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16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as wess
D. critiquing all chemistry from Rober Boyle forward and also a vision of
E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remains
E. commodities, like those of aluminum and other metals, remains
我做错了。。。555，求解。
41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remain
Ｅ：commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains
我把原题目（如以上）中的the commodities 抄错了，抄成了those，所以……不过，好像没有太多的影响。但是如果those可以指代前面的market那么就有影响了。
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16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as wess
D. critiquing all chemistry from Rober Boyle forward and also a vision of
E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remains
E. commodities, like those of aluminum and other metals, remains
我做错了。。。555，求解。
偶选A
和D. 答案什么?
嘻嘻, 别555了,偶也错了.
答案BE. 第一提好理解.
第二提你连题目都抄错了. E里面THOSE 应该改成COMMEDITIES.
16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as wess
D. critiquing all chemistry from Rober Boyle forward and also a vision of
E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
给出的答案是B，但我同楼上一样，选A
41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remains
E. commodities, like those of aluminum and other metals, remains
抱歉这一题我打错字了，D中remains原来没有那个S，是：D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remain
原题给出的答案是E，我想问原题中C相比较为什么错，是不是举例一定要用逗号隔开？
41 题不人为E对.
根据OG的解释 LIKE 只用于COMPARISION. A MARKET 和COMMODITIES 比较? 性质都不同?
1、vision和envisioning 的区别是什么呢？
2、such as什么时候才是举例，什么时候又是like比较，此题认为应该是“举例”，举例就一定是前面是一个大概念，后面是具体化的东西，而like是相似性比较，是两个平等的概念在比较。
此题中的“recycled commodities ”和“the commodities of aluminum and other metals”（严重致歉，我发现我把正确答案的形状搞错了。Ｅ：commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains）应该是，前者的概念比后者大哟～～～～
16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as wess
D. critiquing all chemistry from Rober Boyle forward and also a vision of
E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
55555 偶也错了...不过这个B很难理解. 搞不懂谁和谁并列的.
请指教
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
vision 不大好.意思有点问题. envisioning 到是可以,就是这个并列. 看着不爽. 而且, 这个following 看着也别扭.
下面那个E 倒是好些
41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remain
E. commodities, like those of aluminum and other metals, remains
这里的such as 不是举例, like 是比较, 表示those markets of aluminum and other metals, D肯定不对, 即使有那个S也不对. 因为有逗号那么隔开了, 就是插入语咯. 偶选的是C, 选的时候就觉得不对. 有个大全里头的WHETHER blablalba咦大川的和这个满象.
MM, 前面market 是单数, 不能理解为those 代those markets. 我看到的原题的E是
commodities, like commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains 比较项都不同, 偶认为也不对.
不过这个题目也太...刁钻了点
55555555复习这么久了55555
答案改成 like the markets of A and other metals, 偶就选E.
16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as wess
D. critiquing all chemistry from Rober Boyle forward and also a vision of
E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
偶选A，因为BC的意思好像不对，也不平行
41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remains
E. commodities, like those of aluminum and other metals, remains
偶开始选了C，D肯定不对，理由和PumpkinMM一样． commondies such as中间不能加逗号否则意思不清．但是E的those是对的；
commondities such as aluminum and other metals商品例如铝和其它金属．铝和金属不是商品．所以those of..逻辑意思正确，铝质和其它金属的商品
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16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as wess
D. critiquing all chemistry from Rober Boyle forward and also a vision of
E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remains
E. commodities, like those of aluminum and other metals, remains
我做错了。。。555，求解。
If in exam, I'll choose A and C. Now I still prefer these 2.
16,'a critique' and 'a vision' make the coordination and both together are appositive of "Essay on Heat and Light".
41, I can't agree with the standard answer E. The 'like' looks ugly. "答案改成 like the markets of A and other metals, 偶就选E. " , I think pumkin's idea is a better one, but unfortunately it is not in the five choices.
看大全20-10
10. Like many others of his generation of Native American leaders, Joseph Brant lived in two worlds; born into an Iroquois community and instructed in traditional Iroquois ways, he also received an education from English-speaking teachers.
