709：
707：其中707-AI1第4次出现
708：
710：
增加709JJ，其中只有709-AI1为新内容，其余4篇均为重复出现~
712：
增加710和712部分内容~~不好意思，这两天JJ比较少~~
712-AI1第三次出现哦！
714： JJ好多哦
补充701-AA1原文 629-AA1原文 708-AA2原文 702-AA6原文 感谢zcool童鞋哦
增加713和714内容
716：JJ好多~重复好多~
增加715内容，感谢ddcarolyn考古~
716明天上午上~sorry，实在太busy了
717：增加716内容，重复好多~~
719：
增加716-AI7原文和出处： 新题库107
增加717内容
ps：718和719目前还没有同学贡献哦~
719晚：
增加718和719内容~~
721：注意新题
增加915-AA4 AI4
增加720和部分721（相信明天还会有721的出来）
722：注意新题
增加了721-AA4 AI4
增加722
725：
增加723，724，725内容~这几天周末，JJ比较少。
725-AI1（celebrities）已经出现6次了，大家关注~
727：
增加726内容，均为重复题目~
这几天JJ比较少，我尽力挖~~
730：增加727和728，均为重复题目~~
不好意思， 今天去签证了，耽误了给大家结贴~~希望大家谅解！！
作者: 葵之夏影 时间: 2010-6-30 10:41
沙发~非常感谢LZ！
作者: mikiluang 时间: 2010-6-30 10:47
加油!!加油!!!
作者: zcool 时间: 2010-6-30 10:55
ding~
加油
作者: xiaoxi_1010 时间: 2010-6-30 11:02
jia you~~~!
作者: passiona 时间: 2010-6-30 11:03
非常感谢！
作者: simone0701 时间: 2010-6-30 11:22
THAXXXXXXXXXX
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-6-30 11:42
对，就是做成excel的，看着清晰一些~
作者: 荷叶饭 时间: 2010-6-30 12:09
善良的人儿~~加油加油~
作者: hukeab 时间: 2010-6-30 12:24
加油加油！谢谢！
作者: efsefs 时间: 2010-6-30 12:50
加油!!加油!!!
作者: didiflute 时间: 2010-6-30 12:58
绝对支持！强烈感谢！~~~~
作者: gmm03 时间: 2010-6-30 13:17
thanks a lot
作者: wys88918 时间: 2010-6-30 13:31
thanks~
作者: fenglanyu 时间: 2010-6-30 14:01
顶~~~晚上在线等哦~~
作者: Avatar800 时间: 2010-6-30 17:13
顶一下~多谢了~~~辛苦
作者: liydzz 时间: 2010-6-30 18:04
lz~~ 弱弱问一句啊 怎么看是题库中的哪题啊？
作者: gmm03 时间: 2010-6-30 19:56
在GMAT AWA 224篇范文中找到了几篇Argument
6.27
34. The following appeared as part of a plan proposed by an executive of the Easy Credit Company to the president.
“The Easy Credit Company would gain an advantage over competing credit card services if we were to donate a portion of the proceeds from the use of our cards to a well-known environmental organization in exchange for the use of its symbol or logo on our card. Since a recent poll shows that a large percentage of the public is concerned about environmental issues, this policy would attract new customers, increase use among existing customers, and enable us to charge interest rates that are higher than the lowest ones available.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
6.28
11. The following appeared in the editorial section of a local newspaper.
“In the first four years that Montoya has served as mayor of the city of San Perdito, the population has decreased and the unemployment rate has increased. Two businesses have closed for each new business that has opened. Under Varro, who served as mayor for four years before Montoya, the unemployment rate decreased and the population increased. Clearly, the residents of San Perdito would be best served if they voted Montoya out of office and reelected Varro.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
32. The following appeared in the editorial section of a West Cambria newspaper.
“A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
106. The following appeared in a memo to the Saluda town council from the town’s business manager.
“Research indicates that those who exercise regularly are hospitalized less than half as often as those who don’t exercise. By providing a well-equipped gym for Saluda’s municipal employees, we should be able to reduce the cost of our group health insurance coverage by approximately 50% and thereby achieve a balanced town budget.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
100. The following appeared as part of an article in the book section of a newspaper.
“Currently more and more books are becoming available in electronic form — either free-of-charge on the Internet or for a very low price-per-book on compact disc *. Thus literary classics are likely to be read more widely than ever before. People who couldn’t have purchased these works at bookstore prices will now be able to read them for little or no money; similarly, people who find it inconvenient to visit libraries and wait for books to be returned by other patrons will now have access to whatever classic they choose from their home or work computers. This increase in access to literary classics will radically affect the public taste in reading, creating a far more sophisticated and learned reading audience than has ever existed before.”
*A “compact disc” is a small portable disc capable of storing relatively large amounts of data that can be read by a computer.
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
作者: panda1988 时间: 2010-6-30 20:18
热心人阿～～谢谢！！
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-6-30 21:42
额太感谢
在GMAT AWA 224篇范文中找到了几篇Argument
6.27
34. The following appeared as part of a plan proposed by an executive of the Easy Credit Company to the president.
“The Easy Credit Company would gain an advantage over competing credit card services if we were to donate a portion of the proceeds from the use of our cards to a well-known environmental organization in exchange for the use of its symbol or logo on our card. Since a recent poll shows that a large percentage of the public is concerned about environmental issues, this policy would attract new customers, increase use among existing customers, and enable us to charge interest rates that are higher than the lowest ones available.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
