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作者: stucash    时间: 2010-2-7 05:42
标题: 大全68....after+N到底对不对???
After the Colonial period’s 50 percent mortality rate, life expectancy improved for children, but as late as the nineteenth century about one child in three died before reaching the age of six.

(A) After the Colonial period’s 50 percent mortality rate, life expectancy improved for children, but


(B) Even though children’s life expectancy, which improved over the Colonial period’s 50 percent mortality rate,



(C) Although life expectancy for children improved after the Colonial period, during which the mortality rate was 50 percent,



(D) While there was an improvement in life expectancy for children after the 50 percent mortality rate of the Colonial period, stillC



(E) Despite children’s life expectancy improvement from the Colonial period’s 50 percent mortality rate

牛们在大全注释里只留下了"after rate 错"这个密码, 至今还不知道藏着什么秘密....到底哪错呢?.....两个问题:

1. 之前坛子里有人问过after+N存不存在逻辑主语的问题, 那么到底存不存在呀?
2. 这里after rate到底错在哪呢?

作者: lxw19    时间: 2010-2-7 22:41
这里应该是想表达After+period,而不是rate吧,个人观点,,等待NN
作者: stucash    时间: 2010-2-7 22:54
真的非常非常谢谢你! 要是需要我的时候发个消息就OK.哈哈.

我自己是觉得 expectancy improved after rate, 逻辑不对, after后面应该跟句子..
作者: lxw19    时间: 2010-2-7 23:06
真的非常非常谢谢你! 要是需要我的时候发个消息就OK.哈哈.

我自己是觉得 expectancy improved after rate, 逻辑不对, after后面应该跟句子..
-- by 会员 stucash (2010/2/7 22:54:56)

呵呵,好的,大家互相帮助。。
作者: zxkingsey    时间: 2010-2-8 00:08
从逻辑意思上来看:你不能说是在rate之后,life expectancy 提高了,这里不存在先后顺序。而且从后面的转折来看but as late as the nineteenth century ,可以知道是两个不同时期内life expectancy 的比较。
关于after的用法,我给粘贴longman,你可以看一下,不是简单的可不可以接名词的问题:
1 when a particular event or time has happened, or when someone has done something [≠ before]:

After the war many soldiers stayed in France.

I go swimming every day after work.

Do you believe in life after death?

After you'd called the police, what did you do?

2 days/3 weeks etc after (something)

Ten years after he bought the painting, Carswell discovered that it was a fake.

the day/week/year etc after (something) (=the next day, week etc)

His car was outside your house the morning after Bob's engagement party.

Not long after the wedding, his wife became ill.

2 when a particular amount of time has passed [≠ before]:
After 10 minutes remove the cake from the oven.

3 following someone or something else in a list or a piece or writing, or in order of importance:

The date should be written after the address.

After football, tennis is my favourite sport.

4 American EnglishTMC used when telling the time to say how many minutes have passed since a particular hour [= past British English]
The movie starts at a quarter (=fifteen minutes) after seven.

He's worked in that same office week after week, year after year, since he was 18.
6
a) following someone in order to stop or speak to them:

I heard someone running after me, and a voice called my name.
b) in the direction of someone who has just left:

Harry stood in the doorway gazing after her.
7 when someone has left a place or has finished doing something:

I spend all day cleaning up after the kids.

8 because of something that happened earlier:
I'm not surprised he walked out, after the way she treated him.

9 in spite of something that was done in the past:
How can you treat me like this after all I've done for you?

10 when you have passed a particular place or travelled a certain distance along a road:

After a mile you will come to a crossroads.

11be after somebody/something
a) to be looking for someone or something:

'Were you after anything in particular?' 'No, we're just looking.'
b) informal to want to have something that belongs to someone else:
I think Chris is after my job.
作者: stucash    时间: 2010-2-8 00:30
谢谢大侠!比较清晰了!
作者: zxkingsey    时间: 2010-2-8 00:31
谢谢大侠!比较清晰了!
-- by 会员 stucash (2010/2/8 0:30:06)

呵呵  不是大侠啦
作者: gtr    时间: 2010-2-8 01:35
After the Colonial period’s 50 percent mortality rate, life expectancy improved for children, but as late as the nineteenth century about one child in three died before reaching the age of six.

(A) After the Colonial period’s 50 percent mortality rate, life expectancy improved for children, but


(B) Even though children’s life expectancy, which improved over the Colonial period’s 50 percent mortality rate,



(C) Although life expectancy for children improved after the Colonial period, during which the mortality rate was 50 percent,



(D) While there was an improvement in life expectancy for children after the 50 percent mortality rate of the Colonial period, stillC



(E) Despite children’s life expectancy improvement from the Colonial period’s 50 percent mortality rate

牛们在大全注释里只留下了"after rate 错"这个密码, 至今还不知道藏着什么秘密....到底哪错呢?.....两个问题:

1. 之前坛子里有人问过after+N存不存在逻辑主语的问题, 那么到底存不存在呀?
2. 这里after rate到底错在哪呢?
-- by 会员 stucash (2010/2/7 5:42:27)

A简化了就是 after mortality rate, life expectancy improved。逻辑上怎么都说不通啊。
作者: stucash    时间: 2010-2-8 02:31
恩,是的我也是这么认为的。。现在看来就是逻辑吧。。哈哈。。谢谢啦。
作者: aeoluseros    时间: 2010-2-9 03:25
恩,关键是after后面要接一个时间点/时间间隔,来表达主句的发生时间。
after可以做连词也可以做介词。
作者: stucash    时间: 2010-2-9 04:21
恩恩,谢谢版主!




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