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标题: 求助两个改错 [打印本页]

作者: fyaun    时间: 2004-4-13 12:31
标题: 求助两个改错

有两道KAPLAN改错,不理解.请指教.


NO.1


With adjustments for inflation, the relative cost of welfare benefits has been dropping since 1973, resulting in the welfare program now costing about 3 billion real dollars less to implement than it did.



Correct: and as a result the welfare program now costs about 3 million real dollars less to implement than it did.



NO.2


Although the author himself declared them  unpublished, the first appearance in print if 40 poems by TS is significant event , since they provide fascinating evidence about the creative process that were engaged in by this great Modernist.  




Correct: since they provide fascinating evidence about the creative process in which this great Modernist engaged.  





作者: tianwan    时间: 2004-4-13 13:09

1,A,relative cost resulting in....,logic meaning is absurd.

2, active voice priors to passive voice .


作者: fyaun    时间: 2004-4-13 22:28

Thanks.






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