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作者: fannybeibei 时间: 2010-8-19 21:21
标题: SOS gwd-10-2~~~~~~~~~快考了~~跪求NN出手相助了
Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore refused to carry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so.
A. Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore
B. When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he
C. Since he was very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, so Charles Lindbergh
D. Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh
E. Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh

其余选项我都清楚了，只是想请问，为什么这里D being就是不对的，我觉得这里的being也不一定错呀
比如OG 12 101
101. Being heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, is likely to make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
BEING就可以了，那101为什么不改成Heavily committed to a course of action,...呢？可以这么改么？

作者: fannybeibei 时间: 2010-8-19 22:57
UPUP

作者: aeoluseros 时间: 2010-8-19 23:36
有了being不是绝对性错误，而是相对性错误，因为D选项里being是现在分词做形容词，去掉being逻辑意思没有丝毫变化，所以去掉being更加简洁。应该是选E对吗？
101题里面being是引导动名词短语，去掉being就没有主语了。

作者: shiyyyy 时间: 2010-8-20 16:37
个人愚见：

问题不在being,而在于the reason that,应改为the reaseonwhy

作者: dandy8848 时间: 2010-8-20 17:43
选A？
个人愚见~~
D并没有错，只是不够好，他改变了句子的中心。依据大仙说法，型和，但意不和~~
101的being非常有必要，一个被动的动作做主语，去了以后句子就没有主语了~

作者: weihua89 时间: 2010-8-20 18:27
这道题的答案是不是e?

作者: derek22604 时间: 2010-8-20 20:02
我今天也做到这题了…
我觉得D里面的being累赘，且用being的话reason后面要用why而不是that；OG里面那道题是being... is likely to, 作主语，和这道题不一样~

作者: dzz_0611 时间: 2010-8-20 20:24
这题的正确选项是E么。。。以下为个一意见，仅供参考。如有不对，希望指正。

Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh refused to carry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so.
这是D选项完整的句子结构。分析一下，主语是：Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane 谓语是：was 宾语为 the reason + 从句。

题目中之所以不选择D选项并不是因为Being使用错误，而是awkward and wordy（OG上经常使用的词汇)。
GMAT中SC应该是选择相对更好的一项，那么该选项相对于E选项表达：
Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, S V O.
其实更加详细的写法应该是
Charles Lindbergh was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, so S V O.
但是从句中的S 与前面原因中的主语一致，可以一起省略掉主语和be动词。这样就变成了E选项的形式。
个人认为这是这道题的考点所在，即原因状语从句的省略：当从句主句主语一致时，省略主语和be动词为优。
而Being adj was the reason 这个结构，则完全的被这个省略句包括的含义所覆盖。而且，表达更加复杂。不符合GMAT推崇的简洁原则。

作者: fannybeibei 时间: 2010-8-20 20:44
对，是选E
非常强烈谢谢各位好心人！！！！！！

太感动了，感谢大家了！！！

作者: kkjj2222 时间: 2010-8-31 00:51
还有一点不明白

Charles Lindbergh was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, so S V O.
但是从句中的S 与前面原因中的主语一致，可以一起省略掉主语和be动词。这样就变成了E选项的形式。
个人认为这是这道题的考点所在，即原因状语从句的省略：当从句主句主语一致时，省略主语和be动词为优。

主句和从句主语一致，省略的应该是从句的主语和be吧，从句是when后面的部分，可是E省略的是主句的主语阿，这样也对么？
谢谢~~

作者: heidiym 时间: 2014-8-4 22:09

aeoluseros 发表于 2010-8-19 23:36
有了being不是绝对性错误，而是相对性错误，因为D选项里being是现在分词做形容词，去掉being逻辑意思没有丝 ...

老帖了，但是看到这个解释还是有个疑问呀，望看到的NN解答！这道题里的D选项我认为不是现在分词做形容词呀，因为去掉Being的话句子就没有主语了，就变成了ADJ+was了。但是101里的句式也是being+adj+is，所以我觉得这个句子结构是一样的呀。我认为being在这里并没有语法问题的吧？不是很懂哪里跟101中的不同唉。。

虽然这道题作对了，但是吧，我觉得E里没有用到表示因果的词，让我小纠结了一下哇。。

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