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标题: 【求助】GWD-6-Q32 两个答案的比较 [打印本页]

作者: snail007 时间: 2009-12-20 00:45
标题: 【求助】GWD-6-Q32 两个答案的比较

At the annual stockholders meeting, investors heard apresentation on the numerous challenges facing the company, including amongthem the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit andthe declining sales for the company’s powerful microprocessor chip.

A. including among them the threat from arival’s multibillion-dollar patentinfringement suit and the declining sales for

B. which includes the threat of a rival’smultibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of

C. included among these the threat from arival’s multibillion-dollar patentinfringement suit as well as a decline insales for

D. among them the threat of a rival’smultibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of

E. among these the threat from a rival’smultibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as the decline in salesfor

D 中的 among...在句子中做什么成分

比较A和D， A唯一不好的地方是the declining sales for 。。。
可是用including 是不是更好些？

作者: Bourne_NY 时间: 2009-12-20 19:56
D. among them ……引导一个伴随状语，表达的是一个句子的意思，但使用的是一个非句子结构。

A中including among them 的表达方式重复冗余。

作者: snail007 时间: 2009-12-20 22:45
谢谢！！

D. among them ……引导一个伴随状语，表达的是一个句子的意思，但使用的是一个非句子结构。

A中including among them 的表达方式重复冗余。

-- by 会员 Bourne_NY (2009/12/20 19:56:56)

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