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作者: 花丛薄雾 时间: 2010-5-14 22:06
标题: SC OG12-31 求教
OG对C的解释是表达 wordy 有没有更具体的解释呢？

Unliketheconvictionheldbymanyof hercolleaguesthatgenes wererelativelysimpleandstatic,Barbara McClintockadhered toherownmorecomplicated ideasabouthowgenes mightoperate,andin1983, at theageof81,wasawardedaNobelPrizeforher discoverythatthegenes incornarecapableof

movingfromonechromosomalsitetoanother.

(A)Unliketheconvictionheldbymanyofher colleaguesthatgenes were

(B)Althoughmanyof hercolleagueswereofthe conviction ofgenes being

(C)Contrarytomanyof hercolleaguesbeing convincedthatgenes were

(D)Eventhoughmanyof hercolleagueswere convincedthatgenes were

(E)Evenwithmanyof hercolleaguesconvincedof genes being

作者: 花丛薄雾 时间: 2010-5-14 22:07
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Unlike the conviction held by many of her colleagues that genes were relatively simple and static, Barbara McClintock adhered to her own more complicated ideas about how genes might operate, and in 1983, at the age of 81, was awarded a Nobel Prize for her discovery that the genes in corn are capable of
moving from one chromosomal site to another.

(A)   Unlike the conviction held by many of her colleagues that genes were
(B)   Although many of her colleagues were of the conviction of genes being
(C)   Contrary to many of her colleagues being convinced that genes were
(D)   Even though many of her colleagues were convinced that genes were
(E)   Even with many of her colleagues convinced of genes being

作者: lili10 时间: 2010-5-14 22:25
when use"unlike", the comparison has to be grammatical and logical. in A choice, compared the conviction to Barbara McClintock, hence, A is wrong. B,C,E choices use "being" ( wordy). Hope this can help.

作者: lili10 时间: 2010-5-14 22:51
"being" has no meaning here. If I am wrong, someone correct me

作者: abjure 时间: 2010-5-15 11:37
首先得承认D的句子的确写的好；B/C/E 读起来感觉就是不顺。
LZ可以试着读一遍D在读一遍B.
对比得出
B Were of the conviction VS D were convinced
会不会觉得D 选项在用词上：直接使用动词比名词更加有力，且句意强调被说服。。。。

同时B/C/E 都出现了Being，但我个人不觉的这个being分词有什么其他用，如果紧紧表达“是”的系动词意思话，用were 就好。并且WERE 的时态，结构，用词都和句子未划线部分平行对称。

作者: 花丛薄雾 时间: 2010-5-15 20:22

首先得承认D的句子的确写的好；B/C/E 读起来感觉就是不顺。
LZ可以试着读一遍D在读一遍B.
对比得出
B Were of the conviction VS D were convinced
会不会觉得D 选项在用词上：直接使用动词比名词更加有力，且句意强调被说服。。。。

同时B/C/E 都出现了Being，但我个人不觉的这个being分词有什么其他用，如果紧紧表达“是”的系动词意思话，用were 就好。并且WERE 的时态，结构，用词都和句子未划线部分平行对称。

-- by 会员 abjure (2010/5/15 11:37:19)

首先要谢谢你对我的提问的两道题都给了回答，真的很感激

正确答案我是选出来了，没有异议，只不过我是不知道到底该怎么说错误的原因，这道题我指的是C

作者: abjure 时间: 2010-5-15 23:10
C 也使用到BEING... 感觉不对，理由在上面我的贴有说啊。
貌似being 不是什么好的表达方式，OG12-52 E选项being错啦

作者: lusfe 时间: 2011-3-12 17:14
D 选项的 that genes were，为什么是过去式呢，难道不应该是表示常态的are么?

作者: FactOrFiction 时间: 2011-3-22 21:46
一般现在时表示的是真理. 但是这个句子里面表达的意思明显是错的, 不是真理. 不能用are.

作者: happysun9057 时间: 2011-9-9 02:03
首先必须说BCE中都有n.+being+adj.结构，awkward.这个记住就好了，n.+being+done,there being都是见到就错得awkward，因为be动词本来就是表示当前的状态，being在这两种情况下都是故意的啰嗦。
其次，A用了unlike，要求比较对象对等，conviction和BM显然不对等；
最后，关于that后宾语从句的时态，第一were convinced的是曾经被认可的老观点，显然不是真理，不能用一般现在时；第二，时态呼应用一般过去时。

作者: helio5 时间: 2011-9-9 08:53
C里面的being的确wordy
如果把being拿掉
Contrary to many of her colleagues convinced that genes were ...
丝毫不影响意思的表达，也没有什么错误

当然，即使把being拿掉，从逻辑表达来看，还是没有D清晰有效
D is the best one of 5 options.

作者: tinahuang95 时间: 2011-11-9 15:27
contrary to 后面貌似跟简单的n.
如果有很复杂的修饰
就用because

作者: skyemotion 时间: 2011-11-9 15:39
being表示正在，而这个动作是过去的。所以D比C好。

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