标题: 弱问OG12 12 when and if [打印本页] 作者: 加州女孩 时间: 2010-5-9 10:11 标题: 弱问OG12 12 when and if 12. Rising inventories, when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth. (A) when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead (B) when not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, possibly leads (C) when they were unaccompanied by corresponding sales increases, can lead (D) if not accompanied by correspondingly increased sales, possibly leads (E) if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead Diction; Agreement Th e modifying phrase when … sales is needlessly diffi cult to understand. Th e adverb correspondingly is incorrectly and ambiguously used; using the adjective corresponding to modify increases in sales makes the intended meaning clearer. Unaccompanied is not wrong but not accompanied more eff ectively expresses the intended negation. A Unaccompanied correspondingly is awkward and ambiguous. B Plural subject inventories does not agree with the singular verb leads. C Wrong tense: past tense were indicates a completed event, but can lead indicates a possibility that continues. D Correspondingly increased sales is awkward and unclear; verb (leads) does not agree with the subject (inventories). E Correct. Not accompanied emphasizes the negative and is preferable to unaccompanied in this usage; corresponding modifi es increases in sales; the modifi er is clear and comprehensible, and there is no subject-verb agreement problem. Th e correct answer is E. 不明白A为什么不可以哦，when 和if在这里用法有什么讲究呢？作者: 加州女孩 时间: 2010-5-9 10:21
为什么又发到逻辑区啊？真是崩溃