(A) Like many others of his generation of Native American leaders, Joseph Brant lived in two worlds;
(B) Like many others of his generation of Native American leaders, living in two worlds, Joseph Brant was
(C) Like many another of his generation of Native American leaders, Joseph Brant, living in two worlds, was
(D) As with many others of his generation of Native American leaders, living in two worlds, Joseph Brant was
(E) As with many another of his generation of Native American leaders, Joseph Brant lived in two worlds;
这题很明显呀. A. LIKE 这里是没有歧义的. 摸人( A LEADER) 和其他LEADERS OF HIS ＧＥＮＥＲＡｔＩＯＮ 比较．
Vision: 1. something in supernatural appearance 2.act or power of imagination 3.power of seeing.
Envision: to oneself to picture.
我觉得这里vision如果取act of imagination意思是通的
Appreciate further discussions
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这两题我也做的跟答案不一样，我开始选的是A, C。现在我感觉第一题B好些，可能主要是following比since好，其次这里and 比 as well as好，再有his envisioning 比 a vision 意思清楚些？
第2题，对E我还有疑问：commodities such as aluminum 这个表达本身没错，从文中好像看不出有什么必要用like来比较，而且我觉得commodities of aluminum 这个表达比较怪，我查了一下，还没找到这种表达。
这两题我也做的跟答案不一样，我开始选的是A, C。现在我感觉第一题B好些，可能主要是following比since好，其次这里and 比 as well as好，再有his envisioning 比 a vision 意思清楚些？
第2题，对E我还有疑问：commodities such as aluminum 这个表达本身没错，从文中好像看不出有什么必要用like来比较，而且我觉得commodities of aluminum 这个表达比较怪，我查了一下，还没找到这种表达。
完全同意jnlvo。
第一题 不是a critique of 和 a vision of 并列阿，
应该是 all chemistry 和 his envisioning of a chemistry 并列阿
| Deinition | 3. | something present in or experienced by the imagination but that is not actually present or true. | |
| Example | a vision of one's own destruction. | ||
| Crossref. Syn. | hallucination , dream , phantom , fancy , image | ||
| Similar Words | hallucination , figment , illusion , fancy , chimera , dream , delusion , mirage , fantasy
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振奇怪 怎么成这样子了
第一题 不是a critique of 和 a vision of 并列阿，应该是 all chemistry 和 his envisioning of a chemistry 并列阿
| Deinition | 3. | something present in or experienced by the imagination but that is not actually present or true. |
a vision of one's own destruction.
Crossref. Syn. : humilation, dream fancy....
chmistry following sb. 我猜是指那些chemical properties and phenomena , following 是指以*** 为take as a model or precedent; imitate
另一提 为什么C 不对呢？
我想可能是这样：Humphry Davy 和Robert Boyle 都算是化学家，Robert Boyle 在前提出了他的chemistry，之后人们以此为基础有了all chemistry ，但Humphry Davy 有了一个a new chemistry，所以his essay即是对前人的一种批评，也是对自己的新想法一个想象。
这题我认为since后可能是不加人名的，至少我还没找到这种例句。
pumpkin, MM 最后那个句子，比较的两项一个是commodities of aluminum and other metals 一个market. 呀，不是一类冬冬。题目有问题。要不就是答案有问题。
Vision: 1. something in supernatural appearance 2.act or power of imagination 3.power of seeing.
Envision: to oneself to picture.
我觉得这里vision如果取act of imagination意思是通的
Appreciate further discussions
vision 取 act of imagination 意思可以。不过， vision of the new chemisty. 好像不通。新化学的vision, 应该是 a vision on the new chemisty. 后面改成his envisioning of sth 好像就避免了这种歧异吧。
pumpkin, MM 最后那个句子，比较的两项一个是commodities of aluminum and other metals 一个market. 呀，不是一类冬冬。题目有问题。要不就是答案有问题。
同意：Market for recycled commodities, like those of..还可以理解为those 指代commodities; 但是Like those of..., market for这时的比较对象就不一致了.vision 取 act of imagination 意思可以。不过， vision of the new chemisty. 好像不通。新化学的vision, 应该是 a vision on the new chemisty. 后面改成his envisioning of sth 好像就避免了这种歧异吧。
vision of a new chemistry一个新化学的想像．这里of一定错吗？？不知道？？
envisioning of a new chemistry一个新化学的构想．
恩，是偶昏掉了。8好意思。
A,C
16.B. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
his--〉whose? So the first conspicuous flaw of B is ambiguity . Except for the ambiguity, if 'his' is HD's, it sounds ugly when we read 'his envisioning of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found' because he should be in place of Davy; if RB's, the logic meaning turns rediculous, 'HD's book, a book which is the resuls of his experiments, is a critique and RB's evisioning, ' 'since' is a prep, so A is correct.