6.28
11. The following appeared in the editorial section of a local newspaper.
“In the first four years that Montoya has served as mayor of the city of San Perdito, the population has decreased and the unemployment rate has increased. Two businesses have closed for each new business that has opened. Under Varro, who served as mayor for four years before Montoya, the unemployment rate decreased and the population increased. Clearly, the residents of San Perdito would be best served if they voted Montoya out of office and reelected Varro.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
32. The following appeared in the editorial section of a West Cambria newspaper.
“A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
106. The following appeared in a memo to the Saluda town council from the town’s business manager.
“Research indicates that those who exercise regularly are hospitalized less than half as often as those who don’t exercise. By providing a well-equipped gym for Saluda’s municipal employees, we should be able to reduce the cost of our group health insurance coverage by approximately 50% and thereby achieve a balanced town budget.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
100. The following appeared as part of an article in the book section of a newspaper.
“Currently more and more books are becoming available in electronic form — either free-of-charge on the Internet or for a very low price-per-book on compact disc *. Thus literary classics are likely to be read more widely than ever before. People who couldn’t have purchased these works at bookstore prices will now be able to read them for little or no money; similarly, people who find it inconvenient to visit libraries and wait for books to be returned by other patrons will now have access to whatever classic they choose from their home or work computers. This increase in access to literary classics will radically affect the public taste in reading, creating a far more sophisticated and learned reading audience than has ever existed before.”
*A “compact disc” is a small portable disc capable of storing relatively large amounts of data that can be read by a computer.
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
-- by 会员 gmm03 (2010/6/30 19:56:28)
太感谢了~~我回来整理上~~
我手上只有XDF的紫皮，og12和黄金80篇，看的还不太熟呢~会尽量把里面有的原题都写上的~
你的224题库有电子版吗？可以给我一份吗？
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-6-30 21:44
lz~~ 弱弱问一句啊 怎么看是题库中的哪题啊？
-- by 会员 liydzz (2010/6/30 18:04:29)
弱弱的回答一下：因为我不知道大家用的是哪套题库，所以，如果找到题库的原题，就全都给贴上去了。那些带着中文的，就是考过的童鞋提供且我还没有再题库中找到的~~
作者: sealily16 时间: 2010-6-30 22:51
辛苦~~~加油~
作者: didiflute 时间: 2010-6-30 23:26
加油~~~谢谢楼主~~
作者: gmm03 时间: 2010-6-30 23:33
[/quote]
太感谢了~~我回来整理上~~
我手上只有XDF的紫皮，og12和黄金80篇，看的还不太熟呢~会尽量把里面有的原题都写上的~
你的224题库有电子版吗？可以给我一份吗？-- by 会员 annysweety (2010/6/30 21:42:20)
[/quote]
作者: gmm03 时间: 2010-6-30 23:37
刚上传了GMAT AWA 224篇范文，见楼上， 可用Ctrl+F 搜索关键字找到相对应的题。
作者: gmm03 时间: 2010-6-30 23:56
6.28 AI
13. “Responsibility for preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, not to government.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
24. “A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
作者: panda1988 时间: 2010-7-1 00:31
很有用！！
有心人啊~~
作者: panda1988 时间: 2010-7-1 00:42
发现这个月初还是有重复上个月坐稳JJ里的题
如AI 19 Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to damage the organization as they are to improve it. 也是题库中142 （根据上个月的整理JJ）
AI20 A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official.
AI6 尊重个人差异那个
AI42 Celebrities那个。。。
楼主可以把原来的直接复制过来就ok了，而且经过讨论之后的有详细的提纲~
希望有所帮助，呵呵
作者: zcool 时间: 2010-7-1 02:10
lz能在每个题目后面加上出处（题库编号）吗？这样更清楚的能找到范文之类的。。
作者: old_david 时间: 2010-7-1 11:17
thanks~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
作者: 葛佳 时间: 2010-7-1 12:08
up
作者: ruguokey_20 时间: 2010-7-1 13:14
灰常感谢。。。。
作者: wsy1018 时间: 2010-7-1 13:16
谢LZ~!
作者: icyblue 时间: 2010-7-1 14:36
强烈感谢！ 牛流满面
作者: cissyH 时间: 2010-7-1 16:17
顶
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-1 20:24
刚上传了GMAT AWA 224篇范文，见楼上， 可用Ctrl+F 搜索关键字找到相对应的题。
-- by 会员 gmm03 (2010/6/30 23:37:31)
太感谢啦
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-1 20:26
发现这个月初还是有重复上个月坐稳JJ里的题
如AI 19 Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to damage the organization as they are to improve it. 也是题库中142 （根据上个月的整理JJ）
AI20 A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official.
AI6 尊重个人差异那个
AI42 Celebrities那个。。。
楼主可以把原来的直接复制过来就ok了，而且经过讨论之后的有详细的提纲~
希望有所帮助，呵呵
-- by 会员 panda1988 (2010/7/1 0:42:30)
有心人呀~~非常感谢！！
说真的，我还都没看上月的坐稳JJ呢~~一些考古的也会出现，如果大家发现的话，一定要贴出来呀！！
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-1 20:44
发现这个月初还是有重复上个月坐稳JJ里的题
如AI 19 Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to damage the organization as they are to improve it. 也是题库中142 （根据上个月的整理JJ）
AI20 A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official.
AI6 尊重个人差异那个
AI42 Celebrities那个。。。
楼主可以把原来的直接复制过来就ok了，而且经过讨论之后的有详细的提纲~
希望有所帮助，呵呵
-- by 会员 panda1988 (2010/7/1 0:42:30)
Panda，你说的题库是AWA224题吗？
作者: dingjielin 时间: 2010-7-1 21:14
狗狗里的第一篇作文好像是2-3月作文狗里的，LZ可以查查。
作者: dingjielin 时间: 2010-7-1 21:18
找到了 LZ看看 斜体字是思路
The following appeared as part of a plan proposed by an executive of the Easy Credit Company to the president.
