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作者: Chrislvzh    时间: 2010-4-5 14:48
标题: 请教
Unlike mainstream American businesses, more than half of which fail, the failure rate for businesses in the Amish community hovers around 5 percent.

A.Unlike mainstream American businesses, more than half of which fail

B.Unlike mainstream American businesses, in which the failure rate is more than half

C.Unlike mainstream American businesses, where more than half of them fail

D.While the rate of mainstream American businesses failing is more than half

E.While more than half of mainstream American businesses fail

答案是E ... d为什么不对呢?...多谢多谢
作者: windypig123    时间: 2010-4-5 15:03
个人觉得D E表达都是对的。但是D没有E简洁。。难道LZ不觉得D更繁琐么
这里不存在说后面那句主语是了rate while后面就要用rate
这里没有一个严格的比较(主语一定要可比)
只是比较2件事情。

作者: Chrislvzh    时间: 2010-4-6 12:57
got't, thank u




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