标题: OG12-38 求教！！！！！！！！！！！！！！ [打印本页] 作者: jianhu8246 时间: 2010-8-31 20:52 标题: OG12-38 求教！！！！！！！！！！！！！！ 38. In 1850, Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on Women, arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights and for changes in the married women’s property laws. (A) arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights (B) arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal rights for women (C) a treatise that advocates women’s equal political and legal rights (D) a treatise advocating women’s equal political and legal rights (E) a treatise that argued for equal political and legal rights for women Parallelism; Rhetorical construction
我就想不明白了 A B的 ARGUING IN A TREATISE 怎么就 WORDY AND IMPRECISE 了？ 那里就啰嗦和不准确了啊 请NN给个解释啊! 像这样的类型的题目 如何判断到底是怎么啰嗦 了 毕竟都没给出很明显的错误作者: sophia000 时间: 2010-9-1 09:20
因为这里可以直接用同位语，而使用arguing in 后面又加了a treatise显然比直接用同位语要wordy作者: angelcity 时间: 2011-6-17 00:08
恩,我觉得是"published her discourse on women"后面接着又说"arguing in a treatise for women"有wordy的感觉