“The Easy Credit Company would gain an advantage over competing credit card services if we were to donate a portion of the proceeds from the use of our cards to a well-known environmental organization in exchange for the use of its symbol or logo on our card. Since a recent poll shows that a large percentage of the public is concerned about environmental issues, this policy would attract new customers, increase use among existing customers, and enable us to charge interest rates that are higher than the lowest ones available.”
Easy信贷公司的一个经营主管向董事长提交的一份计划：
如果我们将信用卡所得的利润中的一部分捐给一个知名的环保组织换取在我们的信用卡上使用他们的标识的权利，Easy信贷公司将在信用卡服务的竞争中得到很大好处。由于最近的民调显示，很多人都关心环境问题，这一计划将吸引新顾客，提高现有顾客的使用量，并使我们得到比最低利润率要高的利润率。
Portion: (n)部分 ; poll: (n)民調
Ans: 1.use the symbol or logo of the environment organization will not sure to attract the new customers.
2.the company will not sure to charge higher interest rates than before from the new customers.
A. The arguer fails to take into account other relevant factors－the interest rates charged for the use of the card, the acceptability of the card in other business, services provided by the issuing company, and the reliability of the issuing company, etc.－which are even more important than the environment concern when a consumer is making a choice among available credit cards.
B. The arguer unfairly assumes that the raised interest rates of the East Credit Company as a result of its donation to the environment organization will not exert negative effect on the card’s attractiveness to consumers.
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-1 21:34
找到了 LZ看看 斜体字是思路
The following appeared as part of a plan proposed by an executive of the Easy Credit Company to the president.
“The Easy Credit Company would gain an advantage over competing credit card services if we were to donate a portion of the proceeds from the use of our cards to a well-known environmental organization in exchange for the use of its symbol or logo on our card. Since a recent poll shows that a large percentage of the public is concerned about environmental issues, this policy would attract new customers, increase use among existing customers, and enable us to charge interest rates that are higher than the lowest ones available.”
Easy信贷公司的一个经营主管向董事长提交的一份计划：
如果我们将信用卡所得的利润中的一部分捐给一个知名的环保组织换取在我们的信用卡上使用他们的标识的权利，Easy信贷公司将在信用卡服务的竞争中得到很大好处。由于最近的民调显示，很多人都关心环境问题，这一计划将吸引新顾客，提高现有顾客的使用量，并使我们得到比最低利润率要高的利润率。
Portion: (n)部分 ; poll: (n)民調
Ans: 1.use the symbol or logo of the environment organization will not sure to attract the new customers.
2.the company will not sure to charge higher interest rates than before from the new customers.
A. The arguer fails to take into account other relevant factors－the interest rates charged for the use of the card, the acceptability of the card in other business, services provided by the issuing company, and the reliability of the issuing company, etc.－which are even more important than the environment concern when a consumer is making a choice among available credit cards.
B. The arguer unfairly assumes that the raised interest rates of the East Credit Company as a result of its donation to the environment organization will not exert negative effect on the card’s attractiveness to consumers.
-- by 会员 dingjielin (2010/7/1 21:18:26)
好细心的童鞋~~非常感谢~~这个在AWA224的题库里也有，我在这次的重新编辑中，加入了相应的AWA224题号，里面也写了一些思路~~你也参考一下吧~咱们互相参考，加油
作者: grogr 时间: 2010-7-2 01:05
LZ…… 麻烦把频率变化标出来吧~ 像XX日 新增： 频率上升：
(>^ω^<) 这样大家隔一段时间再来看，只用看频率上升和新增的题就好咯~
举例哦~
6月9日
新增：31 16 32 122 33 52 34 32
频率增加：11 mining technology 5 cereals 13 39 4 92 25 14 29 B1 7 34 27 lay off
作者: Hugsy 时间: 2010-7-2 20:15
LZ，你可不可以在总结的时候，把思路也写进去~~~
作者: nowwsy 时间: 2010-7-2 20:16
LZ，你可不可以在总结的时候，把思路也写进去~~~
-- by 会员 Hugsy (2010/7/2 20:15:02)
。。。。。。。
太高难度了。。。。。。。
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-2 20:18
LZ，你可不可以在总结的时候，把思路也写进去~~~
-- by 会员 Hugsy (2010/7/2 20:15:02)
童鞋~~咱们的excel里面有对应的题库号码，大多数同学最后都会参考AWA224复习的，里面有详细的范例~~你也可以参考一下啦~~等月中的时候，咱们看看那个题目重复频率特别大，再考虑是不是写一个总的思路吧~~
毕竟大家都会准备自己最顺手的思路的~
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-2 20:22
LZ…… 麻烦把频率变化标出来吧~ 像XX日 新增： 频率上升：
(>^ω^<) 这样大家隔一段时间再来看，只用看频率上升和新增的题就好咯~
举例哦~
6月9日
新增：31 16 32 122 33 52 34 32
频率增加：11 mining technology 5 cereals 13 39 4 92 25 14 29 B1 7 34 27 lay off
-- by 会员 grogr (2010/7/2 1:05:01)
童鞋，
咱们再excel里面统计了每个题出现的频率，我觉得大家看数字比较直观。而且凡是重复的题，在备注里面都会用黄色背景加强的~你可以直接找到那些题都在哪天出现过。
新增的内容，我在主贴里面写了呀。每次更新都会写的~~
作者: zcool 时间: 2010-7-2 23:32
LZ…… 麻烦把频率变化标出来吧~ 像XX日 新增： 频率上升：
(>^ω^<) 这样大家隔一段时间再来看，只用看频率上升和新增的题就好咯~
举例哦~
6月9日
新增：31 16 32 122 33 52 34 32
频率增加：11 mining technology 5 cereals 13 39 4 92 25 14 29 B1 7 34 27 lay off
