标题: og11紫皮 19 提问~~ [打印本页] 作者: fishmi 时间: 2010-8-13 16:11 标题: og11紫皮 19 提问~~ while depressed property values can hurt some large investors,they are potentially devastating for homeownwes,whose equity -in many cases representing a life's savings-can plunge or even disappear. A they are potentially devastating for homeowners ,whose B they can potentially devastate homeowners in that their C for homeowners,they are potentially devastating,because their D for homeowners,it is potentiallydevastating in that their E it can potentially devastate homeowners,whose
OG上说答案B“ can potentially" is redundant, ”in that their" is wordy,awkward and ambiguous.为什么啊，为什么啊，不明白。 到底怎么样才算 wordy awkward ambiguous啊作者: fishmi 时间: 2010-8-13 21:59
有没有大侠来回答一下呀作者: teddybearj4 时间: 2012-4-19 15:59
can 和 potentially 都是表示可能性，两个都用重复。 their 这里应该跟前面的they 指代一致，那就都是指代values，但句意应是指代homeowners。