41, Only C is grammatically free of mistakes.
这道题里aluminum and other metals是来限制修饰commodities的，意思是铝制品和其他金属制品；如果选C的话，commodities 和 aluminum and other metals 就变成列举关系而非修饰关系了，另外从意思上讲C也是不合理的，题中说的recycled commodities, 而aluminum and other metals不制成commodities 是不可以recycle的。这题解题关键就是明白题目要表达的意思，我的语言组织比较poor，希望能看的明白，呵呵~~~
No，“The market”is singular，"those" can't refer to "market"。If "those" refers to "commodities", the 'like' looks ugly.
E is absolutely wrong.
这道题里aluminum and other metals是来限制修饰commodities的，意思是铝制品和其他金属制品；如果选C的话，commodities 和 aluminum and other metals 就变成列举关系而非修饰关系了，另外从意思上讲C也是不合理的，题中说的recycled commodities, 而aluminum and other metals不制成commodities 是不可以recycle的。这题解题关键就是明白题目要表达的意思，我的语言组织比较poor，希望能看的明白，呵呵~~~
No，“The market”is singular，"those" can't refer to "market"。If "those" refers to "commodities", the 'like' looks ugly.
E is absolutely wrong.
tianwan是用什么方法来反驳cicileya？（变成一道逻辑题）
呵呵，这里处处是GMAT！
我同意Cici的，也同意tianwan的论据前半部分但不同意结论部分，全句翻译如下：
“可回收的产品（像铝制产品或其他金属制产品）市场依然保持强劲，即使整个可回收利用产业发生了一些经济变动。”
这里虽然like不好，但是只能选它，五个答案中，只有它最合适，C选项如cici所说。
"答案改成 like the markets of A and other metals, 偶就选E. " , I think pumkin's idea is a better one, but unfortunately it is not in the five choices.
"those" is absolutely wrong, you have to replace it with the markets. Grammatically, only C is correct.
请教：这里的those可以指代前单数market，而在后面作为复数名词形式吗？
如果真是这样，我就得给tianwan行个大礼了。
41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remain
Ｅ：commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains
我把原题目（如以上）中的the commodities 抄错了，抄成了those，所以……不过，好像没有太多的影响。但是如果those可以指代前面的market那么就有影响了。
我觉得这两道题是这样的：
第一题：CHEMISTRY是化学元素的意思，是说RB以后的所有化学元素，和它并列的是对一个新元素的想象
第二题：COMMODITIES OF ALUMINUM AND OTHER METALS是说铝及其他金属制作的日用品。C缺少逗号，D谓语应该用REMAINS，只有E还凑合，不过，我认为这里是举例，应该用SUCH AS更好一些吧？
No.1, A and B is hard to choose, B seems a little better than A. "following" seems better than "since"
No. 2, D is better than E, 感觉是举例不是比较，用such as
41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remains
E. commodities, like those of aluminum and other metals, remains
我认为从意思上讲还是E对
D: 言外之意，铝和其他金属本身就是日用品，我觉得不是这句话的本意，这句话要表达的好像是铝和其他金属制成品的意思。
第一题一位老外学生指出B的一点根本错误，我认为很有道理，大家请看过来：
B is incorrect: HIS envisioning of a chemisty that DAVY hoped to find
1. The Federalist papers, a strong defense of the United States Constitution and important as a body of work in political science as well, represents the handiwork of three different authors.