-- by 会员 grogr (2010/7/2 1:05:01)
童鞋，
咱们再excel里面统计了每个题出现的频率，我觉得大家看数字比较直观。而且凡是重复的题，在备注里面都会用黄色背景加强的~你可以直接找到那些题都在哪天出现过。
新增的内容，我在主贴里面写了呀。每次更新都会写的~~
-- by 会员 annysweety (2010/7/2 20:22:58)
lz最好写到excel里面哦。。这样看起来方便。。。个人还是觉得还按照频率降序排版好。。
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-3 09:07
LZ…… 麻烦把频率变化标出来吧~ 像XX日 新增： 频率上升：
(>^ω^<) 这样大家隔一段时间再来看，只用看频率上升和新增的题就好咯~
举例哦~
6月9日
新增：31 16 32 122 33 52 34 32
频率增加：11 mining technology 5 cereals 13 39 4 92 25 14 29 B1 7 34 27 lay off
-- by 会员 grogr (2010/7/2 1:05:01)
童鞋，
咱们再excel里面统计了每个题出现的频率，我觉得大家看数字比较直观。而且凡是重复的题，在备注里面都会用黄色背景加强的~你可以直接找到那些题都在哪天出现过。
新增的内容，我在主贴里面写了呀。每次更新都会写的~~
-- by 会员 annysweety (2010/7/2 20:22:58)
lz最好写到excel里面哦。。这样看起来方便。。。个人还是觉得还按照频率降序排版好。。
-- by 会员 zcool (2010/7/2 23:32:02)
你可以调整成自己prefer的形式~
作者: yousk 时间: 2010-7-3 16:38
这个月的这些题在题库里很少有诶..比如"celebrities" 那题．．都找不着，大伙都在哪找的提纲讨论啊？
作者: bzkf 时间: 2010-7-3 19:35
感谢楼主的无私奉献！
楼上的可以参考一下关于“celebrities”的这个帖子。
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_AWA/thread-458876-1-1.html
作者: lionkee 时间: 2010-7-3 20:05
加油 谢谢啦
作者: windypig123 时间: 2010-7-4 09:28
哈哈 谢谢LZ 嘻嘻
作者: luoboG 时间: 2010-7-4 17:17
AA2：The following appeared in a letter from a part-owner of a small retail clothing chain to her business partner:
“Commercial real estate prices have been rising steadily in the Sandida Heights neighborhood for several years, while the prices in the adjacent neighborhood of Palm Grove have remained the same. It seems obvious, then, that a retail space in Sandida Heights must now be much more expensive than a similar space in Palm Grove, which was not the case several years ago. So, it appears that retail spaces in Sandida Heights are now overpriced relative to those in Palm Grove. Therefore, it would be in our financial interest to purchase a retail space in Palm Grove rather than in Sandida Heights.”
求思路！！谢谢~~~
作者: yoshimihoku 时间: 2010-7-4 17:34
AWA224-34
这是什么意思啊？？
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-4 17:42
AWA224-34
这是什么意思啊？？
-- by 会员 yoshimihoku (2010/7/4 17:34:23)
GMAT AWA 224篇范文的第34篇
作者: yoshimihoku 时间: 2010-7-4 18:01
AA2：The following appeared in a letter from a part-owner of a small retail clothing chain to her business partner:
“Commercial real estate prices have been rising steadily in the Sandida Heights neighborhood for several years, while the prices in the adjacent neighborhood of Palm Grove have remained the same. It seems obvious, then, that a retail space in Sandida Heights must now be much more expensive than a similar space in Palm Grove, which was not the case several years ago. So, it appears that retail spaces in Sandida Heights are now overpriced relative to those in Palm Grove. Therefore, it would be in our financial interest to purchase a retail space in Palm Grove rather than in Sandida Heights.”
求思路！！谢谢~~~
-- by 会员 luoboG (2010/7/4 17:17:00)
fact(commercial re price rise in SH several years) fact(commercial re price remain in PG)
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conclusion1(retail spaci in SH more expensive>in PG now, not before)/assumption of conclusion 2
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conclusion2(retail space in SH overpriced)/assumption of conclusion 3
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conclusion3(we should by PG rather than SH)
驳斥如下：
<1> SH价格稳步上涨，PG价格不变，推出SH价格远比PG贵
瞎说~~~如果SH原来暴便宜，PG暴贵呢？
比如你拿成都跟上海比，上海房价基本稳定在2.5万，成都（举个例子，或者其他山沟沟）作为新开发区房价节节攀升从8000涨到16000翻了一倍，但是你能说成都比上海房价高吗？
<2>retail space价格SH比PG高，推出SH价格overpriced
瞎说~~overprice是不合理的增长、定价过高，但是如果SH是合理增长、定价适中呢？（这里最好找一个跟成都上海不同的反例）
比如原来SH的房价由于种种历史原因被低估，比如SH是个新城市（比如海上新造的岛），政府为了吸引人去住，给出1元/平米的房价；后来海上新城轰动了大家都要去，价格也就被合理的抬上来了，你能说他overprice吗？可能还没到合理的price呢，比如海上新城应该合理在5万，但是它现在才从1元涨到了2万5。
<3>因为SH价格overprice了，所以我们为了financial interest要买PG
1）谁说PG就不overprice了？它不过remain，如果它several years一直都overprice呢？比如北京房价居高不下那么多年，其实都是泡沫~~~
2）【思路】有什么城市，它已经overprice了，而另一个没有overprice，我们还是要买它？
很明显，上海/北京已经overprice了，但是这样的城市投资回报率高啊~~它继续涨啊！
如果SH之后仍然一路上涨，那不是一个超级好的ROI么？但是PG多年不涨，投了钱也被套牢，谁买呀
这是用XDF老师教的方法分析的，供楼上参考
作者: zcool 时间: 2010-7-4 20:26
6.28--AA9：“Since Disc Depot, the music store on the next block, began a new radio advertising campaign last year, its business has grown dramatically, as evidenced by
the large increase in foot traffic into the store. While the Disc Depot’s owners have apparently become wealthy enough to retire, profits at Carlo’s
Clothing have remained stagnant for the past three years. In order to boost our sales and profits, we should therefore switch from newspaper advertising to
frequent radio advertisements like those for Disc Depot.”
