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作者: Jennifer789    时间: 2010-2-19 09:52
标题: 新prep
Trans World Entertainment Corporation, which owns the Record Town
and Saturday Matinee retail chains, announced that since sales of up to one-fourth of its stores are poor, they will be closed
A. that since sales of up to one-fourth of its stores are poor, they will be closed

B. it is closing up to one-fourth of its stores, which accounted for its poor sales

C. it was closing up to one fourth of its stores because of poor sales

D. to be closing, on account of poor sales, up to one-fourth of its stores

E. having poor sales, such that up to one-fourth of its stores will be closed


D错是不是因为announce to do 这种用法是错误的呢?查了下 看到的好像都是 announce to sth.
所以求证下 !
thx

作者: enrique1313    时间: 2010-2-19 11:32
……announce to do 本身是没错的,但是句子结构不如+句子清楚!
作者: edwardelric    时间: 2010-2-19 17:35
不是  主要错误to be closin指World Entertainment Corporation 了, 还有像a把sale of 改为sales in up to one-fourth of its stores是对的,但是也罗嗦哦,也不好,像d就更有点啰嗦~
作者: Jennifer789    时间: 2010-2-19 19:09
哦哦  懂了!~感谢




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