分词尽量只出现一个逗号，不要在中间出现

-- by 会员翁羽凌虚 (2011/2/12 16:49:35)

看了下大家的解释，总结了下都和你的理解一样，修饰语尽量靠近被修饰成分。
你的GWD笔记很有用~~我自己还没总结，啊……惭愧~呵呵
啊~对了，thx a lot~\(^o^)/~

作者: 听sophie 时间: 2011-2-13 00:43

逗号逗号 and结构基本就是考平行貌似还没有遇到你说的那种情况我也挺赞同凌虚mm的说法靠近修饰语
最后谢谢evelyn又长见识了话说我也上过新东方我们班笔记没这么全 rp不够哦

-- by 会员 hyyyyyy (2011/2/12 19:57:50)

看来GMAT考平行还是很多的~
其实说起来我也见过同学的XDF的GMAT笔记，也米有evelyn的那条~
可能是新总结的~
咱们就欢天喜地的接下吧~哈哈哈~

作者: 翁羽凌虚 时间: 2011-2-13 10:10
嘿嘿不客气使劲学使劲学~~~

作者: inuitniu 时间: 2011-2-13 22:21
如果选A的话不是一句话有两个谓语了吗？（joined和was injuryed）所以我当时选的也是D

作者: 听sophie 时间: 2011-2-13 22:42

如果选A的话不是一句话有两个谓语了吗？（joined和was injuryed）所以我当时选的也是D

-- by 会员 inuitniu (2011/2/13 22:21:46)

那到不至于两个谓语
因为中间有个连词and，是并列的~

作者: cptiger 时间: 2011-3-21 23:11

嗯 GWD语法笔记里面还说了一句：分词尽量只出现一个逗号，不要在中间出现

-- by 会员翁羽凌虚 (2011/2/12 16:49:35)

就是说分词要么在句首，要么在句尾，在中间出现就有可能错？
我这题开始也是选D，把injured three times作为DS的定语，但是确实离主语太远，就近无名词可修饰，所以错。

作者: cptiger 时间: 2011-3-21 23:13

become，go，remain，come是GMAT语法中不能变掉的词，俗称四大天王。XDF笔记。记住哦！

-- by 会员 evelyn205205 (2011/2/12 15:18:20)

这么绝对的规则，有没有反例啊，NN门请指正？偶的题目做得太少，还无法判断，先收下

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