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作者: weiyu    时间: 2004-4-28 22:34
标题: [求助]OG74

74.            Growing competitive pressures may be encouraging auditors to bend the rules in favor of clients; auditors may, for instance, allow a questionable loan to remain on the books in order to maintain a bank’s profits on paper.


(A) clients; auditors may, for instance, allow


(B) clients, as an instance, to allow


(C) clients, like to allow


(D) clients, such as to be allowingA


(E) clients; which might, as an instance, be the allowing of


The first independent clause of the sentence describes a general situation; in A, the best choice, a second independent clause clearly and grammatically presents an example of this circumstance. Choice B uses as an instance ungrammatically: as an instance requires of to form such idiomatic constructions as “She cited x as an instance of y. Also, this construction cannot link infinitives such as to bend and to allow. The infinitive is again incorrect in C and D. C misuses like, a comparative preposition, to introduce an example. D requires by in place of to be. E, aside from being wordy and imprecise, uses the pronoun which to refer vaguely to the whole preceding clause rather than to a specific noun referent.



答案没问题:D requires by in place of to be 这里D变成 such as by allowing…在这可以作为一个正确选项吗?Growing competitive pressures…., such as by allowing这里allowing的施动者优先是growing competitive pressures, 逻辑上是auditors… rules.., such as by allowing.


作者: mariezhu    时间: 2004-4-28 22:49
In my view, it means "  to encourage <auditors to bend rules..  such as by allowing>"
作者: weiyu    时间: 2004-4-28 23:09

Thanks mariezhu.


But I am still puzzled.


As what you present, auditors to bend rules.. such as by allowing, I vote for your view because you eliminate the comma before such as. Consequently, logic subject of "allowing" is auditors, the parrallel structure is auditors....rules..such as...;


In D, a comma places before "such as", may the comma cause the ambiguous logic subject for "allowing"???


To be discussed....


作者: 而今迈步从头越    时间: 2005-1-22 15:38

同样的问题!

还有一点,such as可以接介词吗?


作者: LES    时间: 2005-1-22 15:41
可以的,不过那是名词的省略形式。
作者: 而今迈步从头越    时间: 2005-1-22 15:53
如果是省略的话,such as by allowing是如何省略的呢?还是ETS的这个解释并不意味着such as by allowing从语法上来讲是正确的呢?
作者: violetyang83    时间: 2005-4-2 22:54

I m confused by the same question above.


作者: closedeyes    时间: 2005-4-14 16:18
以下是引用weiyu在2004-4-28 23:09:00的发言:

Thanks mariezhu.


But I am still puzzled.


As what you present, auditors to bend rules.. such as by allowing, I vote for your view because you eliminate the comma before such as. Consequently, logic subject of "allowing" is auditors, the parrallel structure is auditors....rules..such as...;


In D, a comma places before "such as", may the comma cause the ambiguous logic subject for "allowing"???


To be discussed....



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请大家帮忙解答一下吧,谢谢!
作者: advantage    时间: 2005-6-22 13:20


如果D的逗号会引起歧义的话,那A岂不是也是有可能犯同一个错误?我觉得像举例这些词一般也有个“ 就近原则“


作者: brissa    时间: 2005-9-15 03:20
以下是引用而今迈步从头越在2005-1-22 15:53:00的发言:
如果是省略的话,such as by allowing是如何省略的呢?还是ETS的这个解释并不意味着such as by allowing从语法上来讲是正确的呢?


我觉得是这样省略的,nn帮忙看看对不对: ...encourage auditors to b end the rules in favor of clients by allowing ....


such as在这里是举例,所以直接加在方式方法by allowing前面即可。


作者: lyle    时间: 2005-9-15 04:49

可以是这样么:


“auditors to bend rules ... such as (auditors 省略)to allow..."


我觉得举例举的是“auditors to bend rules”


作者: titatita    时间: 2006-1-12 11:00

any result?


作者: jandjshi    时间: 2006-2-9 03:16

by allowing 举例说明to bent rules.


再看一句:


The rising cost of healthcare is forcing people over age of 40 to improve health status, such as by exercising and by eating balanced diet.


=> The rising cost is forcing people to improve health by exercising, by eating balanced diet, and etc.


更具体的我发在这29楼:http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=23&id=51449&star=3#1450352
[此贴子已经被作者于2006-2-9 5:46:52编辑过]

作者: roric    时间: 2006-5-31 17:56
以下是引用andrew_li在2005-7-21 0:15:00的发言:

I can't provide a comprehensive list of what can follow such as but by doing something should be one of the candidates. See the example below,

Reading can help you to improve your writing in many ways, such as by providing examples and giving you new topics to write about.


这个例子觉得要比上面的好,说明了such as by doing省略的是要举例说明的事情,如果补全我觉得应该是:such as (auditors bend the rules) by allowing。。。




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