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作者: guang722 时间: 2010-8-18 10:13
标题: SC大全 508 求教！谢谢！
508. Monitoring heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
(A) Monitoring heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.
(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients’ exercise, as well as athletes exercising.
(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients’ exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

选C。不是很明白。

作者: lizhen5231747 时间: 2010-8-18 11:34
我觉得这是在考redundancy吧，就是两帮人人在做exercise的问题，一个是heart patients另一个是athletes，ABDE都是赘述，应该把exercise合并，更简洁明了。

作者: coloryoung 时间: 2010-10-17 14:05
From BY:

平行结构

as well as和both…and…，前后形式要对称，概念要对等。

ABD as well as 前后exercise 与exercising形式不对称。

E both…and…前后exercising 与exercise形式不对称。

永远错误的形式

AB doing sth. is done by sb.永远错，doing和 done意思上重复。

不能改变原句的合理重心

原句broadcasting放在名词后作定语修饰transmitters。

D broadcasting放在句首作状语，改变原句合理重心。

但是我觉得C还是不够好：as well as ……本来在原句中是插入语，但在C 中被用作主语，其实是改变原意和句子中心了～～

恭请NN指点！

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