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标题: 请NN帮助一下,写完AI发觉特像AA,是否有问题? [打印本页]

作者: ansonyulin    时间: 2010-7-28 14:10
标题: 请NN帮助一下,写完AI发觉特像AA,是否有问题?
在联系黄金80的时候,遇到一道AI,题目是“The rise of multinational corporations is leading to global homogeneity. Because people everywhere are beginning to want thesame products and services, regional differences are rapidly disappearing.”

我的思路是:
1.开始要same products 和 services---> unneccesarily 导致 regional differences rapidly disappearing,然后举他因;
2.即使regional differences rapidly disappear了---> 也不会促使global homogeneity leading by the rise of multinational corporations,还是举他因;

最后得出结论,disagree.

写完回头一看,咋感觉跟argument一样,如果在现实考试,是否会不妥?还是这样也可以,只要论清楚观点就好?

请NN指教一下,谢谢!

作者: lucymouse    时间: 2010-7-29 14:29
北美范文里就有AI写得很象AA的.




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