这一题在新的题库中是有的，AA124，思路可以参考AWA224-AA13：
13. The following appeared as part of a campaign to sell advertising time on a local radio station to local businesses.
“The Cumquat Cafe began advertising on our local radio station this year and was delighted to see its business increase by 10 percent over last year’s totals. Their success shows you how you can use radio advertising to make your business more profitable.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
作者: yunyunnon 时间: 2010-7-4 20:33
强烈感谢LZ excel 制作 ~
作者: 荷叶饭 时间: 2010-7-4 20:35
LZ辛苦啦~俺觉得还是用word更方便一些…用表格似乎不方便我们在上面写作文思路什么的…当然我只是小小建议…要是太麻烦的话，LZ还是按自己的想法来吧…
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-4 21:31
LZ辛苦啦~俺觉得还是用word更方便一些…用表格似乎不方便我们在上面写作文思路什么的…当然我只是小小建议…要是太麻烦的话，LZ还是按自己的想法来吧…
-- by 会员 荷叶饭 (2010/7/4 20:35:40)
刚开始总结的时候，也和一些童鞋商量了一下，觉得表格看起来更清晰方便~~所以就用喽~~
每个人都有自己prefer的形式，众口难调~~~~~大家可以自己修改一下啦~~~
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-4 21:39
6.28--AA9：“Since Disc Depot, the music store on the next block, began a new radio advertising campaign last year, its business has grown dramatically, as evidenced by
the large increase in foot traffic into the store. While the Disc Depot’s owners have apparently become wealthy enough to retire, profits at Carlo’s
Clothing have remained stagnant for the past three years. In order to boost our sales and profits, we should therefore switch from newspaper advertising to
frequent radio advertisements like those for Disc Depot.”
这一题在新的题库中是有的，AA124，思路可以参考AWA224-AA13：
13. The following appeared as part of a campaign to sell advertising time on a local radio station to local businesses.
“The Cumquat Cafe began advertising on our local radio station this year and was delighted to see its business increase by 10 percent over last year’s totals. Their success shows you how you can use radio advertising to make your business more profitable.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
-- by 会员 zcool (2010/7/4 20:26:01)
灰常感谢~~~
作者: dingjielin 时间: 2010-7-4 23:33
AWA不是109吗？但是701是AWA224-114啊。114在哪呢？我知道好像坐稳题裤更新了，可是还是没找到大家有没有将更新的题目及思路写出来的贴饼。
作者: luoxin1110 时间: 2010-7-6 07:35
谢楼主
作者: cissyH 时间: 2010-7-6 10:06
thank you very much
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-6 12:13
AWA不是109吗？但是701是AWA224-114啊。114在哪呢？我知道好像坐稳题裤更新了，可是还是没找到大家有没有将更新的题目及思路写出来的贴饼。
-- by 会员 dingjielin (2010/7/4 23:33:53)
同学，是在没看明白你想表达什么~~~再说详细一点好吗？
作者: dingjielin 时间: 2010-7-6 14:34
作文里7月1号的狗对应的是AWA224-114。可是范文的AA只有109呀，你所说的114超出了109个题目啊？明白没？
还有就是 作文题库更新了吧？咱论坛里有那些新的题目及思路吗？
作者: dingjielin 时间: 2010-7-6 22:24
用了2分钟总结了下题库编号， 截止7-6的狗狗。 ZCOOL你可以看看哈，这么编号确实方便很多。给大家贴出来
AA：2.5.11.13.14.16.32.34.63.100.106。109
AI：1.13.15.29.68.114
还有几个狗不在这里或者提供的不全，针对这些题目，建议大家单独去看，将他们在整理为一类。有思路的就进行参考，没有的就只能自己思考了哈。
作者: zcool 时间: 2010-7-7 00:22
用了2分钟总结了下题库编号， 截止7-6的狗狗。 ZCOOL你可以看看哈，这么编号确实方便很多。给大家贴出来
AA：2.5.11.13.14.16.32.34.63.100.106。109
AI：1.13.15.29.68.114
还有几个狗不在这里或者提供的不全，针对这些题目，建议大家单独去看，将他们在整理为一类。有思路的就进行参考，没有的就只能自己思考了哈。
-- by 会员 dingjielin (2010/7/6 22:24:53)
anny的AWA224是有范文的题库，有点早的版本，现在题库更新了，有些题号可能对不上，大家还是找关键词吧。上传几个文件，供大家参考。一个是最新题库，一个是中文翻译，题号不一定完全对上，不过大部分还是找的到的。
anny整理作文也不可能整理的面面俱到，有一个基本的框架，主要工作还是要靠大家自己来完成了。。
作者: dingjielin 时间: 2010-7-7 08:34
3Q~~~~
作者: PuppyPaw 时间: 2010-7-7 11:07
非常感谢！
话说我最怵的就是这个作文了 唉……
作者: yong6020 时间: 2010-7-7 19:54
十分感谢，万分敬重！
作者: LEDGIRL 时间: 2010-7-8 08:12
LZ辛苦了，好心有好报
作者: luoboG 时间: 2010-7-8 10:52
感谢！！
作者: grogr 时间: 2010-7-8 14:46
lz加油哦~(>^ω^<)
作者: Daryl115 时间: 2010-7-8 21:30
怎么感觉都在文勇80篇里出现过
作者: dc水格 时间: 2010-7-8 21:36
多谢lz～制作这个真是辛苦
作者: gezhengqi 时间: 2010-7-9 20:33
谢谢56楼提供的写作思路哦！
不过关于你的第一点驳斥逻辑我有个问题，因为原文中说了It seems obvious, then, that a retail space in Sandida Heights must now be much more expensive than a similar space in Palm Grove, which was not the case several years ago.
