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作者: fay009    时间: 2010-3-15 22:17
标题: 求教OG12 SC33 31 ~~~3月23日,31问还是不明白。。到底怎样才算是冗余的?~~
31.Unlike the conviction held by many of her colleagues that genes were relatively simple and static, Barbara McClintock adhered to her own more complicated ideas about how genes might operate, and in 1983, at the age of 81, was awarded a Nobel Prize for her discovery that the genes in corn are capable of moving from one chromosomal site to another.


(A) Unlike the conviction held by many of her colleagues that genes were



(B) Although many of her colleagues were of the conviction of genes being



(C) Contrary to many of her colleagues being convinced that genes were



(D) Even though many of her colleagues were convinced that genes were


(E) Even with many of her colleagues convinced of genes being







我觉得CDE都可以。。答案说C和E是wordy的,而且C是awkward,E是indirect。



这个解释让我觉得很难被说服。怎么才能判断一句话是否冗余、繁杂?




33. Because an oversupply of computer chips has sent prices plunging, the manufacturer has announced that it will cut production by closing its factories for two days a month.


(A) Because an oversupply of computer chips has sent prices plunging,

(B) Because of plunging prices for computer chips, which is due to an oversupply,


(C) Because computer chip prices have been sent plunging, which resulted from an oversupply,

(D) Due to plunging computer chip prices from an oversupply,


(E) Due to an oversupply, with the result that computer chip prices have been sent plunging,





我觉得ABCD都是可以的。汗。


关于B,解释说是因为which指代的是prices,可是我怎么觉得,which难道就不能指代prices在plunging这件事情么,于是就可以用单数的谓词了。。



关于C,答案说年代顺序是confusing的,然后which指代不明。。which不是就是指代前面那个句子么。。


关于D,解释说backward description of the events behind the announcement of factory closings is confusing and awkward。。汗。。木有看懂。。





希望大家能耐心解释,小女子感激不尽~~





作者: erhou    时间: 2010-3-15 22:39
31.Unlike the conviction held by many of her colleagues that genes were relatively simple and static, Barbara McClintock adhered to her own more complicated ideas about how genes might operate, and in 1983, at the age of 81, was awarded a Nobel Prize for her discovery that the genes in corn are capable of moving from one chromosomal site to another.

(A) Unlike the conviction held by many of her colleagues that genes were

(B) Although many of her colleagues were of the conviction of genes being

(C) Contrary to many of her colleagues being convinced that genes were

(D) Even though many of her colleagues were convinced that genes were

(E) Even with many of her colleagues convinced of genes being



我觉得CDE都可以。。答案说C和E是wordy的,而且C是awkward,E是indirect。

这个解释让我觉得很难被说服。怎么才能判断一句话是否冗余、繁杂?

两点, 第一点一般有being就意味着wordy,因为为什么要用? 第二点XDF老实说过although,though, even though优先大于contrary ,不知道真假

33. Because an oversupply of computer chips has sent prices plunging, the manufacturer has announced that it will cut production by closing its factories for two days a month.

(A) Because an oversupply of computer chips has sent prices plunging,

(B) Because of plunging prices for computer chips, which is due to an oversupply,
which不能指代前面整个句子,只能就近修饰prices,这点一定要切忌, GMAT经常考,再说because of, due to你看着不觉得别扭吗???
(C) Because computer chip prices have been sent plunging, which resulted from an oversupply,
同样道理which不能指代整个句子
(D) Due to plunging computer chip prices from an oversupply,
computer chip oversupply了,不是plunging computer prices  oversupply, 别用汉语意思想当然
(E) Due to an oversupply, with the result that computer chip prices have been sent plunging,

另外补充一点, because接句子,because of 只能接词或词组, due to 也不能接句子,所以一般情况下优先选择because, XDF老师说的,不知道真假

我觉得ABCD都是可以的。汗。

关于B,解释说是因为which指代的是prices,可是我怎么觉得,which难道就不能指代prices在plunging这件事情么,于是就可以用单数的谓词了。。

