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标题: OG 233 [打印本页]
作者: tyghbn    时间: 2004-3-31 12:07
标题: OG 233
    

233. Recently implemented "shift-work equations" based on studies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness, sleeping on the job, fatigue among shift workers, and have raised production efficiency in various industries.fficeffice" />


(A)     fatigue among shift workers, and have raised


(B)     fatigue among shift workers, and raised


(C)     and fatigue among shift workers while raising


(D)     lowered fatigue among shift workers, and raised


(E)         and fatigue among shift workers was lowered while raising


The best answer, C, grammatically states that the equations... have reduced x, y, and i. and have raised efficiency. Choices A and B fail to use and to signal that fatigue among shift workers completes the series begun by have reduced, and so produce awkward and unclear sentences. Both D and E fail to use and to introduce the last item in the list, which is sleeping in these constructions. In E, while raising has no logical referent, producing only the absurd statement that fatigue has raised efficiency.


i don't see a big difference between A and C. OG's explanation itself looks awkward to me???

作者: hru    时间: 2004-3-31 12:27
If the conjunction "and" is added before "fatigue among shift workers"    , choice A will be correct in grammar.
作者: snow_mountain    时间: 2004-3-31 15:24
这题是多层次平行的问题。


结构为：have reduced A1, A2 and    A3 and raised B.             A1, A2, A3 小平行。 reduced 和raised 大平行。每个层次结尾的部分必须有连词连接。

作者: tyghbn    时间: 2004-4-1 04:11
so basiclly there has to be an "and" instead of a "," between A2 and A3, otherwise it is not grammatically correct?

作者: jnlvo    时间: 2004-4-1 18:45
yeah.

作者: cocoabean    时间: 2004-4-7 11:05

ETS没晕, 是我自己晕了.






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作者: axbycd    时间: 2004-6-8 12:47

Why used "raising" instead of "have raised" in C?


Thanks!


作者: billion    时间: 2005-3-30 22:19

对A仍有疑问：
语法书上说：并列结构有时可全用逗号，在修辞色彩上给人以紧张、急促、明快、利落的感觉。例：
Individuals are less troubled by feelings of guilt when they share responsibility for killings with a group - a street gang, lynch mob, terrorist organization.

Recently implemented “shift-work equations” based on studies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness, sleeping on the job, fatigue among shift workers, and have raised production efficiency in various industries.

(A) fatigue among shift workers, and have raised

(B) fatigue among shift workers, and raised

(C) and fatigue among shift workers while raising

(D) lowered fatigue among shift workers, and raised（C）

(E) and fatigue among shift workers was lowered while raising

此选项用时态强制使raise与前面reduce平行，怎么就produce awkward and unclear sentences了？请NN解答

作者: chenjm    时间: 2005-6-11 15:44

顶下

作者: weichenli    时间: 2005-8-22 13:48
以下是引用billion在2005-3-30 22:19:00的发言：

对A仍有疑问：
语法书上说：并列结构有时可全用逗号，在修辞色彩上给人以紧张、急促、明快、利落的感觉。例：
Individuals are less troubled by feelings of guilt when they share responsibility for killings with a group - a street gang, lynch mob, terrorist organization.


Recently implemented “shift-work equations” based on studies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness, sleeping on the job, fatigue among shift workers, and have raised production efficiency in various industries.


(A) fatigue among shift workers, and have raised


(B) fatigue among shift workers, and raised


(C) and fatigue among shift workers while raising


(D) lowered fatigue among shift workers, and raised（C）


(E) and fatigue among shift workers was lowered while raising


此选项用时态强制使raise与前面reduce平行，怎么就produce awkward and unclear sentences了？请NN解答




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只是我的是关于 DE OG 解释说不加AND是错的...


I thought "and" linking a parallel structure sometimes can be omitted if the two that "and" is linking together express same importance in the sentence...therefore the OG explanation about DE saying DE fail to use "and" to introduce the last item in the list, which is sleeping in these constructions..is contradicted to another OG's question (sorry can't find exact number now)


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Please HELP!!

作者: weichenli    时间: 2005-9-22 14:24

up up

作者: weichenli    时间: 2005-9-29 13:20

好像无解了阿~~~似乎不释有人可以解释的


或者简单的说, 在这个CASE 理不加AND 的确会照成ambiguity?\


干脆就照OG的讲了, 别再钻了

作者: hyte    时间: 2006-3-9 00:05
以下是引用weichenli在2005-8-22 13:48:00的发言：



先给你鼓励鼓励, 因为有人跟我有大同小异的问题..http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=23&id=59052&star=1#1206013


只是我的是关于 DE OG 解释说不加AND是错的...


