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作者: poppy9696    时间: 2010-1-10 07:18
标题: 请教 GWD4-2
Q17: GWD-4-2
In Greek theology the supreme being was Esaugetu Emissee (Master of Breath), who dwelt in an upper realm in which the sky was the floor, and who had the power to give and to take away the breath of life.

A.    in which the sky was the floor, and who had the power to give and to take
B.    where the sky was the floor, having the power to give and to take
C.    whose floor was the sky, and who has the power of giving and of taking
D.    in which the sky was the floor, with the power of giving and taking
E.    whose floor was the sky, having the power to give and take

答案是A。 为什么啊? 谢谢了!
作者: wynn123    时间: 2010-1-10 09:52
因为前后平行啊,who dwelt in an upper realm与who had the power平行,to give 和to take也平行啊。
作者: zylrt    时间: 2010-1-10 09:54
Q17: GWD-4-2
In Greek theology the supreme being was Esaugetu Emissee (Master of Breath), who dwelt in an upper realm

in which the sky was the floor, and who had the power to give and to take away the breath of life.

A.    in which the sky was the floor, and who had the power to give and to take
B.    where the sky was the floor, having the power to give and to take
C.    whose floor was the sky, and who has the power of giving and of taking
D.    in which the sky was the floor, with the power of giving and taking
E.    whose floor was the sky, having the power to give and take

答案是A。 为什么啊? 谢谢了!
-- by 会员 poppy9696 (2010/1/10 7:18:50)



首先B选项,having有做后置定语修饰floor的嫌疑,原句当中两个由who引导的定语从句是并列的关系。

C选项不定式表示目的,常用的表达是to do,而不是of doing

D选项把原句的并列关系,变成了从属关系,with引导的独立主格结构

E选项同B,having的作用问题

正确的句子就是A,in which 引导的是非限定性定语从句修饰realm,两个who引导的定语从句并列。
作者: poppy9696    时间: 2010-1-10 10:47
因为前后平行啊,who dwelt in an upper realm与who had the power平行,to give 和to take也平行啊。
-- by 会员 wynn123 (2010/1/10 9:52:28)


这个完全有道理。 我怎么这么不敏感! 汗。
作者: poppy9696    时间: 2010-1-10 10:49
Q17: GWD-4-2
In Greek theology the supreme being was Esaugetu Emissee (Master of Breath), who dwelt in an upper realm

in which the sky was the floor, and who had the power to give and to take away the breath of life.

A.    in which the sky was the floor, and who had the power to give and to take
B.    where the sky was the floor, having the power to give and to take
C.    whose floor was the sky, and who has the power of giving and of taking
D.    in which the sky was the floor, with the power of giving and taking
E.    whose floor was the sky, having the power to give and take

答案是A。 为什么啊? 谢谢了!
-- by 会员 poppy9696 (2010/1/10 7:18:50)



首先B选项,having有做后置定语修饰floor的嫌疑,原句当中两个由who引导的定语从句是并列的关系。

C选项不定式表示目的,常用的表达是to do,而不是of doing

D选项把原句的并列关系,变成了从属关系,with引导的独立主格结构

E选项同B,having的作用问题

正确的句子就是A,in which 引导的是非限定性定语从句修饰realm,两个who引导的定语从句并列。
-- by 会员 zylrt (2010/1/10 9:54:41)


说的都对。

但是楼上的同学讲得对。 用平行马上推出选A.

谢谢大家了!
作者: caoqin1981    时间: 2011-10-1 14:50
D选项把原句的并列关系,变成了从属关系,with引导的独立主格结构 ----我不这么认为,with 容易造成描述对象变成就近的FLOOR,而不是希腊神
作者: 聿若涵    时间: 2012-4-21 12:47
Q17: GWD-4-2
In Greek theology the supreme being was Esaugetu Emissee (Master of Breath), who dwelt in an upper realm

in which the sky was the floor, and who had the power to give and to take away the breath of life.

A.    in which the sky was the floor, and who had the power to give and to take
B.    where the sky was the floor, having the power to give and to take
C.    whose floor was the sky, and who has the power of giving and of taking
D.    in which the sky was the floor, with the power of giving and taking
E.    whose floor was the sky, having the power to give and take

答案是A。 为什么啊? 谢谢了!
-- by 会员 poppy9696 (2010/1/10 7:18:50)




首先B选项,having有做后置定语修饰floor的嫌疑,原句当中两个由who引导的定语从句是并列的关系。

C选项不定式表示目的,常用的表达是to do,而不是of doing

D选项把原句的并列关系,变成了从属关系,with引导的独立主格结构

E选项同B,having的作用问题

正确的句子就是A,in which 引导的是非限定性定语从句修饰realm,两个who引导的定语从句并列。
-- by 会员 zylrt (2010/1/10 9:54:41)