关于C,答案说年代顺序是confusing的,然后which指代不明。。which不是就是指代前面那个句子么。。

关于D,解释说backward description of the events behind the announcement of factory closings is confusing and awkward。。汗。。木有看懂。。



希望大家能耐心解释,小女子感激不尽~~
-- by 会员 fay009 (2010/3/15 22:17:59)

作者: fay009    时间: 2010-3-17 21:58
谢谢楼上同学的详细解答^_^~~
作者: fay009    时间: 2010-3-21 22:59
= =31还是不很明白- -||> _<

有没有更清楚的解释呢。。。
作者: Tereasa    时间: 2010-9-7 18:01
想问,33题可以改为Due to plunging for computer chips from oversupply时,可以对吗?谢谢!!
作者: gabbrielle    时间: 2010-10-16 11:01
不对哦。
1. because较due to在written English中更prefered.
2. 像这样子改的话,due to状语从句中主语仍是prices,而prices与oversupply无逻辑关系。oversupply的修饰对象是computer chips
作者: 李子木    时间: 2011-1-19 18:56
= =31还是不很明白- -||> _<

有没有更清楚的解释呢。。。
-- by 会员 fay009 (2010/3/21 22:59:47)



C有being,如果不是实在没有别的选项,或者being在句中有more than wordy的作用。。。。

一般有BEING。。。先排除吧,首先就wordy了

另外,GMAC貌似偏爱连词+句子的,加PHRASE(如此处的contrary to)的就比较容易WORDY
作者: quyuanmei    时间: 2011-3-4 09:08
请问B选项中的which不是只能指代就近的名词么?为什么不是 computer chips?
作者: emilyz0301    时间: 2011-3-4 10:08
同学,你一定没有上过新东方,新东方老师都讲being一般都是错的,只有两种时候是对的
作者: shallbytwo    时间: 2011-3-4 11:18
同学,你一定没有上过新东方,新东方老师都讲being一般都是错的,只有两种时候是对的
-- by 会员 emilyz0301 (2011/3/4 10:08:09)

求问是哪两种?
作者: sanlingjie    时间: 2011-3-4 16:26
。。。。。。。。。。。我也想知道哪两种是对的。。。
作者: haohao90s    时间: 2011-3-6 11:04
XDF老师只说过三种是错的
1、there being
2、being+adj.
3、n+being+done
作者: FactOrFiction    时间: 2011-3-22 21:55
回答一下7楼.

Because of A for B, 这里的重心是A, B也是修饰A的. 所以后面的which应该指A. A是重心, 可以有多个修饰语, B自己也是修饰成份, 就不需要再用修饰了.

以上纯粹个人看法, 我个人觉得GMAT比较讲究句子重心, OG的解释很能看出老美考试时候的一些潜在的逻辑.
作者: flewrudy    时间: 2011-5-10 19:09
我觉得b中which不用指代句子,只是指代名词plunging prices,
      是(价格上涨)是由于。。。
而不是(因为价格上涨)是由于
作者: lottl    时间: 2011-7-9 17:31
对于33题,我想在补充下吧,which引导非限制性定语从句的时候,是可以指代前面的主句的,而且这时主从句必须有因果关系,所以2楼的说错了。之所以说B中的which不能指代前面的主句,是从逻辑上来说的,这点楼上已经说明了。
作者: 小花呱    时间: 2011-8-5 22:29
31题。C being convinced可以直接用convinced表示,being convinced啰嗦了,
E. conviced of genes being simple and static。这里conviced后面接得是一个长修饰,因此用of从句引导没有用that从句简洁。单从e中,这个being应该也是可以省略。因为可以是simple and static genes。更加简洁。
我并不认为being出现就是错误的。因为你在看og很多选项答案的解析的时候,gmat自己也常用being这种结构。但是在being+done的结构中可以简化成done。在n+being+adj时可以简化成adj+n。望nn们指正。
作者: vilawe    时间: 2011-8-12 15:25
31题。C being convinced可以直接用convinced表示,being convinced啰嗦了,
E. conviced of genes being simple and static。这里conviced后面接得是一个长修饰,因此用of从句引导没有用that从句简洁。单从e中,这个being应该也是可以省略。因为可以是simple and static genes。更加简洁。
我并不认为being出现就是错误的。因为你在看og很多选项答案的解析的时候,gmat自己也常用being这种结构。但是在being+done的结构中可以简化成done。在n+being+adj时可以简化成adj+n。望nn们指正。
-- by 会员 小花呱 (2011/8/5 22:29:42)


