标题: 送上一只本月完美模范狗 business vs official leader那篇 [打印本页] 作者: beMe 时间: 2010-11-30 00:03 标题: 送上一只本月完美模范狗 business vs official leader那篇 开始了！！非COPY,打字中... 1 1 V Historical examplesof both influential public officials and influential business leaders abound.（放哪儿都能用的个性概述）However,（这篇文章作者是连接词高手，这也是骗机器给高分的法宝）the power of the modern-era business leader is quite different from that of the government official.On blance,the CEOseems to be better positioned to influence the course of community and of nations.
Admittedly,the opportunities for the legislator to regulate commerce or of the jurist to dictate rules of equity are offcial and immediat.（二段开头给个长句，留个高分印象，但你要确保它是对的！）No private individual can hold that brand of influence.Yet official power is tempered by our check-and-balance system of government and,in the case of legislators,by the voting power of the electorate.Our business leaders are not so constrained,so their opportunities far exceed those of any public official.Moreover,powerful business leaders all too often seem to hold de facto legislative and judicial power by way of their direct influence over public officials,as the Clinton administration's fund-raising scandal of 1997 illuminated all too well.（例子放在句尾轻描淡写，评卷人容易看到）
The industrial and technological eras have bred such moguls of capitalism as Pullman,Rocketfeller,Carnegie,（他太好用了，很多ISSUE话题都可以扯他）and Gates,who by the nature of thier industries and their business savvy,not by force of law,have transformed our economy,the nature of work,and our very day-to-day existence.Of course,many modern-day public servants have made the most of their opportunities-for example,the crime-busting mayor Rudolph Giuliani and the new-dealing President Franklin Roosevelt.（罗斯福也是常用的）Yet their impact seems to pale next to those of our modern captains of industry.
In sum,modern business leaders,by virtue of the far-reaching impact of their industries and of their freedom from external constraints,have supplanted lawmakers as the great opportunists of the world and prime movers of society.（这一段要背下来，用词太地道了！）