这个having 怎么会有嫌疑是修饰floor呢?从逻辑主语的角度来说它应该是修饰句子主语的吧?
作者: easttiger2010    时间: 2012-4-29 14:32
D选项把原句的并列关系,变成了从属关系,with引导的独立主格结构 ----我不这么认为,with 容易造成描述对象变成就近的FLOOR,而不是希腊神
-- by 会员 caoqin1981 (2011/10/1 14:50:30)



有道理,我选了D,汗……
作者: nflsjessie    时间: 2012-11-24 16:50
可是为什么realm用in which修饰呢,前面已经有in the realm了,难道不应该直接用which修饰就可以了吗?我的定语从句大概真心没学好,百思不得其解啊。。求各位大神相助。。
作者: TerraceHo    时间: 2012-11-24 20:56
realm意思是國土、領域,是一個地點名詞。也可以從前面的dwell in(居住)可以看得出來realm表示的是地方。
在定語從句中,先行詞是地點,where=in which。
所以這道題如果僅僅說定從的關係代詞的話,where跟in which都是對的。

另,表示時間的時候,when=in which (from manhattan)

希望能幫到你啦^^
作者: xushi19911011    时间: 2013-5-16 20:52
TerraceHo 发表于 2012-11-24 20:56
realm意思是國土、領域,是一個地點名詞。也可以從前面的dwell in(居住)可以看得出來realm表示的是地方。 ...

但是曼哈顿上不是这么说的吗

where modify a noun place, such as area, site, country or Nevada;cannot modify a "metaphorical" place, such as condition, situation, case, circumstances,or arrangement(use in which).

具体地点用where,虚拟的地方(情况等)用in which
这地方很明显是具体地点啊,虽然是神的地方的说。。。。但是说天空当地板了啥的
所以肯定是具体地点啊,所以应该用where啊

求解释。。。
作者: stevenisgenius    时间: 2013-6-25 15:25
xushi19911011 发表于 2013-5-16 20:52
但是曼哈顿上不是这么说的吗

where modify a noun place, such as area, site, country or Nevada;canno ...

正如你所言,与in which相比where更加specific
在这个例子中,who dwelt in an upper realm where the sky was the floor 可以理解为ee居住在一个以天空为地板的realm里边,意思是realm里面的某个地方是以天空为地板。
而原文本意应是强调realm的characteristic是the sky was the floor,所以应该用who dwelt in an upper realm in which the sky was the floor, 强调realm的特点。
其次,b中having the power用的不好。
作者: awareness1988    时间: 2013-7-18 05:39
stevenisgenius 发表于 2013-6-25 15:25
正如你所言,与in which相比where更加specific
在这个例子中,who dwelt in an upper realm where the sky ...

这个解释是最合理的~谢谢
作者: woody8912    时间: 2013-9-16 15:09
聿若涵 发表于 2012-4-21 12:47
Q17: GWD-4-2In Greek theology the supreme being was Esaugetu Emissee (Master of Breath), who d ...

同感,having应该修饰前面的一句话才对。
作者: Dreamout    时间: 2017-4-15 15:46
xushi19911011 发表于 2013-5-16 20:52
但是曼哈顿上不是这么说的吗

where modify a noun place, such as area, site, country or Nevada;canno ...

另外,这里说的是where修饰具体地方不可以修饰虚拟地方,没有说In which只能修饰虚拟地方。
作者: lordvictoryang    时间: 2017-12-4 14:41
这道题的having不能修饰floor,这是一个常见的误区。希望后面的读者不要被误导。
B选项中的having the power to give修饰的正是前句的主语who,也就是EE神,从修辞手法上来讲是没有任何问题的,但问题在于having the power to give与前句的who dwell in an upper realm并没有解释或者导致等逻辑关系,正确的关系应该是并列,这道题真正要考察的点是dwell in upper realm和 have the power to give之间的逻辑关系,或者说what is the real intended meaning.
给一道正确的范例:
The moth is critical food resource for grizzle bears, which over turn rocks to find the insects, consuming as many as 40,000 per bear a single day. 原句有删减
这句话中,如果有一个选项为The moth is critical food resource for grizzle bears, which over turn rocks to find the insects, and which consume as many as 40,000 per bear a single day. 修饰的成分没有错,但后面turn rocks to find the insects和consume 40,000之间的逻辑关系为并列确实不妥。
作者: 必输山庄    时间: 2018-9-12 03:07
lordvictoryang 发表于 2017-12-4 14:41
这道题的having不能修饰floor,这是一个常见的误区。希望后面的读者不要被误导。
B选项中的having the powe ...

同意!               
作者: Thisis呱呱小    时间: 2020-4-18 22:00
lordvictoryang 发表于 2017-12-4 14:41
这道题的having不能修饰floor,这是一个常见的误区。希望后面的读者不要被误导。
B选项中的having the powe ...

精华!总结的很好,谢谢你!
作者: W...    时间: 2021-6-4 15:49
lordvictoryang 发表于 2017-12-4 14:41
这道题的having不能修饰floor,这是一个常见的误区。希望后面的读者不要被误导。
B选项中的having the powe ...

感谢分享!   




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