很赞同小花呱mm的看法,很多时候不选有being的选项,不是因为gmat不爱用(虽然看到这番话前我也一直这样觉得),而是可以省略,有种茅塞顿开的感觉,哈哈,谢谢指点
作者: happysun9057    时间: 2011-9-9 02:09
[/quote]求问是哪两种?
-- by 会员 shallbytwo (2011/3/4 11:18:44)

[/quote]一种是进行时的被动语态,如在从句中出现that is being done;一种是动名词的平行,如His dream is learning English and being an English teacher。
there being, n.+being+done/adj.必错
作者: happysun9057    时间: 2011-9-9 02:35
33题
which的问题,本质是代词,不能指代句子,因此如果从句子含义和逻辑上判断which指代的是句子本身或者是一件事,那么用which就错;which引导定从应当就近指代,除非不能更就近,否则指代前面出现的中心名词;
除非是because of/due to后面只有一个名词而没有分词和从句修饰,一般情况下优先考虑Because引导从句,更clear;
Because(of)和due to、result(from)都表示因果关系,同时出现其二就是错的,wordy,如B同时出现because of和due to,C中同时出现because和result from,E中同时出现due to和result,都是wordy。
作者: gdboy88    时间: 2011-10-4 22:12
对于33题,

本题根本是过量供应引起价格下降整个过程作为原因导致厂商减产。分开强调哪个都是不好的。

单独的过量供应但价格不下降,厂商不会减产,

单独的价格下降,但是不过量供应,厂商也不会减产。

本题的情况当然是两个因素同时存在,所以连起来说表达最符合本题的逻辑意图,所以A应该更好。

E\D选项表意不好,还添加了额外的从句结构和修饰结构,妨碍了理解,所以说是冗余、不清晰的
作者: saraanan    时间: 2012-10-16 17:29
关于31题,我在想unlike表示的是对比的关系,但是EVEN THOUGH 就是转折了,不是说一般情况下不要改变主句的逻辑关系么。。。所以上来就把D cross off了 虽说being看着不顺眼 多一个词就wordy了么  看不至于说是改变逻辑的 看来GMAT 真的是超级不喜欢being 放这里就是个陷阱
作者: zhangjiaqi    时间: 2013-7-18 08:57
我对computer chips 那题的理解是:
注意所有选项bcd 全部把oversupply放在最后。其实主要原因是oversupply。所以不管是以because开头还是due to开头,oversupply都应该紧跟其后。 不然修饰的重心就不对了,改变了原句的句意。
再有一点就是。所有选项都有一个表原因的词作为开头,后面再出现,with the result that(如e中) 就明显的redundant。 bc也有这个错误。
最后只剩下a选项。
作者: hilypkutj    时间: 2013-8-29 11:36
我个人而言比较能接受下面这种关于being的解释:
that is true B and C is wrong because of the use of BEING in those options.
see being here is in VERB+ING form...which in many cases used to represesnt the continuous tense.

there is difference in meaning context if you use being:
genes were simple and static vs genes being simple and static
now if you read sentence:
colleagues thought genes were simple and static vs colleagues thought genes being simple and static.
clearly the intended meaning can be shown by "colleagues thought genes were simple and static ".
thats the reason being is wrong here.
if we have the sense of continuity we can use being....lets take an official example:
Being heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, is likely to make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
in this case author is telling about the executives who are heavily commited always to a course of action===>you can sense the continuity of heavily commited here.so use of being here is correct here.