which was not the case several years ago也就是说其实几年前这2个地方的价格是差不多的吧？或者至少不是差别很大
作者: 苍崖云树 时间: 2010-7-10 03:40
AA3：一个地区性的啤酒厂想在产能不足的情况下在全国铺开销售。即使遇到不能满足市场需求，他们也认为可以达到“奇货可居”的效果。
求思路
供货不足导致信誉下降?还有别的可以用吗
作者: zcool 时间: 2010-7-10 19:10
707-AA1，原文应该是这个：
The following appeared as part of the business plan of the Capital Idea investment firm:
“Across town in the Park Hill district, the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club have all had
business increases over the past two years. Capital Idea should therefore invest in the Roxy Playhouse, the Slice-o’-
Pizza, and the Divot Golf Club, three new businesses in the Irongate district. As a condition, we should require them
to participate in a special program: Any customer who patronizes two of the businesses will receive a substantial
discount at the third. By motivating customers to patronize all three, we will thus contribute to the profitability of each
and maximize our return.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
629-AA1原文：
The following appeared in a memorandum from the CEO of a consumer electronics manufacturing firm to thehead of the company's human resources department, who is responsible for hiring new employees:
“Eight years ago, our firm’s profits were increasing with each new employee we added. We discovered that eachemployee had the skills and motivation to generate more revenue for the firm than his or her salary cost us.However, for the past two years, our profit margin has been falling, even though we have continued to addemployees. Thus, our newer employees are not generating enough revenue to justify their salaries. We mustnot be hiring new employees with the same level of skills and motivation as those we used to attract. Clearly,then, failures in the human resources department account for our falling profits.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
大学医院那题：
The following appeared in an article in the health section of a newspaper.
“There is a common misconception that university hospitals are better than community or private hospitals. This notion is unfounded, however: the university hospitals in our region employ 15 percent fewer doctors, have a 20 percent lower success rate in treating patients, make far less overall profit, and pay their medical staff considerably less than do private hospitals. Furthermore, many doctors at university hospitals typically divide their time among teaching, conducting research, and treating patients. From this it seems clear that the quality of care at university hospitals is lower than that at other kinds of hospitals.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
708-AA1，请考过的人求证是否是下面这题
The following appeared in a presentation by the chief production manager of a machine parts manufacturing company at a management meeting:
“Our factory in Cookville is our most advanced and efficient. It is capable of producing ten drill bits for each dollar of production costs, whereas none of our other factories can produce more than seven drill bits per dollar of production costs. Therefore, we can reduce our overall drill bit production costs by devoting the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production. Since reducing the production costs of individual machine parts is the only way to achieve our largergoal of reducing our overall production costs, dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part production to our other factories will help us to attain that larger goal.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
708-AA2
The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile
manufacturing company to the company's managers:
“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than
employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would
increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
作者: shixiaoliu1986 时间: 2010-7-10 22:03
看上去都很像，这些是AWA里的第几篇啊，找了很久没找到，谢谢啦～
707-AA1，原文应该是这个：
The following appeared as part of the business plan of the Capital Idea investment firm:
“Across town in the Park Hill district, the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club have all had
business increases over the past two years. Capital Idea should therefore invest in the Roxy Playhouse, the Slice-o’-
Pizza, and the Divot Golf Club, three new businesses in the Irongate district. As a condition, we should require them
to participate in a special program: Any customer who patronizes two of the businesses will receive a substantial
discount at the third. By motivating customers to patronize all three, we will thus contribute to the profitability of each
and maximize our return.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
629-AA1原文：
The following appeared in a memorandum from the CEO of a consumer electronics manufacturing firm to thehead of the company's human resources department, who is responsible for hiring new employees:
“Eight years ago, our firm’s profits were increasing with each new employee we added. We discovered that eachemployee had the skills and motivation to generate more revenue for the firm than his or her salary cost us.However, for the past two years, our profit margin has been falling, even though we have continued to addemployees. Thus, our newer employees are not generating enough revenue to justify their salaries. We mustnot be hiring new employees with the same level of skills and motivation as those we used to attract. Clearly,then, failures in the human resources department account for our falling profits.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
大学医院那题：
The following appeared in an article in the health section of a newspaper.