I thought "and" linking a parallel structure sometimes can be omitted if the two that "and" is linking together express same importance in the sentence...therefore the OG explanation about DE saying DE fail to use "and" to introduce the last item in the list, which is sleeping in these constructions..is contradicted to another OG's question (sorry can't find exact number now)


--a separate, required course


Please HELP!!


og說D的補全應該是：Recently implemented "shift-work equations" based on studies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness, and sleeping on the job, lowered fatigue among shift workers, and raised production efficiency in various industries. (同顏色的互相平行）　

E的補全是：　Recently implemented "shift-work equations" based on studies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness, and sleeping on the job,and fatigue among shift workers was lowered while raising production efficiency in various industries. (E選項後半段的and fatigue...沒有平行的對象！）
作者: sunnysmell    时间: 2006-4-18 22:38
I still can not find the error in D. Just diffrent dividing, should not affect the meaning.
作者: sunnysmell    时间: 2006-4-18 22:51

found it here, agree!


from lyle:


我觉得，根据逻辑意思，"sickness", "sleeping on the job", 和"fatigue among shift workers"都是"shift-work equations"导致的结果，而且都是reduced的宾语。所以，1. 没必要用and把他们分成两个独立的句子。2. lower跟reduced意思重复。


OG中“In E, while raising has no logical referent, producing only the absurd statement that fatigue has raised efficiency.”，我的理解是：因为E中，and后面的句子是一个独立句，所以while从句是修饰and后面的主句的，while从句的逻辑主语应该跟主句的逻辑主语相同。但主句没出现逻辑主语，所以会造成好像主语是fatigue的歧义。


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作者: huangyh03    时间: 2007-11-7 11:45
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作者: isobelwei    时间: 2010-8-18 22:58
这道题的lower和reduced语义重复了吧~ 所以不能选D E 啊
作者: Vivian1091    时间: 2013-7-13 22:08
一开始也觉得D挺顺眼，后来仔细想了下，贴下分析：
（D）-- 的句子
Recently implemented "shift-work equations" based on studies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness, sleeping on the job,  lowered fatigue among shift workers, and raised  production efficiency in various industries.
红色部分并列
错误分析：
1. 如上三个动词大平行，sickness 和 sleeping 小平行，逗号不一定需要，但是and 一定需要的；【曼哈顿：两个及两个以上成分并列，最后那个一定要加and】（这个理由足够充足 排除掉这个选项了）
2. 而且这里 三个动词 并列 reduce 和lower 明显意思一样么，合并起来会更好；

3. 还有一点，我自己也不太清楚，就是 完成时的并列 能不能省略 have，或者说 完成时 能不能和 过去式 并列。
如： 上面 的结构是， have reduced A, lowered B, raised C.
应该理解为   have reduced A,（have） lowered B, （have）raised C.的省略
还是理解为   一个完成时 和两个过去式的并列？

求解答
作者: 墩墩大人    时间: 2013-8-1 09:44
个人理解—while仅仅是为了将后巷和前项区别开来。
在百度文库摘取一部分可能适用的语法点：
while后的从句谓语动词只能是延续性动词，强调主从句的两个动词同时发生；while也可作并列连词，表示两个动作的对比，译为“而”“然而”。as则表示两个变化中的动作的同时性，译为“一边…一边…”。（题中；一边降低；一边提高）
1.While his mother was cooking in the kitchen，the boy fell asleep in the chair.
(在一个延续动作过程中发生另一个动作)
2.He hurried home，looking behind as he went. 他匆匆回家，边走边往后看（这个和句子里面用法类似）

正确句子可以这么翻译！！！！！！！！
正确句子：
Recently implemented "shift-work equations"based onstudies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness,sleeping on the job,and fatigue among shiftworkers while raisingproduction efficiency in various industries.
最近，实施基于人类睡眠周期倒班制度一边减少了疾病，工作时间睡觉和倒班工人的疲劳，一边增加了不同产业产业的生产积极性。
作者: YvaineDing    时间: 2014-5-14 12:46
while作为强调两个动作同时发生的时候，前后的结构需要一致么？have reduced...while raising... 前后不一致，这个应该怎么解释呢?跪求nn帮忙



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