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作者: jinnling 时间: 2010-9-1 12:03
标题: 求教：prep-2-111（现在分词作伴随）

111. (30237-!-item-!-188;#058&004708)

Astronomers have uncovered evidence that a star that was as bright as the full moon exploding into

view 340,000 years ago, emitting dazzling radiation that could have disrupted Earth's protective

ozone layer and sunburned our Stone Age ancestors.

(A) that a star that was as bright as the full moon exploding into view 340,000 years ago, emitting

(B) that a star as bright as the full moon exploded into view 340,000 years ago, emitting

emitted

(D) of a star as bright as the full moon, exploding into view 340,000 years ago and emitting

(E) of a star as bright as the full moon that exploded into view 340,000 years ago and that emitted
答案是B。
我想问的是，emitting在句尾可以做伴随修饰 that a star...从句，而不直接修饰主句Astronomers have uncovered ..吗？

作者: 花子落落 时间: 2010-9-1 13:45
问一下B中that a star从句中谓语是神马？

作者: 安静的小兔 时间: 2010-10-3 15:37
同问，
不是一般 ing放在最后的时候会有修饰歧义吗？

例如PREP2 101

101. (29777-!-item-!-188;#058&004380)

The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.

(A) to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs
(B) to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing
(C) is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs
(D) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs
(E) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing

答案是D, B错的原因就是weighing后置修饰有歧义，可能修饰camcorder,也可能修饰句子主语company, 如果要修饰从句里的camcorder, 需要用连词连接。

那么 (B) that a star as bright as the full moon exploded into view 340,000 years ago, emitting
这里的emitting 按说也有修饰歧义呀！！！！

作者: 安静的小兔 时间: 2010-10-3 15:42
同问

prep101
101. (29777-!-item-!-188;#058&004380)

The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.

(A) to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs
(B) to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing
(C) is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs
(D) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs
(E) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing

答案D, B错的原因之一就是最后的weighing 修饰有歧义，如果要修饰which中的camcorder, 需要用连词连接

那么这里emitting为什么没修饰歧义呢？

作者: 安静的小兔 时间: 2010-10-3 15:44

问一下B中that a star从句中谓语是神马？

-- by 会员花子落落 (2010/9/1 13:45:48)

谓语是exploded

作者: jbc88 时间: 2010-10-3 16:05

同问，
不是一般 ing放在最后的时候会有修饰歧义吗？

例如PREP2 101

101. (29777-!-item-!-188;#058&004380)

The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.

(A) to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs
(B) to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing
(C) is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs
(D) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs
(E) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing

答案是D, B错的原因就是weighing后置修饰有歧义，可能修饰camcorder,也可能修饰句子主语company, 如果要修饰从句里的camcorder, 需要用连词连接。

那么 (B) that a star as bright as the full moon exploded into view 340,000 years ago, emitting
这里的emitting 按说也有修饰歧义呀！！！！
-- by 会员安静的小兔 (2010/10/3 15:37:47)

首先，我们看LZ的句子。Astronomers have uncovered evidence that a star as bright as the full moon exploded into view 340,000 years ago, emitting... 这里，我们看句子的主语是Astronomers have uncovered evidence。而emitting做为伴随状语修饰a star（那个从句里的主语）

再看你的句子：is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing。从逻辑上看weighing是修饰 camcorder 或者computer的。注意，无论是主句里的还是从句里的，这2个全是宾语。

GMAT的语法题里，这种ing表示伴随的，都是由主语发生的动作。怎么说呢？分词跟着主语走就对了。

也许我说清楚了吧。。大家继续探讨

作者: 安静的小兔 时间: 2010-10-3 22:58

-- by 会员 jbc88 (2010/10/3 16:05:40)

ing.都是跟宾语这个说法确定吗？好像以前有专门说明

那么楼主的句子没有主语的修饰歧义吗？

作者: jbc88 时间: 2010-10-4 08:49

-- by 会员 jbc88 (2010/10/3 16:05:40)

ing.都是跟宾语这个说法确定吗？好像以前有专门说明

那么楼主的句子没有主语的修饰歧义吗？

-- by 会员安静的小兔 (2010/10/3 22:58:23)

跟主语呀。我没说跟宾语。

ing分词变化大，可以做很多成分。我说跟主语是否符合GMAT的规律，有望探讨。

刚才查了点题，基本上都是符合的。小兔同学可以去语法难点那里看看分词的问题。前人的经验很珍贵。

楼主的歧义在哪呢？我没看出。请指出

作者: ak007 时间: 2011-7-9 13:08

111. (30237-!-item-!-188;#058&004708)

Astronomers have uncovered evidence that a star that was as bright as the full moon exploding into

view 340,000 years ago, emitting dazzling radiation that could have disrupted Earth's protective

ozone layer and sunburned our Stone Age ancestors.

请教一下句子未划线部分

have disrupted Earth's protective ozone layer and sunburned our Stone Age ancestors.
这里sunburned前是省略了have么？可以这样省略么？

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