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标题: 弱问,Basic English Grammar Rules的两个例句 [打印本页]

作者: 谷歌一下    时间: 2010-11-18 09:12
标题: 弱问,Basic English Grammar Rules的两个例句
请问,以下两题后面那个incorrect的哪里错了?我没看出来有问题啊,平时经常这么说话的
Correct: “Reading my mind, she gave me the delicious cookie.” Incorrect: “Reading my mind, the
cookie she gave me was delicious.”
Correct: “In the Middle Ages, the world was believed to be flat.” Incorrect: “In the Middle Ages,
the world was flat.”
作者: sdcar2010    时间: 2010-11-18 09:17
Can a cookie read your mind?

Was the world flat in ANY time?
作者: aeoluseros    时间: 2010-11-18 13:29
1. lz用你的名字提到的方法搜一下dangling modifier这个修辞错误就明白了
2. 这句话的意思是:中世纪,世界被认为是平的(而不是圆的)。所以不能像第二句那样写,因为世界从来没有"平"过。虽然现在有一个概念很流行叫flat world,但是是全球化的引申义,和这个句子没有关系。
作者: 谷歌一下    时间: 2010-11-19 10:23
哦,我明白啦。谢谢楼上两位热心的朋友




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