AI: "The value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes.” 我是采取各打五十大板的策略的，开头就复述一下作者的观点，然后指出其可取和不足指出，然后说我的观点是基础一下原因考虑的。第二段就是说作者的可取之处，这段的例子我承认是很单薄没有什么说服力；第三段就之处business success在衡量社会发展方面的重要性，而且是支撑scientific and artistic achievements的基础。最后一段基本是山峰的模板了。
AA: “Across town in the Park Hill district, the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club have all had business increases over the past two years. Capital Idea should therefore invest in the Roxy Playhouse, the Slice-o’-Pizza, and the Divot Golf Club, three new businesses in the Irongate district. As a condition, we should require them to participate in a special program: Any customer who patronizes two of the businesses will receive a substantial discount at the third. By motivating customers to patronize all three, we will thus contribute to the profitability of each and maximize our return.”
也是根据山峰的模板修改而成的，涵盖了三种罪。
作者结论：Capital Idea should therefore invest in the Roxy Playhouse, the Slice-o’-Pizza, and the Divot Golf Club, three new businesses in the Irongate district.
反驳原因： 1. 事物是变化发展的，Across town in the Park Hill district, the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club have all had business increases over the past two years，不能得出今年或者未来就能持续增长。 2. 必要性，capital idea不一定非得投资新的公司，可以投资原来的三家公司，即Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club 。 3. 无理假设：By motivating customers to patronize all three, we will thus contribute to the profitability of each and maximize our return。消费者不一定会买账这个program.作者: aileentommy 时间: 2010-7-14 13:06
没有回复阿，我再顶一下吧。