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作者: sunjin1988    时间: 2009-10-19 22:03
标题: GWD 22 争议题 等你解决

      Under high pressure and intense heat, graphite, the most stable form of pure carbon, 

changes into the substance commonly referred to as diamond and remaining this way whether or not the heat and pressure are removed.

A. remaining this way whether or not

B. remaining like that even as

C. remaining as such whether or not

D. remains in this way although

E  remains thus even when

这题有争议 有说D 有的说E 到底选什么啊????


[此贴子已经被作者于2009/10/19 22:24:12编辑过]

作者: renxian    时间: 2009-10-19 22:21

划线在哪啊?题都看不懂!


作者: sunjin1988    时间: 2009-10-19 22:25
好了 我又编辑下了  LS的签名很好啊 呵呵 很鼓励人
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作者: serendipityh    时间: 2009-10-19 22:37
晕! 刚才有乱码. 修改一下
这个题我很早就在国外网站回答过. 我选E
(引自他人帖子)理由1: in this way 的意思:"in this way" can refer only to the MANNER IN WHICH AN EVENT OR ACTION OCCURS OR IS PERFORMED.
it
CANNOT refer to the physical state of something. for instance, in the
above example, you CANNOT use "in this way" to refer to the butterfly
stage.
(以下是我的一些理由)理由2:我在字典里找到的句子:It works thus: A householder dies, alas.
Under
high pressure and intense heat, graphite, the most stable form of pure
carbon, changes into diamond and remains diamond even when the heat and
pressure are taken away.(这句是nytimes的句子, 尽管是nytimes 的句子,但也不能轻言正确)
理由3: thus 的其中的一个意思可以表示"in this way", thus 是副词, 副词thus修饰动词remain.
理由4:逻辑意思:
D:
Under high pressure and intense heat, graphite changes into the
substance commonly referred to as diamond and remains in this way although the heat and pressure are removed.
意思自相矛盾, 在高压高热的情况下,  graphite changes...并且尽管热量和压力被移除了,还是这样
到底移除没??? although the heat and pressure are removed 表示现在被移除了.
E: Under high pressure and intense heat, graphite changes into the substance commonly referred to as diamond and remains thus even when the heat and pressure are removed.
在压力和热下, graphite changes , 并且 甚至当..(表明问题上升到另一情况, 而D矛盾)
理由5(可忽略不计) E 形式比D简单
而且我还想补充点小细节: thus 有点表示总体情况状态
而in this way 感觉, 以某种方式做某事, change sth in this way
举个例子吧The drugs didn't seem to affect Anna in the same way .
I find it easier to work in this way
没发现in this way 和动词有关联吗? 你再对比句中的.
[此贴子已经被作者于2009/10/19 22:38:38编辑过]

作者: renxian    时间: 2009-10-19 23:07
我认为选E,原题没有转折although得语气。还有,D选项强调的是graphite changes into the substance,因为although 强调的就是后者。而E强调的是温度是否被移除,两者强调的重点不同,而原文是强调温度是否移除,所以选E
作者: sunjin1988    时间: 2009-10-19 23:14
以下是引用serendipityh在2009/10/19 22:37:00的发言:
晕! 刚才有乱码. 修改一下
这个题我很早就在国外网站回答过. 我选E
(引自他人帖子)理由1: in this way 的意思:"in this way" can refer only to the MANNER IN WHICH AN EVENT OR ACTION OCCURS OR IS PERFORMED.
it
CANNOT refer to the physical state of something. for instance, in the
above example, you CANNOT use "in this way" to refer to the butterfly
stage.
(以下是我的一些理由)理由2:我在字典里找到的句子:It works thus: A householder dies, alas.
Under
high pressure and intense heat, graphite, the most stable form of pure
carbon, changes into diamond and remains diamond even when the heat and
pressure are taken away.(这句是nytimes的句子, 尽管是nytimes 的句子,但也不能轻言正确)
理由3: thus 的其中的一个意思可以表示"in this way", thus 是副词, 副词thus修饰动词remain.
理由4:逻辑意思:
D:
Under high pressure and intense heat, graphite changes into the
substance commonly referred to as diamond and remains in this way although the heat and pressure are removed.
意思自相矛盾, 在高压高热的情况下,  graphite changes...并且尽管热量和压力被移除了,还是这样
到底移除没??? although the heat and pressure are removed 表示现在被移除了.
E: Under high pressure and intense heat, graphite changes into the substance commonly referred to as diamond and remains thus even when the heat and pressure are removed.
在压力和热下, graphite changes , 并且 甚至当..(表明问题上升到另一情况, 而D矛盾)
理由5(可忽略不计) E 形式比D简单
而且我还想补充点小细节: thus 有点表示总体情况状态
而in this way 感觉, 以某种方式做某事, change sth in this way
举个例子吧The drugs didn't seem to affect Anna in the same way .
I find it easier to work in this way
没发现in this way 和动词有关联吗? 你再对比句中的.