(A) and important as a body of work in political science as well, represents
(B) as well as an important body of work in political science, represent
(C) and also a body of work of importance in political science is representing
(D) an important body of work in political science and has been representative of（B）
(E) and as political science an important body of work too, represent
我仍然觉得a,c好，不管怎么样，提供og一提，算做讨论八
第2题是C\
The first one:
Since can be use as prep., such as in "since her marriage..." I still like A better.
The second one is defintely E. The sentence is not listing commodities of aluminum/other metals (铝及其它金属制品) as examples, but comparing recyled commodities with aluminum/other metals commodities. After all, alumimum/other metals commodities are not part of recycled commodities...They are saparate concepts.
C: commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
NN们，在华尔街Commodities指得是基本原材料（包括所有农产品，金属，能源）而不是制成品
http://www.nymex.com/jsp/resources/cc_main.jsp
http://www.forbes.com/commodities/
og223. As business grows more complex, students majoring in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming increasingly successful in the job market.
(A) majoring in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming increasingly
(B) who major in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are becoming more and more
(C) who majored in specialized areas such as those of finance and marketing are being increasingly
(D) who major in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming more and more
(E) having majored in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are being increasingly
41 :answer should be "c"
og明确指出，用those指代是废话（verbiage）16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as wess
D. critiquing all chemistry from Rober Boyle forward and also a vision of
E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
------这个我选B，我用排除法，先排除CDE，理由不用说，都很简单。剩下AB，我没见过SINCE
后面可以接人，所以我选B了
41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remains
E. commodities, like those of aluminum and other metals, remains
-------这个我认为选E，这个句子的主语是the market，先去掉AB了，而CD中，会有歧义，因为SUCH AS 后面的两个名词可以是指commodities或者是martket，所以排除。选E
16题倾向b，since实在太突兀了。
楼上mm，41的d选项remains应为remain
c选项中因为不用逗号，避免了以插入语形式修饰主语；从而就近修饰commodities，没有造成歧义。
让步：
如果说c有歧义，那么e选项like引导的插入语呢？和什么比？market or commodities？
16题倾向b，since实在太突兀了。
楼上mm，41的d选项remains应为remain
c选项中因为不用逗号，避免了以插入语形式修饰主语；从而就近修饰commodities，没有造成歧义。
让步：如果说c有歧义，那么e选项like引导的插入语呢？和什么比？market or commodities？
hey hey,din't you see?41题，E项，those是有人打错字，应该是commodities啊，当然选E了。
such as前有没有逗号，后面的两个名词都可以是指market 或者commodities......我印象中是这样
such as前有没有逗号，后面的两个名词都可以是指market 或者commodities......我印象中是这样
the arthor assumed ...without sunffcient evidence.
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the arthor assumed ...without sunffcient evidence.
hey man,sometimes you should judge the problem by your sense of language,and that's it!
And we should develop that kind of sense as well.You can't always find evidence ,right?
天山-9-16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as wess
D. critiquing all chemistry from Rober Boyle forward and also a vision of
E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
如果B 是对的话，没有歧义，因为前面出现过HIS ，所以后面的HIS 与前面的同样的指代。A 里面的since人物, 好象没见过. 只有since + 事件/时间/或从句的.
天山9-41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remain
Ｅ：commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains
COMMODITIES OF ALUMINUM AND OTHER METALS是说铝及其他金属制作的日用品。
C缺少逗号,另外, aluminum and other metals 不是recycling commodities.，D谓语应该用REMAINS，
E 中的like 是compare recycling commodities with the commodities of aluminum and other metals.
41. 我选E
某美国大学有一门课叫"History and Philosophy of Science Since Newton"，另一个网站上：‘A lively tour through six great developments in physics since Newton” 看来since 是可以得。
另外，看见了“a vision of a new cooperative America” “a vision of a new scientific publication system”，“... is a vision of a new world order that would make George Bush's head spin. It's a visionof a hemp-based economy.”
再说，既然b用了his, 未画线部分为何不用he?
