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作者: appleontree    时间: 2010-9-8 00:01
标题: og12 88
88. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz tradition.

(A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted

(B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

(C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted

(D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

(E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both


为什么c有run on 的错误呢?

作者: appleontree    时间: 2010-9-8 00:05

作者: seyouji    时间: 2010-9-8 00:12
我觉得一句话说完优先
作者: 天使追梦    时间: 2010-9-8 00:18
yet连接两个句子,像but一样。
C里yet之前的那句没有v.
作者: qingbo    时间: 2010-9-8 12:26
肯定是run-on的错误

宏观来看

sb,yet he do sth

前面的sb只有主语没有 谓语,应该把后面的(yet he)去掉
作者: appleontree    时间: 2010-9-8 23:34
哦,我明白了~~O(∩_∩)O~谢谢大家啦~~




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