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作者: 小虾头 时间: 2009-10-27 14:07
标题: prep sc 语法笔记＃9 求助
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Based
on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to
weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess
Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's
father, and giants.

(A)
Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women
collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress

(B)
Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women had
collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which to dress

(C)
According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated
to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress

(D)
Records from ancient Athens indicate that each year young Athenian women
collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which they dressed

(E)
Records from ancient Athens indicate each year young Athenian women had
collaborated to weave a new woolen robe for dressing

(A)
young Athenian women作为Based on…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑; 未划线部分的and that从语法上跟that they used…平行,共同修饰a new
woolen robe, 不符合逻辑.

(B)
逻辑主语错误;未划线部分的and that没有并行的对象; 关系代词which后应该接句子,

(D)
正确,句首没有使用分词短语,有效的避免的逻辑主语问题;indicate that…and that构成了宾语从句的并行结构

(E)
未划线部分的and that没有平行的对象;indicate that的that不能省略;for doing表示目的不及to do有效.

其他都懂，就是不懂关于c选项的解释，为什么young Athenian women作为According to…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑？？我觉得这个主语没问题阿

谢谢

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作者: terryindygo 时间: 2010-1-9 14:23
同问，我觉得C没错啊

作者: zylrt 时间: 2010-1-9 20:26
C.According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress...
分词短语在句首，逻辑主语等于句子的主语。
according to这个动作是由each year young Athenian发出的么？显然不是
而是根据这个records from ancient Athens，知道了each year young Athenian...的活动。所以这个题上来就可以把A/B/C三个选项都排除了

作者: sabrinazhang 时间: 2010-1-9 20:41
依照我复习的资料等，我得出一个结论，LZ可以借鉴，但是我目前是这样的搜集，不晓得是不是100%正确，我认为BASED ON，ACCORDING TO的逻辑主语应该都是物品，而不是人，（目前我遇到的题是这样的
后面那个that很明显不能与前面的定语从句并列，并且前面应该用dress with而不是dress

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作者: shallylunn 时间: 2011-5-3 13:29
同问！同样是老prep的语法，第31题的正确答案就是
According to some economists, the July decrease in unemployment to the lowest level in two years suggests that the gradual improvement in the job market is continuing.

虽然这个题里according to的部分并没有纳入划线部分，但我觉得这种表达应该是没有问题的。从习惯上来说，过去写文章或者做题，也没有觉得according to后面的部分是accord的主语，一般都是根据资料得到的具体内容。

作者: IVYDOUMOHAN 时间: 2013-5-26 22:22
呃。。。我想问为什么C中and that 与前面的THAT平行，不和逻辑，是因为ROPE重复了？

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