16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
这题主要争议集中在A和B两个选项。
首先想明确一下原句的意思："Essay on Heat and Light"既是对原有化学理论的批评又是对新理论的展望。（为了确认这点我特意用GOOGLE查了一下相关的背景知识，应该说的确是Davy而不是Boyle提出了新理论。）因此原题中的平行结构就应该是a critique of ...对a vision of ...或者his envisioning of。
其次，ETS的出题原则是正确的选项应该是concise: simple but clear。不单符合语言习惯而且在结构和语言组织上要尽可能的简单。假设答案是B的话，如果把其中的also除去，与原来的B选项并没有任何语意上的不一致，这个also在这里完全是redundant。
再次，接下去看his的作用。众所周知所有格是一种限定，那么在此有没有使用这种限定的必要呢？原文是“对原有化学理论的一种批评及对新理论的展望”，前后应该保持逻辑上的对称。既然B选项在前面使用得是a critique，那么在后面转而用his envisioning就显得不parallel了。
第四，对since和following的比较。
since在此是明确的时间指示词表示自……以来，有延续的含意。而following是紧随着……，强调的是先后的顺序，与一段延续的时间概念仍有所区别。
因此如果要使B选项成为正确答案，仍然需要在efficiency方面有所改进，并且不能扭曲原文的含意。
41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remain
E：commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains
首先，应该很容易从主谓一致上排除A、B和D三个选项，大家的争议目前集中在C和E上：也就是用such as还是like之间的选择。
其次来看句子的原意：可回收产品，例如铝制品或者其他金属制品，的市场保持强劲……有的同学会认为C中commodities such as aluminum and other metals也对，意思就是“原材料例如铝和其他金属”嘛。的确，很多行业（例如equity analysis）是把金属及一些其他的基础材料叫作“commodity”，但是在本题中题干前面部分中出现的“recycled”一词，决定了不可能是原材料而必须是制成品。从常识上来讲金属本身并不能被判定为“可回收”或者“不可回收”，只有对金属制成品才能作这类的判断。比如我们可以指着百货店里的电饭锅说这是个可回收的铝锅，但是不可能去铝厂指着铝锭这么说，不是嘛？
因此recycled commodities such as aluminum and other metals从逻辑上来说就是错误的了。
这两题一直耐着性子看了下来，有一些意思！
16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
这题我认为应该是B，这里的his并不是大家所认为的HD，而应该是指RB，即这个envision是RB的，而不是HD的。HD只是想去发现而已（that Davy hoped to found RB's envisioned new chemistry)。这里的also也不是楼上所说的“redundant”，而是必要的，因为all chemistry following RB所说的chemistry并不是RB的，所以这里加一个also，来表示后面的envision是RB的。
首先，由于原句中已经出现过两次“his”并且都是指HD，正确答案中是否会出现象楼上所说第三个“his”反而指代RB的语言现象呢？如果是的话那么又如何解决misunderstanding的问题呢？
其次，如果认为是RB的envisioning，那么本句的结构便成为a critique of A and also B，从而使逻辑会变得相当的古怪：……对RB之后的化学理论和RB对一种新化学理论的展望的批评，而这种新理论又是HD自己所希望发现的。
首先，由于原句中已经出现过两次“his”并且都是指HD，正确答案中是否会出现象楼上所说第三个“his”反而指代RB的语言现象呢？如果是的话那么又如何解决misunderstanding的问题呢？
其次，如果认为是RB的envisioning，那么本句的结构便成为a critique of A and also B，从而使逻辑会变得相当的古怪：……对RB之后的化学理论和RB对一种新化学理论的展望的批评，而这种新理论又是HD自己所希望发现的。
两个问题一起回答你，正是由于有一个also，所以这里的his指的是RB（所以这里的also不多余），才不会有misunderstanding；这题的玄机我想也在这里。本句的结构并不能简单地理解为是a critique of A and also B的结构，因为在这样的结构中，看不出A与B有任何的联系，而原句中的结构却不一样，A与B是有关联的。
两个问题一起回答你，正是由于有一个also，所以这里的his指的是RB（所以这里的also不多余），才不会有misunderstanding；这题的玄机我想也在这里。本句的结构并不能简单地理解为是a critique of A and also B的结构，因为在这样的结构中，看不出A与B有任何的联系，而原句中的结构却不一样，A与B是有关联的。
请问照你的这种思路，选择B以后，这后半句话的意思该怎么翻译呢？和原本的意思应该不一样了吧。
For No. 16, I sitll think A is better, since two "a....." should be parallelled
