标题: OG12-88 有个地方，跪求NN指点啊？在线等啊 [打印本页] 作者: spz316 时间: 2010-5-10 21:52 标题: OG12-88 有个地方，跪求NN指点啊？在线等啊 88. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
(A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted (B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both (C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted (D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted (E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both
OG上的解释 A The relative clause introduces wordiness and confusion. B The appositive introduces wordiness and unnecessary grammatical complexity. 为什么定语从句和后置定语成累赘啊？
为什么CDE的 Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk 表达方式就好啊？作者: Ank 时间: 2010-5-10 22:08
GMAT语法的原则是，能定语修饰就不用从句和后置定语，打个比方就是a black cat永远比a cat that is black好