“There is a common misconception that university hospitals are better than community or private hospitals. This notion is unfounded, however: the university hospitals in our region employ 15 percent fewer doctors, have a 20 percent lower success rate in treating patients, make far less overall profit, and pay their medical staff considerably less than do private hospitals. Furthermore, many doctors at university hospitals typically divide their time among teaching, conducting research, and treating patients. From this it seems clear that the quality of care at university hospitals is lower than that at other kinds of hospitals.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
708-AA1，请考过的人求证是否是下面这题
The following appeared in a presentation by the chief production manager of a machine parts manufacturing company at a management meeting:
“Our factory in Cookville is our most advanced and efficient. It is capable of producing ten drill bits for each dollar of production costs, whereas none of our other factories can produce more than seven drill bits per dollar of production costs. Therefore, we can reduce our overall drill bit production costs by devoting the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production. Since reducing the production costs of individual machine parts is the only way to achieve our largergoal of reducing our overall production costs, dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part production to our other factories will help us to attain that larger goal.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
708-AA2
The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile
manufacturing company to the company's managers:
“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than
employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would
increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
-- by 会员 zcool (2010/7/10 19:10:47)
作者: zcool 时间: 2010-7-10 23:22
这些在AWA224里面没有的，有些是新题库里面的。应该和这个月的jj能够对上的。我前面的帖子有新的题库，你可以下载看一下。希望能有所帮助
看上去都很像，这些是AWA里的第几篇啊，找了很久没找到，谢谢啦～
707-AA1，原文应该是这个：
The following appeared as part of the business plan of the Capital Idea investment firm:
“Across town in the Park Hill district, the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club have all had
business increases over the past two years. Capital Idea should therefore invest in the Roxy Playhouse, the Slice-o’-
Pizza, and the Divot Golf Club, three new businesses in the Irongate district. As a condition, we should require them
to participate in a special program: Any customer who patronizes two of the businesses will receive a substantial
discount at the third. By motivating customers to patronize all three, we will thus contribute to the profitability of each
and maximize our return.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
629-AA1原文：
The following appeared in a memorandum from the CEO of a consumer electronics manufacturing firm to thehead of the company's human resources department, who is responsible for hiring new employees:
“Eight years ago, our firm’s profits were increasing with each new employee we added. We discovered that eachemployee had the skills and motivation to generate more revenue for the firm than his or her salary cost us.However, for the past two years, our profit margin has been falling, even though we have continued to addemployees. Thus, our newer employees are not generating enough revenue to justify their salaries. We mustnot be hiring new employees with the same level of skills and motivation as those we used to attract. Clearly,then, failures in the human resources department account for our falling profits.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
大学医院那题：
The following appeared in an article in the health section of a newspaper.
“There is a common misconception that university hospitals are better than community or private hospitals. This notion is unfounded, however: the university hospitals in our region employ 15 percent fewer doctors, have a 20 percent lower success rate in treating patients, make far less overall profit, and pay their medical staff considerably less than do private hospitals. Furthermore, many doctors at university hospitals typically divide their time among teaching, conducting research, and treating patients. From this it seems clear that the quality of care at university hospitals is lower than that at other kinds of hospitals.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
708-AA1，请考过的人求证是否是下面这题
The following appeared in a presentation by the chief production manager of a machine parts manufacturing company at a management meeting:
“Our factory in Cookville is our most advanced and efficient. It is capable of producing ten drill bits for each dollar of production costs, whereas none of our other factories can produce more than seven drill bits per dollar of production costs. Therefore, we can reduce our overall drill bit production costs by devoting the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production. Since reducing the production costs of individual machine parts is the only way to achieve our largergoal of reducing our overall production costs, dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part production to our other factories will help us to attain that larger goal.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
708-AA2
The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile
manufacturing company to the company's managers:
“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than
employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would
increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
-- by 会员 zcool (2010/7/10 19:10:47)
-- by 会员 shixiaoliu1986 (2010/7/10 22:03:52)
作者: MaggieBabe 时间: 2010-7-11 01:26
作者: shixiaoliu1986 时间: 2010-7-11 11:24
628 AI2：最好的老师总是鼓励学生挑战广泛接受的观点，而不是接受。
这个题目怎么分析啊，求NN解答啊，想了很久没思路
作者: lv_hk 时间: 2010-7-11 20:57
thanks a million
作者: sissizhx 时间: 2010-7-11 22:54
太感谢了，还是对作文一点都不理解，唉。。。
作者: luoxin1110 时间: 2010-7-12 07:31
十分感谢
作者: dingjielin 时间: 2010-7-12 15:07
有没有童鞋用WORD总结的呀？后天考了，EX有些眼花 HOHO 可以发给我一份吗？谢谢噢~~~~275942187(at) QQ.C0M
作者: dingjielin 时间: 2010-7-12 15:08
LZ，你可不可以在总结的时候，把思路也写进去~~~
-- by 会员 Hugsy (2010/7/2 20:15:02)
童鞋~~咱们的excel里面有对应的题库号码，大多数同学最后都会参考AWA224复习的，里面有详细的范例~~你也可以参考一下啦~~等月中的时候，咱们看看那个题目重复频率特别大，再考虑是不是写一个总的思路吧~~
毕竟大家都会准备自己最顺手的思路的~
-- by 会员 annysweety (2010/7/2 20:18:36)
别月中啦就今夜吧 啊哈哈
作者: canallaker 时间: 2010-7-12 21:07
有点不明白 为什么AI后面有的标注的是AWA题库呢
作者: Lovehandle 时间: 2010-7-13 08:33
measure一个社会应该更依赖其科学和艺术成就，而不是business success
这个题大家可不可以提一点思路啊？我对于这个题目能想到的不多啊！
明天考了，谢谢大家了啊！
顺便再问一下，作文碰到狗狗的可能性大吗？因为我几乎没怎么准备作文啊！
作者: ddcarolyn 时间: 2010-7-13 10:28
考古710-AA1~
V1:the Cunch(貌似) Breakfast cereal contain 20% more nutrients than any other cereal in the city XXX. Moreover, in the survey conducted by us, 75% consumers prefer to the taste of Cunch Breakfast cereal than other cereal products. However, 消费者似乎并没有显著的青睐这个cereal。Therefore, in order to increase the sales, we should redesign the front of the Cunch Breakfast box with detailed information about the two features mentioned above(即多20%的营养，75%认为口味出众) (题库里没找到) 3次
V2说一个cereal的厂家的备忘录：认为该厂出产的cereal的一大优势是包含vitamin K。另外在一项调查中，有75%的人表示喜欢cereal口味。但是现在销售量降低。建议在做广告中更换包装盒，并注明该cereal的两大优势（就是包 含vitamin k和口味好）。
V3 一下来自公司营销总监的备忘录：一家生产cereal 公司生产的cereal含有的维生素k的数量比竞争对手都要多20%，而且一项调查显示75%的顾客认为该公司生产的cereal比竞争对手都要好，但是 该公司的销售量并不高。因此营销总监建议公司重新对包装盒进行设计，把该产品含有比竞争对手20%的vitamin K 和上述的那个调查贴在包装盒上。
作者: caoyangxp 时间: 2010-7-13 13:09
版主，你好！非常感谢你花费很多的时间来总结AWA的dogdog，本人有个小小的建议：您能不能把dogdog的excel文件，变成word的文件啊！因为看着确实不太方便啊！谢谢了！
作者: 小晔子 时间: 2010-7-13 17:44
7.12
AA: AWA224-39 The following appeared in an Avia Airlines departmental memorandum.