16 绝对是A
16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
1、为何后面用 Davy ，就是为了清楚的表明谁希望建立新理论。如果用B，his绝对是有问题的。
2、个人认为since RB表示包括RB在内都是davy要批判的。
刚做了天山9，16原来选的A，后来对完答案觉得B对，因为不知道since可以接人名，
讨论看下来，晕了，明天就要考试了，怎么办？
再看一遍，觉得A,B区别主要在于意思的理解，到底vision是HD,还是RB的。
再多看一遍，嗯，A对。
两个问题一起回答你，正是由于有一个also，所以这里的his指的是RB（所以这里的also不多余），才不会有misunderstanding；这题的玄机我想也在这里。本句的结构并不能简单地理解为是a critique of A and also B的结构，因为在这样的结构中，看不出A与B有任何的联系，而原句中的结构却不一样，A与B是有关联的。
16我反复的看，觉得还是A比B好，原因如下：
B的his作为一个代词，在同一句句子里出现，只能指代唯一的一个人或者物，而这里产生严重的歧义，即可能是HD，也可能是RB.所以是应当断然排除的，这个是可以归结为corrective的错误
A的反对者认为as well as不好，但这个不好只是一个effective的错误.当然不可否认，如果用了and就更好，但在别的都错的情况下，我们就屈就选A
41题，我个人意见还是选择C，原因如下
本句的中心词是market, 主谓宾分析来说，the market...remains......而recycled commodities是修饰market的从属成分，后面的aluminum等都是对这些recycled commodities的列举，所以用such as。 而像E选项用like的话，到底是要说the market like还是要说commodities like？因为OG告诉我们like比较的两个对象，性质属性必须完全一致。所以E选项的like用的很不好.此外E选项最大的问题就是改变了原文对commodities的解释，按照A（原文）的意思来说，aluminum和other metals就是commodities,而不是E选项说的commodities of aluminum and other metals才是commodities. 读一下，是不是意思彻底变了？
所以保留自己的意见C，即使他少了个逗号。还有我觉得the market for recycled commodities 用的不知道对不对，更习惯用the market of recycled commodities.
16.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
41.
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
E：commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains
好长的讨论~看的我汗流浃背的
做题时选的是AC,其中41题是在时间还剩10秒钟的时候，看见C差不多对就选了...
对了答案后觉得，恩，是BE...
看了讨论后觉得，恩，是AE...commodities还是要的
16-坚持A，since可以做介词啊，为啥不能接名词？只是不常用罢了，但并不代表不用啊。再说了,OG213,和这是一模一样的哦，
41-坚持C! such as是对commodities的举例说明，我看不出来错哦。
死活支持A,C
偶选了A,D.
a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
很好的一个平行结构,斑竹,偶想请教since Robert Boyle是"自从RB这个人以来的化学"意思吗? 偶想到自从爱因斯坦以来的物理,是一样的意思吗? since+人名这样的用法对吗?
41题举双手同意斑竹的解释,从句意来理解,D确实不通,但是做题的时候,D确实是一个很好的迷惑,结构特别舒服.偶觉得those代的是recycled commodities,不太明白的是like在这里是"比如...",like不是不能表示举例的吗?
偶选了A,D.
a critique of
41.强烈、疯狂、坚决地支持C
E中like不能表示举例 E：commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains
D中remain的主语是market，不能用动词复数 D. commodities, such as aluminum and other metals, remain
41,还是E好些. like可以表示举例! 且commodities of aluminum意为铝制品意思也很贴切.
C是ETS的干扰选项,remains前没有逗号肯定错误.
第一题支持A
a critique of all chemistry.. as well as a vision of a new chemistry 这么清楚的表达，相信大家做了那么多ETS的题目，也该知道一般ETS的答案是长什么样子的吧。
第二题支持C
我头脑空白，认为metals是commodities中的一种，所以选择commodities such as ...and other metals
关于E，至少我手中的题目是这样的：
the market of commodities, like the commodities of ..., remains..