很好的理由 谢谢MM


作者: mongmong    时间: 2011-5-15 22:44
晕! 刚才有乱码. 修改一下
这个题我很早就在国外网站回答过. 我选E
(引自他人帖子)理由1: in this way 的意思:"in this way" can refer only to the MANNER IN WHICH AN EVENT OR ACTION OCCURS OR IS PERFORMED.
it
CANNOT refer to the physical state of something. for instance, in the
above example, you CANNOT use "in this way" to refer to the butterfly
stage.
(以下是我的一些理由)理由2:我在字典里找到的句子:It works thus: A householder dies, alas.
Under
high pressure and intense heat, graphite, the most stable form of pure
carbon, changes into diamond and remains diamond even when the heat and
pressure are taken away.(这句是nytimes的句子, 尽管是nytimes 的句子,但也不能轻言正确)
理由3: thus 的其中的一个意思可以表示"in this way", thus 是副词, 副词thus修饰动词remain.
理由4:逻辑意思:
D:
Under high pressure and intense heat, graphite changes into the
substance commonly referred to as diamond and remains in this way although the heat and pressure are removed.
意思自相矛盾, 在高压高热的情况下,  graphite changes...并且尽管热量和压力被移除了,还是这样
到底移除没??? although the heat and pressure are removed 表示现在被移除了.
E: Under high pressure and intense heat, graphite changes into the substance commonly referred to as diamond and remains thus even when the heat and pressure are removed.
在压力和热下, graphite changes , 并且 甚至当..(表明问题上升到另一情况, 而D矛盾)
理由5(可忽略不计) E 形式比D简单
而且我还想补充点小细节: thus 有点表示总体情况状态
而in this way 感觉, 以某种方式做某事, change sth in this way
举个例子吧The drugs didn't seem to affect Anna in the same way .
I find it easier to work in this way
没发现in this way 和动词有关联吗? 你再对比句中的.
[此贴子已经被作者于2009/10/19 22:38:38编辑过]

-- by 会员 serendipityh (2009/10/19 22:37:00)

经典
作者: mizuki77    时间: 2011-8-20 12:04
只一点 GMAC不认可when引导条件状语从句的方式 而同时这里又没有时间状语引导的根据,由前后句平行原则
故此 D更好
作者: wendydou    时间: 2012-9-2 12:00
in this way  只能说是一种方式,而不是一种状态啊··谢谢MM··
作者: hopscotch123    时间: 2013-8-9 10:49
http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/sc-tricky-one-graphite-to-diamond-please-help-t7182.html
作者: lockewang    时间: 2013-9-7 17:01
大牛Ron的解释很好
作者: waterblue01    时间: 2015-8-9 20:03
lockewang 发表于 2013-9-7 17:01
大牛Ron的解释很好

看不到了,能贴一下么?

作者: 我要攻下GMAT!    时间: 2015-12-31 03:44
lockewang 发表于 2013-9-7 17:01
大牛Ron的解释很好

Ron大神的帖子看不到了 貌似被删掉了
作者: newconcept123    时间: 2016-1-2 19:03
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/excerpt-from-ny-times-t4097.html
作者: DY567    时间: 2016-2-24 09:49
Under high pressure and intense heat, graphite, the most stable form of pure carbon, changes into the substance commonly referred to as diamond and remaining this way whether or not the heat and pressure are removed.

A. remaining this way whether or not
B. remaining like that even as
C. remaining as such whether or not
D. remains in this way although
E  remains thus even when

ABC很好排除,如何区分DE?来看800分大神RON的解释:
"remains thus" would [size=14.0084px]possibly be fine. it sounds a bit stilted and archaic, but i've certainly seen that kind of construction before.
however, it's also quite possible that the gmat will deride that sort of construction as wordy / awkward / unclear (especially "unclear"; the gmat requires a [size=14.0084px]very high standard of precision in SC sentences).
so, the jury is out until we see evidence one way or the other on an official problem.


"in this way" would NOT be fine, because no "way" has been described. in fact, no adverb is present at all to be properly parallel to "in this way" (an adverbial construction); diamond is most certainly not a "way" of doing anything.

作者: 麦与法    时间: 2016-10-28 23:37
DY567 发表于 2016-2-24 09:49
Under high pressure and intense heat, graphite, the most stable form of pure carbon, changes into th ...

Mark一下!               
作者: 御寒    时间: 2016-11-22 10:14
DY567 发表于 2016-2-24 09:49
Under high pressure and intense heat, graphite, the most stable form of pure carbon, changes into th ...

同意!               
作者: 御寒    时间: 2016-11-22 10:20
并且D选项,Remain本身就已经有保持状态的含义了,就算in this way正确,remain和in this way的含义也重复了吧
作者: xiaobishi    时间: 2017-9-1 16:02
remain in this way although the heat and pressure are removed
尽管热和压力被去除也会保持这种状态,表示热和压力已经去掉了(之后),宝石依旧是宝石,但是文章中并没有提到热已经去掉还是没有去掉。热的状态或者压力已经不存在了。
remain thus even when the heat and pressure are removed
即使当热和压力被去除时也是如此,这个就是条件了,此时即使热和压力没有去掉,也是OK的,当时当去掉的也不影响。显然比上面更合理一些。比如在有些地方自然形成的情况下,可能一直是保持热的状态。
作者: 淇水过过过    时间: 2017-9-30 20:44
serendipityh 发表于 2009-10-19 22:37
晕! 刚才有乱码. 修改一下这个题我很早就在国外网站回答过. 我选E(引自他人帖子)理由1: in this way 的意思 ...

Mark一下!               




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