标题: 请教OG12-88 [打印本页] 作者: xinxian0 时间: 2010-5-5 11:10 标题: 请教OG12-88 Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz tradition.
(A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
(B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
(C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted
(D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
(E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both
为什么D选项里的that was 不是wordy 的呢？ 正如68题的A项和80题的D项， 解释都说that were/that are 是wordy的，为什么这里就是对的呢？作者: myungryong 时间: 2010-5-5 13:16
个人觉得 虽然d是wordy 但这仅仅是相对性错误 但是abce都是绝对性错误 （abe both用法错误 c没有谓语动词）