这个like的修饰对象到底是market还是commodities,修饰对象混淆，ETS好像管这个叫dangling
选C,LIKE不能表举例
第一题为什么要选B呢?also明明是副词啊,不能用在名词前面.这是一条硬道理吧,这里动名词envisioning的性质更加靠近名词还是更加靠近动词?我认为还是更靠近名词一些.
since有一个词性是介词,表示从...以来,自从的意思.用在A里也没错
B里的his指代不清,前面两个人,到底指代哪个.
所以,否定B,选A.
看完讨论了。。头大了N倍
要真考上这题，我都不知道怎么选了，ETS，我能跳过去不选吗？
不过个人比较偏向BE
b：1）since+人名没见过 2）as well as a vision of 的确有歧义。可以对应a critique（这是大多数人的意见），也可以对应all chemistry（这么对应在语法上来说并没有错）
Eg说like有比较的倾向，但是这里such as举例子，aluminum 不是commodity这类的。只能勉强选E了。
第一题投A，a crtique of。。。and a vision of。。。，这么漂亮的结构，选B的XDJM们你们怎么忍心杀死A哩？
呵呵，开个玩笑，我觉得B中有2个致命的错误：1。his到底指谁？大家在这个问题上争论不休就说明这里是有歧异滴，而ETS十万分注意句子存在歧异的问题。2。即便这里的his是指HD，那么也存在赘余问题，与后面的that Davy hoped to found重复了，个人觉得his 不大可能指代RB，整句的重点是HD，而RB的出现仅仅是起个时间标志的作用，与句子中心意思无关，因此在这里也不应作为谈论对象
我想可能是这样：Humphry Davy 和Robert Boyle 都算是化学家，Robert Boyle 在前提出了他的chemistry，之后人们以此为基础有了all chemistry ，但Humphry Davy 有了一个a new chemistry，所以his essay即是对前人的一种批评，也是对自己的新想法一个想象。
这题我认为since后可能是不加人名的，至少我还没找到这种例句。
从google上搜到一个书名是Ever Since Darwin: Reflections in Natural History (Paperback)
觉得 since ＋人名应该是有的，但不知道是不是规范
天山-9-16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as wess
D. critiquing all chemistry from Rober Boyle forward and also a vision of
E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
如果B 是对的话，没有歧义，因为前面出现过HIS ，所以后面的HIS 与前面的同样的指代。A 里面的since人物, 好象没见过. 只有since + 事件/时间/或从句的.
天山9-41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remain
Ｅ：commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains
COMMODITIES OF ALUMINUM AND OTHER METALS是说铝及其他金属制作的日用品。
C缺少逗号,另外, aluminum and other metals 不是recycling commodities.，D谓语应该用REMAINS，
E 中的like 是compare recycling commodities with the commodities of aluminum and other metals.
41. 我选E
我觉得c就是因为缺逗号才对的啊，这样说明修饰的是紧跟such as 前面的commodities,这样意思也对，因为commodities意为原材料包括aluminum and other metals。另外，从 大全里随便找了一个such as 前面没有逗号的例子：
1. As more and more people invest their money in savings certificates or money-market funds in order to earn higher interest, they are abandoning traditional low-interest investment havens such as passbook accounts and life insurance policies.
(A) As more and more people invest their money
(B) While people have more and more been investing their money
(C) As money is more and more invested by people
(D) More and more, when investors put their money（A）
(E) While, more and more, investors have been putting their money
终于看完了，看的我头大了三圈~~~~
最后更正一下，还是同意commodity是制成品，like 表示比较是有道理的，所以结论支持AE
看的好晕~~~天,后天考试希望不要遇到~
第一个,支持A. 因为B里面的also多余,而且envisioning这个东名词形式也没有vision这个名词用的好.A里面 a critic...a vision...是多么完美的平行啊!ETS怎么可能不喜欢~~~呵呵
第二个,不坚定的选C.E中like 肯定是不用来举例的,比是比较的话, 这里是market & commodities 也不对.
