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作者: 飞行2010    时间: 2010-1-30 16:55
标题: OG12 108没人问过
108. authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

C.children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.

我选的是C,答案是A.我觉得C直接说孩子的什么什么东西会更好。请大牛指点。谢谢。
作者: bioalwayshuo    时间: 2010-1-30 23:36
being permissive对我而言是个硬伤。are前的逗号没有必要吧。be responsibly independent中为什么用be呢?而且C的句子中心发生了转移,由家长为主体,变为了孩子为主体。C的问题太多了啊。
作者: Jasonhere    时间: 2010-3-10 22:34
不定式的to要省就一起省(除了第一个),不然每一个都要有

C中,...are the more likely to be self-confi dent, (to)have a high self-esteem, and to
be responsibly independent as adolescents

缺少了括号中的to
作者: Jasonhere    时间: 2010-3-10 22:35
发重复了,编辑掉
作者: kunhou    时间: 2010-3-11 13:35
支持一楼,c选项的问题不少。
children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.
rather than这个说法在这儿用的时候,后面的部分应该和前面的authoritative并列。其次,整个句子看起来,比a罗嗦许多。
作者: venus2elva    时间: 2010-3-11 20:08
C主语改变了,句子中心改变,而且很罗嗦。
作者: JayNicholas    时间: 2010-3-11 22:08
LZ能方便把全题都贴出来么  汗。。。
作者: Eileenl    时间: 2010-3-12 20:18
permissive 前的being貌似也没必要吧
作者: EmmaWangNJU    时间: 2010-3-13 12:43
樓主選的答案,第一眼看到“when they are an adolescent.” 就直接排除好了。。。
作者: fansail    时间: 2010-9-27 09:47
Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents
变成了孩子和父母比较
可能要改成children of AP, rather than of PP




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