“On average, 9 out of every 1,000 passengers who traveled on Avia Airlines last year filed a complaint about our baggage-handling procedures. This means that although some 1 percent of our passengers were unhappy with those procedures, the overwhelming majority were quite satisfied with them; thus it would appear that a review of the procedures is not important to our goal of maintaining or increasing the number of Avia’s passengers.”
AI：employers should have right to prohibit employees from unhealthy behaviors,both in whorkplace and personal lives.
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-13 20:33
考古710-AA1~
V1:the Cunch(貌似) Breakfast cereal contain 20% more nutrients than any other cereal in the city XXX. Moreover, in the survey conducted by us, 75% consumers prefer to the taste of Cunch Breakfast cereal than other cereal products. However, 消费者似乎并没有显著的青睐这个cereal。Therefore, in order to increase the sales, we should redesign the front of the Cunch Breakfast box with detailed information about the two features mentioned above(即多20%的营养，75%认为口味出众) (题库里没找到) 3次
V2说一个cereal的厂家的备忘录：认为该厂出产的cereal的一大优势是包含vitamin K。另外在一项调查中，有75%的人表示喜欢cereal口味。但是现在销售量降低。建议在做广告中更换包装盒，并注明该cereal的两大优势（就是包 含vitamin k和口味好）。
V3 一下来自公司营销总监的备忘录：一家生产cereal 公司生产的cereal含有的维生素k的数量比竞争对手都要多20%，而且一项调查显示75%的顾客认为该公司生产的cereal比竞争对手都要好，但是 该公司的销售量并不高。因此营销总监建议公司重新对包装盒进行设计，把该产品含有比竞争对手20%的vitamin K 和上述的那个调查贴在包装盒上。
-- by 会员 ddcarolyn (2010/7/13 10:28:43)
太感谢了~~
作者: annysweety 时间: 2010-7-13 20:40
版主，你好！非常感谢你花费很多的时间来总结AWA的dogdog，本人有个小小的建议：您能不能把dogdog的excel文件，变成word的文件啊！因为看着确实不太方便啊！谢谢了！
-- by 会员 caoyangxp (2010/7/13 13:09:23)
童鞋你好~ ~
我们再征集一下大家的意见吧，如果最终觉得word的好，那就改成word的吧。其实如果你喜欢word格式，只要在excel里面进行“查找”，就能很快把相同的文章都找出来了，然后直接粘贴在word上，用不了30分钟的~~
excel是按照每天写的，所以如果你每天都复习当天的作文，看起来就非常方便了~
另外，我记得上辅导班的时候，老师说，作文看考前3天的就可以。通过这样的总结，可以看出，如果作文时间不充分的话，看前1周的就可以了，好像都是这样重复的。
感谢你提出的意见呀~
作者: caoyangxp 时间: 2010-7-14 00:31
版主，你好！非常感谢你花费很多的时间来总结AWA的dogdog，本人有个小小的建议：您能不能把dogdog的excel文件，变成word的文件啊！因为看着确实不太方便啊！谢谢了！
-- by 会员 caoyangxp (2010/7/13 13:09:23)
童鞋你好~ ~
我们再征集一下大家的意见吧，如果最终觉得word的好，那就改成word的吧。其实如果你喜欢word格式，只要在excel里面进行“查找”，就能很快把相同的文章都找出来了，然后直接粘贴在word上，用不了30分钟的~~
excel是按照每天写的，所以如果你每天都复习当天的作文，看起来就非常方便了~
另外，我记得上辅导班的时候，老师说，作文看考前3天的就可以。通过这样的总结，可以看出，如果作文时间不充分的话，看前1周的就可以了，好像都是这样重复的。
感谢你提出的意见呀~
-- by 会员 annysweety (2010/7/13 20:40:02)
谢谢你的回复，同时也非常的感谢你的付出！真的很感谢！我也只是个小小的建议！因为在看以前的AWA的机经时候，很多的童鞋全都是用word形式发布的！同时谢谢你的提示，我会逐渐习惯看excel的dogdog的！
作者: 波斯菊R 时间: 2010-7-14 19:58
加油！！！！！！！！
作者: sonnenschein 时间: 2010-7-15 20:59
敢问这个月各位预测什么时候换题库啊？俺是27号的会不会杯具捏？
作者: natalie123gyc 时间: 2010-7-15 22:58
谢谢LZ~~~
作者: 大坏13 时间: 2010-7-16 10:57
七一五
computer和cereal 那题 都是狗狗的
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