个人觉得A,C.第一题A平行又对称，符合ets原则。第2题C比较好，举例只能用such as,从来没有用过like,如果举例都能用like，那么those of 的问题也不算问题了。还有就是like有像的意思，E如果是对的，那么就是commodities像commodities of aluminum and other metals的意思，就把commodities of aluminum and other metals排除在commodities之外了！这是like的一个特性，不可不察。
41题
commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains 中like是铁定不能用于举例的！这是铁一样的事实！而like作比较时，作为插入语是比较所在句主语的，这句主语是market，逻辑不对阿！至于commodities的意思，我手上没有详细字典，不好说！但有前面的推理，选c是不会错的！
16题
vague，不确定！感觉上a要对称！我支持选a！
天山-9-16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as wess
D. critiquing all chemistry from Rober Boyle forward and also a vision of
E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
当然支持B，觉得对称的部分是...presented the results of his...and also his envisioning of a..
A里since的用法错！
天山9-41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remain
Ｅ：commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains
赞同E，重点是逻辑意思正确，C也是错在这里，可回收的日用品，例如铝...？？铝怎么是日用品呢？？！！
For No. 16, I sitll think A is better, since two "a....." should be parallelled
好多牛人啊....
16. The ninetheenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early expreiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
一定选B.
因为逗号后面是 Results的同位,而且注意是results,而不是result,所以逗号后面一定是 名词** and 名词**. 所以选B. 尽管B也不是完美的,但是5个中最好的答案.
E似乎用平行就排除。。。
不知道哪个好了。。。
估计我不会是最后一帖；
16题我选B。
1)and also表示递进 2)his envisioning动名词平行critique. 3)从词意上看，envision比vision准确。
40题我选C
commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains 中like是铁定不能用于举例的。而且like这么用，应该是与market并列的。最近作得题中有一道关于shoppers in sports deparment store...也证明了这点。
很多人不选C是觉得逻辑错误。可事实上，铝和其他再生性金属可以被成为recycled commodities. recycled commodities 是定义为从废旧品(secondary commodities)种制造出的商品。 所以逻辑上并没错。
16题：我选B我想首先是同位语修饰，a critique 名词短语是修饰 his "Essay on Heat and Light"的同
位语。
所以D，E有错误。
而A在此处中since Robert Boyle 所起的作用是什么呢？？？ 不明确，这是其一，其二我认为，
在as well as 并列中用a critique和a vision 也不对应。（a critique 是指前面的文章，而a vision
指的是RB的看法。）as well as 是否也不太简洁呢？（个人猜想）
相反看B中， following RB修饰了chemistry, 意思和逻辑上也正确。而且his 的使用明确指明了
这个vision是来自于RB的
不知道晚辈分析的对吗？？？
第二题是举例不是比较。同意用C但是如果remain后加上s那么就选D最好拉。不知是否正确阿
天山9-41. The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.
A. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
B. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
C. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
D. commodities,such as aluminum and other metals, remain
Ｅ：commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains
赞同E，重点是逻辑意思正确，C也是错在这里，可回收的日用品，例如铝...？？铝怎么是日用品呢？？！！
同意，E的逻辑意思很正确，但是举例确实应该用such as，用like是典型的错误，所以我当时就觉得没有一个答案是正确的，如果非要选一个的话，我想还应该是E
41題只能是C。舉例不能用like。大家不要在字面上理解commodity的意思。如果你在commodity市場上投過資﹐你就會知道 commodity是指某些特定商品﹐比如金﹐銀﹐銅﹐布倫特輕制原油﹐natural gas, 牛﹐玉米等東西。在 market裡可以進行期貨交易。也有些ETF可供交易﹐比如USO﹐GLD﹐SLV。建議大家看看這個網址就明白了。
http://money.cnn.com/data/commodities/index.html
這是cnn提供的每天部份commodity的交易價格。
16題我選了A。感覺上確實envision比vision好﹐但是vision 也可以指預見。A的平行看起來比B好﹐樓上也提到了his的問題。這題感覺有點難。
晕，这个题竟然有这么多争论。
16肯定是A，英文不是这么写的，his envisioning of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found. 绝对的错误。
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