The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950
million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
(A) million, which is part of a deal that will make
(B) million, a part of a deal that makes
* a part of a deal 作为同位语没有指代对象； makes时态与主句将来时不一致
(C) million, part of a deal making
* part of a deal 作为同位语没有指代对象； making修饰deal 不知道对不对，但感觉上从句更能表达出时态
(D) million as a part of a deal to make
* d放回原句，提炼句子主干：it （computer company） will purchase division to make it (computer company) the largest manufacturer. 改变了原句的意思。 原句是说 a deal makes it (computer company) the largest manufacturer.
(E) million as part of a deal that will make
* as + 短语作状语。 that引导deal的同位语从句。 will make与主句时态一直。
oma:E
这道题我真是一点思路也没有……我觉得A肯定是错的。which指代不能指代一句话嘛。然后 b---e就不会了！各位高人，请指教！！！万分感谢！！！
-- by 会员 cynthia627 (2009/11/30 19:37:32)