http://gmatclub.com/forum/unlike-the-conviction-held-by-many-of-her-colleagues-that-79585.html

就是说Ving形式一般表示该动作还在持续。而放到B、C选项中则表示她的同事还在保持原来的观点,即‘genes were simple and static’。这显然不是原文要表达的意思。

作者: 忧郁的废物    时间: 2014-4-2 19:56
小花呱 发表于 2011-8-5 22:29
31题。C being convinced可以直接用convinced表示,being convinced啰嗦了,E. conviced of genes being si ...

对c中being的解释简直不能更赞
作者: Hendy    时间: 2014-12-29 21:01
The GMAT definitively does not like the structure [preposition]+[noun]+[participial phrase].  Prepositions aren’t designed to handle that much action. If you want full [noun] + [verb] type action, use a subordinate conjunction.

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That sentence structure will be wrong 100% of the time on the GMAT Sentence Correction.  Here is a corrected version of the same sentence, using the subordinate conjunction “because” instead.

7a) Because his troops were dying from the cold, Napoléon had to retreat from Russia.
- See more at: http://magoosh.com/gmat/2013/gmat-idioms-cause-and-consequence/#sthash.nlaxqXMZ.dpuf
作者: Hendy    时间: 2014-12-29 21:10
http://magoosh.com/gmat/2013/gmat-idioms-cause-and-consequence/
作者: 超级玛丽lin    时间: 2015-1-8 22:20
happysun9057 发表于 2011-9-9 02:35
33题which的问题,本质是代词,不能指代句子,因此如果从句子含义和逻辑上判断which指代的是句子本身或者是 ...

讲的很清楚,谢谢~~
作者: 葫芦屯屯委书记    时间: 2015-9-20 20:48
happysun9057 发表于 2011-9-9 02:35
33题which的问题,本质是代词,不能指代句子,因此如果从句子含义和逻辑上判断which指代的是句子本身或者是 ...

个人感觉BC中的因果关系词并不多余,而E多余:因为E中的due to和result都指向oversupply,所以多余;而B中的because of指向plunging prices,表明plunging prices作为原因导致了某个结果,而后面的due to则表明plunging prices作为结果,C道理类似。这也就是为什么BC的OG解析里面没有谈到重复而E里面谈到了,一点个人看法哦~
作者: changc    时间: 2015-9-28 23:38
emilyz0301 发表于 2011-3-4 10:08
同学,你一定没有上过新东方,新东方老师都讲being一般都是错的,只有两种时候是对的 ...

求问 哪两种、
作者: fesche    时间: 2016-4-18 05:34
补充一下due to 和 because of 的区别:
due to / because of 都是因为的意思,不一样的是:due to 的原因要是主语一样(或前面修饰的名词一样),because of的原因是另外的原因,例如Ron说:
if replacing "due to" with "caused by" creates a workable sentence, then "due to" is correct.
if replacing "due to" with "because of" creates a workable sentence, then "due to" is incorrect.

Due to plunging computer chip prices from an oversupply, the manufacturer has announced that xxxx.
这里的plunging prices不是有manufacture引起的
作者: AnnieFFish    时间: 2016-7-18 20:17
和上面的同学握个抓 我也是刚刚看完RON的解释
我觉得这两句话已经足够帮助我们解决问题了:
if replacing "due to" with "caused by" creates a workable sentence, then "due to" is correct.
if replacing "due to" with "because of" creates a workable sentence, then "due to" is incorrect.

关于which的指代,前面有个楼说的好好好清楚
which真的不可以指代句子的,这里贴一个曼哈顿SC书里面的话:
【Use WHICH only to refer to nouns----never to refer to an entire clause.】




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